Succubus Asylum

After browsing and searching, I found a treasure, brothers, a non-traditional succubus novel. There are traditional plots, but not many. The author has a good command of the combination of meat and vegetables, and he is a good cook [laughs evilly]. In the SCP world view, it is very special to be able to see the same feeling as "Demon King Brave". The rhythm of the story is well grasped, the beginning is very attractive, and it is easy to get into it. Join the bookshelf first to catch up, looking forward to more updates [laughs] BTW, you will be an old fan from now on... Right? [Cool] @ Du Gu Mu Ya

I didn't write my own book review until now that it's finished. This is my first book, full of my personal expressions and reflections. Maybe it's a bit green, after all, I'm still a young person [laughing and crying]. In addition, I feel that the arrangement and connection of my plot are not mature enough, and there are many settings that I want to show that are not detailed because they serve the narrative. How should I put it, the days of writing the book were very fulfilling, and after finishing it, I felt idle and empty for a while. (It feels even harder than the days of Kavin) Every day after get off work, I can't help but open the writing software and want to write something... Not to mention these, thank you very much readers for reading, I hope this book can "come in handy".

The pace is too fast, and a lot of details can be filled in. Many characters can be written in more detail. It can be seen that the author has a lot of ideas. It is a good first book. I feel that it is suitable for adapting into a comic. It will be more similar to Four-Gate Brave or Invincible King of Heroes.

It's beautiful. The author has become obsessed with art and doesn't know what the world is.

Writing about succubus, he is so confident. He uses succubus to break the original inertia and destruction cycle of society, and uses a high-dimensional idea of ​​reading files to design a more complete social system. It does not break or establish, but also avoids the most difficult part of social evolution. The author has used tricks, but it does not affect the quality of the book itself, which is quite good.

Good book, great imagination

It's not bad. I've read Chapter 23 so far. I don't know who the protagonist is. I see that some supporting characters will have CPs. How many couples will appear later? Sorry anchor, I can't stand it anymore, it's so immoral😭

The grand world view and story are very novel Interesting idea, but wouldn't it be too monotonous if almost most of the anomalies are related to succubi? Can you add many other system anomalies, such as the dragon emperor, goddess, immortal cultivation system, etc., It will be rich, real and colorful (*^ω^*), it's not that there is none, but there are too few

It's abstract, but written very logically, and it looks good once you accept the settings.

This book is really well written. Good luck to the author.

The blank space is subtle and artistic. Salute to you, soot-soaked writer.

I'm looking at changing the software.

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I'll give it five stars. Although I don't understand what I'm talking about, it's quite strange.