Hogwarts Illustrated Master

I have a simple method for alchemy. Go to the wild and cast a spell. Gold mines will fly to you. If the magic power is not enough to fly, go to the river and gold sand will fly to you. [Thinking]

Companions do not have to go to the end together. On a certain section of the road, if the other party brings you some happiness, that is enough. I thought it was a boring city, but I met colorful dreams and many beautiful things.

The book is okay, especially the analysis of the original Hermione is very good, but there are too many academic chapters, which makes it a bit wordy, and we can't learn it, right? It is recommended that when writing this kind of fan fiction, it should be more plot-oriented, even if it is an original plot, or write more about daily life.

It's pretty cool, upgrades to become stronger, and has its own creative ideas. He has a bit of an affair with Hermione, but mostly it's a bit OOC. Dismantled the Iron Triangle.

A very novel perspective, although the writing is too detailed and a bit verbose.

I read it in one sitting. This book is pretty good. It's daily, warm and a bit funny. But the author updates it too slowly. I ordered the author to update a hundred chapters a day! ! ! ! [Sinister smile]

It's nice to read, and the author has a good understanding of the original work. There is no conflict between the two creative ideas.

The characters are well drawn, and it is clearly reflected in the 76 chapters of hard work. Although it is a bit verbose in some places (the word count is suspected to be too low), it does not affect the reading experience. And the author really doesn't get involved in the main plot. The Defense Against the Dark Arts class never appeared in the early stages, as if there is no such class in the school. The original work and this book are like the autobiographies of Class 1, Grade 7 and Class 3, Grade 7, two classmates who have almost no contact with each other. It's a good reading experience! [Cool]

Not bad. It seems interesting for the time being. Keep working hard.

I think it's good. Come on, author

It's normal for fans to be a bit OOC, come on

Will Anthony eventually become the God of Magic?

I think it looks great. Why are there so many bad reviews?

Very good, but I seriously doubt that the author watched heavy-duty movies when he wrote 18 chapters.

I think it's pretty well written. I haven't read it carefully at the end. I've only read about 20 chapters.

Better than the book that 16,000 people rated 6.2 [Face covering]

Super good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Yes, the thinking is clear and it takes a different path. The author will give you a lot of encouragement.

By the way, this book is quite good. It writes new things within the framework, and the author also has his own ideas. The low rating is probably due to the character design of the protagonist at the beginning.

It looks great. Come on [Like]

Personally I feel pretty good

Four stars, some flaws, but watchable

You can come and take a look! [Cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face] This book is really good, but the development is slow and that's all. If you only like to read cool novels, you may not be able to stick with it for long. I thought there would be other broader developments in the follow-up. It ended before graduation. I really didn't expect it [eating melon]

All I can say is that Chapter 13 is a turning point, no spoilers! ! !

Should the time travel to other worlds be during the protagonist's vacation, or until the finale, or after the protagonist graduates?

It's pretty cool. It's the first time I've seen someone who made it through my own magic like this [face covering]

Okay, okay, it looks pretty good, but I made a mistake in unlocking the illustrated book at first. The unlocking progress is based on the recognition of the income page. Snape and Lily are just... That kind of thing

Putting aside the details, it is indeed a good read.

Five-star praise, looking forward to your masterpiece

Cool, like it! I hope the author sticks to it