After Passing Through the Book, Long Aotian Suddenly Changed into a Loyal Dog Husband.

I looked at everyone's comments and found that the ones with low comments all felt that they were frustrated in the early stage [face covering] To be honest, I felt the same way, but it felt okay because the protagonist's frustration was very logical. If the villain was really that weak and was slapped in the face all the time in the early stage, the protagonist would not be allowed to go back and forth more than 200 times. The overall drama The relationship is very good, and it doesn't feel very routine, but I personally feel that it can be strengthened a little bit, because the introduction seems to have a kind of dark and crazy feeling. I seem to have forgotten it, but it seems that this feeling is quite heartless [face covering], there is a saying, Jiaojiao and Chi Yan are really real Love, the writing is very good, the overall plot is written very delicately, and I haven't found any flaws that cannot be fixed. Because the writing is very delicate, the overall pace is a bit slow, and the world view is not bad. Except for the protagonist and a few other people, there are not many people described, but because of this, everyone's character is quite good It's unique and distinct, and I feel it's very professionally written. There's definitely no problem with the logic. It's just a little frustrating in the early stage, but it gets better in the later stages. After the protagonist loses his memory, he's not so frustrated anymore, and everything starts to get better. Overall, it's very good. I think the writing is very real, but the villain is too difficult to kill after all.

The first person I met in this direction on this track was not just a novelty, but Jiao Er, he really loves me [sending my heart] and I really like such a firm and secure companion. Personally, I prefer offense and control, but I also love this one very much. I lack words, but I love it all! It has been tied, and I am looking forward to the final ending. This book deserves five stars, so cheers for the author! [Please update]

I read the comments and they all said that I was very frustrated and abused in the early stages. I was scared and hesitated. I was very afraid of this, but in fact the author wrote it very well and it didn't make me feel too uncontrollable or aggrieved in the early stage. Maybe it was because I was always calm in counterattacking when being bullied, just like watching The Clown, so I didn't feel aggrieved at all. The plot is also very compact. I made a firm choice, and I trusted her very much. I never had any doubts after talking about it, and my emotional line was very sweet. He's also very talkative, and there's no such thing as deliberately hiding anything for your own good. Gong really tells Shou everything! Love to the extreme! The plot is also very fast-paced. The attack is really powerful. The proud man of heaven! ! [Sending Hearts]

Overtake! Class! Good! Look! (◍＞◡＜◍) The author's writing style is very good, the characters are also very three-dimensional, and the story's level and rhythm are also super good! Can that fake young master please stop causing trouble? I feel sorry for Xiaochi˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅

The characters are three-dimensional and full of inner drama. Every step makes you laugh and make you sad. The writing style is so good! ! It's a novel, but it has settings and plots that are wild but consistent with reality! It's a true and false young master system, but it also makes every character have brains! The writing style is light-hearted and pleasant, but it also makes people feel the emotional direction of the story! It's a cool article! Not so cool! But it feels so real! ! After more than two hundred cycles, this last time, I saw Tianjiao's love and determination engraved in his bones, heartily. Chizi went from doubt to dependence. He never thought that he was the one who was redeemed. He was kept in the dark by the world but he bravely responded to the love of Tianjiao. Ah, it turns out that this is the destined love. I don't read much novels, but I love all settings and plots. "Mad Dog" will definitely be a hit! ! Waiting for the ending! !

I really like it. The plot and settings are really novel and there are many twists and turns. I was so anxious when the part of the live broadcast was wiped out. It feels really good to watch. It was so shocking to see that the game was born just for Xiao Yan. It looks good. The emotional line of the young couple is also very well written. Yes, I have always been called this. I thought it was strange at first. After reading more and more, I found it a bit funny. It's also a bit cute. I think it's good. It depends on personal preference. I saw that some people don't like it in the comment area, but I like it anyway.

I love you, Daddy. This book is my first time to write a paragraph review on a novel, it made me stay up late during finals week, and it also made me type so many words. Thank you Daddy for bringing them such good things to us. Thank you Xiaochi and Jiaojiao for touching me. Woo woo hoo, I almost cried [almost cried] [almost cried] [almost cried] When Xiaochi wanted to die together, I think there are many details in it that are worth repeating. Sister Yu helped Xiaochi win the public opinion war on her own, and later in the second world, Jiaojiao did not regard herself as a god. Even though she was still worried about the villain Lin, when he became Xu, she did not directly use her identity to get him [Adore][Adore][Adore]. I love the author so much, but I regret that I couldn't appear in a book with Xiaochi and Jiaojiao during the serialization period [cry][cry][cry]

