The Senior Brother Turned into a Girl

At present, it seems to be a light-hearted and daily-oriented novel. The cultivation of immortality is incidental. The character descriptions of other supporting characters have their own characteristics, which is not bad. There is something wrong with the protagonist's character, is he an aboriginal person in the world of cultivating immortals? (If I remember correctly, it doesn't seem to be a time travel or it's not explained) There shouldn't be so many modern characteristics. The irritable straight man suddenly turned into a loli girl. His mentality, daily performance, daily habits, etc. Can't see any of the characteristics of the previous man. The change is too complete, a bit too feminine, and it feels like a time travel Female college (not bad for a novice author, come on! I feel that the author has the talent to write light-hearted daily novels. You can try it, eating, shopping, making friends, treasure hunting, beating monsters to level up, daily life, a relaxed, happy and slow-paced life, and a little excitement occasionally is not bad) Looking forward to the follow-up!

It's my favorite theme and character design, so it's a five-star rating. I personally feel that the main reason that prevents this book from taking off is the narrative method. Usually, for a simple scene, the author will use a lot of words to describe it in detail, and it is filled with a lot of descriptions that feel unnecessary to take up so many words, which makes it a bit tiring to read. The scenes described are very detailed, and I can feel the author's delicate scene and plot conception. However, the actual advancement of the story and the amount of information I gained from reading this text are very small. If I can grasp the advantages of my own delicate scene and plot conception and at the same time subtract my own writing style, taking into account both the amount of information and the delicate description, I feel that this book will not be a hit, and the scores and ratings will not be bad at all.

The writing is excellent, the content is interesting, and the subject matter is not bad. However, the rhythm of the plot is a bit chaotic, and there is no clear outline design. Overall, it's a work worth seeing. If it suits your taste, it's definitely a treasure.

Overall it's pretty good, but there are some issues with reading it. For example, the plot develops in leaps and bounds. As you read, you feel like the story is never finished, and you jump to the next story inexplicably. Then, the description of battle scenes such as secret realms could be better. Of course, if this is mainly daily life, the battle scenes are almost okay, so it is not a big problem. The daily writing is pretty good.

Ahem, this book is very well written, and I enjoyed reading it 🤭 Overall, the whole text is logically coherent, the writing is delicate, and the characters' emotions are real. Please author please update it quickly, it's not enough 🥺

There are a lot of side descriptions or appearance descriptions that feel very female, and at the same time, I especially like to write a little bit of fan-shaped description 😂 It seems okay, but the writing style takes a look at the female author

Great! It's so addictive~ 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

It's a traditional style of writing. It's very good. Just focus on the first few chapters (shame on others, not used to dressing, and menstruation). I'll give you these 5 stars.

Similar to a unit drama, each story is related but not strong and can be watched as a daily

A hundred or more women? 🍉