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The author's top priority is to change his name to five characters👍

A refreshing idea, but the first thing the author needs to do is to change a five-character ID.

Overall, there are no major flaws. The character creation of Xiangzi is quite successful. He is soft but afraid of tough. The other characters also have the characteristics of the original work. Most of them are crazy about Xiangzi. The male protagonist has a strong sense of presence but not a strong one. This is a shortcoming. Another point is the small world when Tiandao was building the foundation. The blank space in it is the same as the one in the comment area. I don't know the purpose of creating him. Is it to highlight that Xiangzi is very charming even without a body and is beautiful inside and out? A love rival is added to the male protagonist out of thin air.

A divine author plus a divine work, Mei Yige poet [face covering]

Haji ate too many inspiration mushrooms

It's delicious [like] It's much better than something written by someone who doesn't know what it's called.

Interesting, really interesting [full]

This author is very good at editing [like] I hope there will be more plots that defy the odds.

There are a lot of laughs in the early and middle stages, and it feels refreshing and funny. Book friends have always said that the male subordinates who like Xiao Xiang are poisonous, but they actually misunderstood. Xiangzi has a clear description of Bai Kongmo. On the contrary, he and the male protagonist are a real life-and-death community of destiny. The relationship is more than lovers. Xiao Xiang's cultivation is given by the male protagonist, and the fighting skills are supported by the male protagonist's travels with martial arts. Fighting with others is a two-front battlefield, the world of martial arts and the real world. The relationship between the two is more like father and daughter than a couple. At first, I thought the male protagonist was an old father figure, and then the relationship between the two gradually developed and became unbreakable. It is unreasonable for you to say that a cow is poisonous. The basic logic of such a female protagonist with a clear emotional line is to stick to the male protagonist, and occasionally be obsessed with Soyo or Deng One-way according to the original work. As a funny character, Bai Kong gives people the impression of being funny than holding a silk thread. If this character is deleted, the small world will not be popular at all. His love for Xiangzi is simply a teenager's love for the school beauty. When people are gloomy, they must have a little YY about life. Xiang currently has no obvious tendency to choose any role other than the male protagonist. Lantern is his playmate, and Soyo is the perverted senior sister. He has no interest in male characters and is a pure tool. At present, I think the two tool men are well-shaped, one is a funny man who practices magic skills in reverse, and the other is a perverted handyman demon after turning around. Rather than loving Xiangzi, it is better to find psychological support for myself. Whoever saves me will be my target. Xiangzi happens to be a big succubus, so I fall in love with him. In short, it is very clear that Xiangzi has never had positive feedback towards tool people, only feelings of indifference or disgust. The relationship I have had with the male protagonist so far, not to mention going straight into marriage, is also passionate and strong. Imagine that your guide leads you from a useless handyman to the first genius, sharing weal and woe, intimate, without any password. He is your senior, your boyfriend, and your golden finger. To be honest, I don't know how competitive other characters are. Being able to develop his subordinates is also the strength given to Xiangzi by the male protagonist. I think it's a pity to let unwarranted poisonous points ruin this book. Your Bangxiu Immortal Literature is second to none, really! Cow-free, non-toxic, self-tested and readable

Others are okay, but people looking at the emotional line are confused, it feels like it's both Lily and romance.

It's so lively, I love watching it

There are no more humans (sad)

Xiangchu can watch it.

It looks good, but after reading it for so long, I realized that there are no reviews. I can only say that not many people like it. After all, it is really amazing to write hen cards from a novel angle.

God makes God, God makes God

Not bad, but it ended too quickly [crying]

It's funny to be serious and funny, it's my love sound, when will it appear?

At first I thought it was a nonsensical joke, but the more I read it, the more interesting it becomes. Come on, author.

If you can persist in writing more than 100 pictures, you are already very awesome.