This short story is actually very powerful. Many of the ideas are cutting-edge, and the writing style is also very interesting. Some of the sentences are really interesting. It is really hard to imagine that the male protagonist went back in time more than two hundred times. At first, I thought he was a time traveler. But in the middle, I didn't expect that Gong used the development of science and technology to backtrack to change the trajectory of his life. The last thing that is very powerful is that Gong actually used his strength to create countless subsystems of his own. It's really To realize his second world, but the overall feeling of Shou's existence is weak. I don't feel Shou's growth in the process of fighting his own destiny more than two hundred times. It is more about constantly changing Shou's destiny. And Shou's initiative is a bit low, and I feel that the overall writing of the male protagonist is too awesome, but I think the plot on Tomato is very interesting, and the writing style is very unique (ω)👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Very novel theme and logic! Our pride is really great! Although there are many twists and turns between the two wrinkled little bitter melons, the main plot is not cruel, and the more twists and turns are omitted, so it is still very enjoyable to watch. The emotional line is very sweet, and it is heart-warming to watch the story of going forward for love.

It's good to watch, the plot is always online, and the protagonist has a brain and a mouth. Arrogant, crazy and unexpectedly reliable, a very new magic pill called Long Aotian. Yanyan's character may not be that outstanding. In the early stage, she was already disappointed with the world (she was forced to do nothing), but she would still fight. In the later stage, she was well-raised by pride and became more alive. There were a few chapters in the middle that I almost didn't finish reading. Huo Tianjiao temporarily went to the shielded space to avoid the killing and his body was controlled by the stand-in machine. After that, Chi Yan was left alone and helpless. It made me feel uncomfortable. Huo Tianjiao failed 249 times and couldn't beat Lin Wenyu's system. It really made me feel so powerless. Fortunately, both of them survived in the end and were fine, with a happy ending. [Grass has been planted]

To be honest, I like the setting very much, but it's so frustrating that I have to pretend to like Lin and get scolded all the time. Too uncomfortable

Damn, you must keep writing it [crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy] The two little bitter gourds will get better and better in the future [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's good to read [crying] The big books are very good. Because of Ran Jiayun, I came here to read this novel. It's also very good-looking, but the two little bitter gourds are a bit too bitter [crying] But our Huo Tianjiao really lives up to his name, he is the true pride of heaven, a group of people who have the ability, skill, strategy, dare to think, dare to do, and even crazy. I kept thinking about what kind of ending would be worthy of the hardships they endured, and finally felt that they were lucky to be alive together. The villain really makes people hate him so much. He is really the only one. I have never seen a villain with such a good life [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] After living a good life for our little treasure for more than 20 years as a fake young master, he also has the luck of systematically robbing our little treasure and taking away all his good life after 20 years. And because the consciousness of the world is colluding with him, Goldfinger is very powerful. His system can directly obliterate our Xiaobao and our Jiaojiao, causing our Jiaojiao to restart more than 200 times, more than 200 times of life, just watching his lover go to a certain death over and over again, and he has also exhausted himself in the reincarnations. In the end, he can only use the method of formatting one day at a time to support himself to stay in this world without being obliterated. At first, I was thinking, how can Jiaojiao win because it's always a formatted game? It's obviously a dead end. You must not be discovered by the system to avoid being obliterated. The condition for not being discovered by the system is to be a licking dog for the villain. However, as long as you see Xiaobao Jiaojiao, you will definitely fall in love at first sight. Jiaojiao without memory will definitely not be a licking dog, so he can only be formatted again. But I suddenly discovered something, that is, I have turned a corner. Jiaojiao never thought about being a licking dog from the beginning! He tried out all kinds of information again and again, and every time he guessed his own strategy through the information left to him. In Xiaobao's words, Huo Tianjiao worked really hard. He was really tired in order to give Xiaobao a way to survive and a good ending. And our little treasure is also a little bitter melon pushed by fate. Although he has no memory, he has experienced a helpless life and pain that leads to a dead end more than 200 times, and his youthful spirit has been worn away. Fortunately, Jiaojiao was brave enough to give him and Xiaobao a way to survive. He uses his love brain to argue [laughs and cries] He really loves Xiaobao endlessly. It's beautiful, but too bitter. [Cry]

Wow! ! ! ! ! ! This is true genius, this is true pure love! ! ! ! ! I'm all on fire! I was heartbroken when I first saw it, but not mindless! The plot style is quite good! ! !

