If I Win the Saint at the Beginning, I Will Conquer All the Worlds.

4 Stars does not represent what I want to say. If I don't believe it, I read a book that I couldn't stand [face covering]. Wang Zengqi wrote that gardenias are "thick and big, and so fragrant that they can't even be brushed off." This is straightforward, observational, tactile, and full of life. What is this book called? This book is called "Lin Yuan said", "Xiao Meng Yu said", "Lin Yuan said again" and "Xiao Meng Yu said again". All advancement depends on dialogue, and all dialogues are shouting. The characters do not need psychological activities, because there is no psychology at all; there is no need for description of the environment, because it is not worth describing at all; there is no need to foreshadow the turning points, because the readers do not deserve to have IQ. When the character opens his mouth, he says "What are you doing?" And "Yes, just do it." It's as if the entire understanding of literature comes from the subtitles of Kuaishou's local short plays. Then talk about feelings. You said this is a "sweet story with a single female protagonist"? Where is the sweetness? Sweet in the kindergarten-level title "Xiao Mengyu Guaiguai"? The sweet thing is that two people shouted each other's names for 200,000 words? A true master of sweet writing knows how to write love with silence, a look, a hesitation, and a subconscious protective action. And what about this book? You put all your feelings into the dialog box, as if two paper figures were standing on an empty stage shouting to each other: "I love you!" What are real feelings? It's dependence, it's the step in front of her that you subconsciously block despite knowing that she can split a mountain with one sword. It's admiration, it's the hand that hangs in the air when you see her frown and want to stretch out your hand to smooth it, but are afraid of being abrupt. It's worry, the kind of anxiety that makes you restless, forgetful about food and drink, and can't even hear the system prompts when she doesn't return even after half a day of burning incense. It's concern, it's because you've just separated and you've already started thinking about what excuses you can use to see her again tomorrow. There is none of these things in this book. It seems that calling someone's name a few times will create a sense of intimacy. "Little Mengyu", "Lin Yuan", "Xiao Mengyu" and "Lin Yuan" are repeated over and over again, just like a student who has just learned to write a composition. He doesn't know how to express the relationship between the characters, so he has to let everyone keep calling each other's name, for fear that the readers will forget who is who. A true master writes about feelings. He doesn't say a word of love in thousands of words, but you can read the raging love between the words. But this book is full of "love", "like" and "touch", but after reading it, your heart is dryer than the desert. Q

It's good to read. Finally, there is a novel about cultivating immortals in which most people are normal people.

I personally feel that it's okay for now and looks pretty good, but I don't know what will happen in the future? I hope the author will not disappoint me [please update]

I support you and urge you to update [sending my heart], but it's a pity that my financial strength does not allow it [face covering]

Yes, yes, it is really heart-pounding at first glance, but it may not be the case in reality. When your heart is integrated into this book, one word is "absolutely"

Super pretty! Please keep up your hard work!

This book is very beautiful

Just watched it and it was great, I hope it will be the same in the future [Like]

Good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking!

The scale is not enough, increase the intensity

Yes, worth recommending

Good book reasonable loli

Fluent and engaging language

Looks good, very good! ! !

Not bad! ! Fascinated

The pace is a bit fast, but you can get used to it

It's okay. Can you give the hero some true friends? Why are most of them enemies?