Reborn as a Succubus, I Reach the Pinnacle of Life

Not bad, suits my taste. But the plot has too many daily emotions, and the rhythm is not well grasped. You must have one main line, which is promotion. It is precisely because of the huge prospects in the officialdom that your life will be so comfortable and unrestrained. Don't put the cart before the horse. There should be more details in officialdom, otherwise the article will have no depth, no climax, and will have no sense of expectation and appeal to readers. For example, the Sanshui Gang dared to kill the county magistrate, but the results were dealt with briefly; Deputy County Magistrate Wang was the boss in the early stage, and the writing was too witty, but the handling was also briefly touched upon; for such a huge political achievement in the tea industry, the article never returned to this point. This is also my humble opinion. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

Super good actual situation

It's okay, normal

Deduct one star. The male protagonist is too serious and has no sense of empathy. I still prefer diaosi novels.

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