I just finished reading the updated chapter and it was a good read😋Although there is always sudden humor, it is essentially the process of two little bitter gourds saving themselves. In my opinion, Chi Yan feels a little guilty because he feels that he cannot help his Jiaojiao. Most of the time, it is Huo Tianjiao who fights against the system. But baby, you are really a very, very good person [crying][crying][crying][crying] I hope happiness will come to this young couple [shy][shy][shy]

It's very beautiful, the setting is very exciting, and you can tell from the introduction that it's not simple. The characters are very three-dimensional and full, and it can be said that I can't help but decide my fate [face covering] Who doesn't like unforgettable love [almost crying] [almost crying]

I thought the reviews were much better, it was very interesting, the plot was out of the ordinary and unconventional, and I didn't read much of the main article before, so it felt weird, but this book didn't feel that way. It was only after I read it that I realized it was the main article, including the ending, and I thought it was great.

I was attracted by the title. I thought it was a mindless and cool article, but after seeing the twists and turns, it is really funny and interesting. The plot is exciting. Jiaojiao is really powerful and super smart, and baby Chi Yan is also smart and strong. He is a tough little grass, and Tongzi in it is also very cute😍I believe that although the novel has ended, their story will continue and the two babies will be happy in the future🎉 (Ji Yunda is super awesome [blowing kiss])

It's really beautiful, the characters are very good, and the middle is quite brain-burning. There are many twists and turns. The most important thing is that it is a two-way rush and a two-way redemption. I love seeing this kind of very strong emotion.

Very pretty, come on

I never write book reviews, but this time I really enjoyed it. I can't get enough of it. Both Tianjiao and Xiaochi are great (ʚ̴̶̷́ .̠ ʚ̴̶̷̥̀ ू) Two little bitter gourds, may they always be happy in the future ꒰ ु-̣̣̣̣̣̥́௰ོ-̣̣̣̣̣̥̀ ू꒱

Big cheers for the author, it's very interesting

The plot is interesting and not a cookie-cutter routine, but the narrative logic is sometimes a little unclear. The pacing is well controlled, but the ending feels a little rushed, but overall it's still very interesting and not boring. The description of the feelings is very comfortable, very pure love, moisturizing everything and silently warming my heart (what the...

It's beautiful. The author's writing is very good. It's interesting and the writing is not embarrassing. [Adoration] The character of the protagonist is also good. The double arrows are very thick. I love thick double arrows. [Blow kiss]

How come no one reads such a beautiful article! ! ! ! !

My naivety was beyond my expectation. I didn't expect this book to take this direction. At first, I thought it was a brainless cookie, but the more I read, the better it looked. I'm late, I'm late. If I caught up with the series, I could still write a few comments to the author, but what I see now is the complete version of Jiaojiao and Brother Chi! Very good! Thanks to Teacher Ji Yun for creating this story! Looking forward to the next book!

Absolutely amazing! The author's writing style and plot are amazing! I really cried after knowing the reason why Jiaojiao traveled through time and was obsessed with developing "CyberLife" [crying][crying][crying] Chi Yan would unthinkingly want to die with a certain Lin for the sake of pride. I really love him so much. When I saw Jiaojiao being wiped out for the first time, I was really caught off guard. Obviously one second Jiaojiao was asking Chi Yan what flavor of ice cream he wanted to eat, and the next second he seamlessly switched to a dog-licking scumbag and was treated roughly... Chichi was really helpless and uncomfortable [almost crying]. He didn't know where Jiaojiao came from, let alone how to find him [crying] [crying] [crying] The person who brought him light and made him feel loved suddenly disappeared. Chichi was in a really bad state at that time [crying] [crying]

It's really, really beautiful. The author is very talented in writing. I like it very much.

It's a good read. The theme of the article is quite new, so I won't spoil it. There are many twists and turns. They are two very cute people. First, he has a character like Long Aotian, and he is also very wealthy, a bit middle-class? If 0, you have a more reserved personality, right? There is a sense of wind in the calmness. Generally speaking, it is very interesting to read, and the plot is quite ups and downs, with twists and turns, which attracts readers' attention.

Wuwuwuwuwu, this is different, this is actually the direction ꒦ິ^꒦ິ I finished reading it in one go. In the past, my impetuous temperament would make me skip reading, but this book tempted me to read it chapter by chapter. Long Aotian is indeed Long Aotian. Many of his actions shocked me (how he can still do this). I feel so bad for Chi Bao. After so many hardships, the two of them are finally fine.