Dragon Warriors: The Sunflower of Destiny

After all, this is a book written by Ling Mo, so don't worry about the writing, it must be very good. The main plot is sweet and not sad. Although the extra ending is B, the character setting and plot direction are very interesting.

The writing is okay, but the main emotional line is too fast. It cuts right in and is a bit sudden. The extra settings are very poignant, but the ancient extras are a bit collapsed. The extra settings in ancient times are a bit unreasonable, and the colloquialism is a bit uncontrolled. To be honest, the settings of the main characters are a bit broken, but it is harmless. Changes will be better. Like the settings of the daily chapters. For example, Kai Feng's character design, the comedy plot is appropriate. It is a bit too prominent when sprinkling sugar. The character of Shaman is a bit too collapsed. She is a strong and brave girl, but I don't really understand her subjective character in the text. It can be improved appropriately. After all, it is a fanfic. It is good to add good concepts and designs. I look forward to greater progress.

In fact, I have very high requirements for reading books, but this one really attracted me. The plot is not sad, it is very sweet, the writing is good, the update speed is not very slow, and most of the comments I posted are answered. Zundu is very good! ! In addition, @lingmo has three other books, all of which are also very good.

It's really super, super pretty! The author's writing style is very good. No matter which pair of CPs, the writing is superb. It not only includes battles, but also intimate interactions and humor. If it gets a perfect score of 100, I will give it a blast!

The emotional lines are very delicate, and each person's character is very distinct and full. Their feelings are not natural, there are temptations, and self-doubts. Unlike ordinary articles, after the confession, there are all kinds of specially sprinkled candies. There are Luo Xiaoyi and Bainuo protecting each other, Dongfang Mo and Lan Tianhua's bickering and shyness, Kai Feng's redemption of Shaman, and a light bulb Zi Yao. The three emotional lines do not appear messy. "It is as if the author is peeping at their happiness at the scene."

Damn, the writing is really good, the plot is not good at all, I can't find a single thorn in my side, Kaiman, Yinuo, Mo Hua, they all interacted brilliantly

Suddenly I found that I have no book reviews. It's good to read. I recommend @lingmo. The other two books are also very good.

Da Da's writing style is very good, every plot is very sweet, highly recommended, and Da Da's update speed is very conscientious. I will follow Da Da Da forever [Adore][Adore][Adore]

I like reading it very much. I haven't found a book that can attract my interest for a long time. The author's writing style is very good. I hope to see the author publish more good books. [Shy] That's it... Can the author urge you? [Love] [Love]

So sweet, so pretty, so teary