[Murong Jinchu×Xie Jingyan]
After a big battle, Murong Jinchu fell into a deep sleep.
When she was in the God Realm, she was a cold goddess, in charge of life and death in the world.
After arriving in the fairy world, Murong Jinchu thought about where to sleep most comfortably every day.
——Sect Master, the little senior sister is missing again!
——It's okay, I must have found a place to fall asleep again.
Xie Jingyan is the most talented among the new disciples.
Seeing that Murong Jinchu always found some unreliable things in his space bracelet: "Senior Sister, are you sure you can just go out with us?"
Murong Jin first glanced at him: "Of course, I'm a genius!" As a result, he almost locked himself in the formation.
She smiled awkwardly: "Sorry, I chanted the wrong spell, come again!!"
Everyone:! ! !
Reader comments
Emmm, how can I put it, the subject matter is still good, especially the content at the end becomes richer, the rhythm is not bad, and the writing style can also be seen to be gradually getting better, but some of the psychological descriptions are still too blunt, the author needs to work hard [stop]
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The characters here are good, but a little too sloppy, but it's still pretty good.
Emmm, how can I put it, the subject matter is still good, especially the content at the end becomes richer, the rhythm is not bad, and the writing style can also be seen to be gradually getting better, but some of the psychological descriptions are still too blunt, the author needs to work hard [stop]
I hope you will read more and comment more! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] This is my first time writing. If there is anything that needs to be changed, feel free to comment [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
The characters here are good, but a little too sloppy, but it's still pretty good.