How to Defeat the Cos Patriarch Wearing a Stolen Pen and Meeting a Real Person

It mainly focuses on people's hearts. Judging from the foreshadowing, it feels like the author is playing a big game. The writing is quite smooth. The image of Gong is charming and the image is really gradually established. The reader feels comfortable while reading. From the current point of view, there are no surprises or frustrations. It can be seen that the author sincerely likes and patiently shapes the characters who steal the pen and the protagonist Xiao Mo. The only shortcoming is that it is short. I look forward to the follow-up.

Talk less! High martial arts! Respect the patriarch! ! I said this is beet! ! ! Ouch, this Zhang Mobei is too serious, hahaha. I knew it was the Zhang family at a glance. Our society is afraid that Mobei baby only cares about the patriarch. The wounds on his body and the slowed body recovery ability indicate that he has been subjected to long-term human experiments and the identity information implanted by the system. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, the damn Wang family has bullied my good baby! ! ! (I know it's the system, but I'm still angry! Ahhh, the children of the Zhang family are all good babies, why do they suffer so much?) The most important thing is that the Zhang family in the dark discovered that there was an unidentified person next to their patriarch who was suspected of being the Zhang family. Instead of turning a blind eye, he found someone to test. With the temperament of the patriarchs of the Zhang family, how could they let suspicious people get close to the patriarch? The author's writing is super, super good! The logic is rigorous and the protagonist and supporting characters in the stolen novel are not regarded as fools! ! !

Please, please give me more. I really like this setting. I just have to put on this kind of pretense, but look cool. It's a bit ambiguous, I love it! ! ! It is recommended that the protagonist maintain this strong character. Just want the bright moon to hang high in the sky. If you want them to maintain their true nature, they can't help but get closer. The emotional line doesn't need to be too fast. A little tug and ambiguity from time to time is actually quite good. The character has not collapsed either. Big, great! Come on! ! ! Please update me according to the standards of the donkeys of the production team. (I wish you good health and don't push yourself too hard!) Why is my book review collapsed? Did I speak inappropriately?

This is the correct way for the host and the system to get along. It's so comfortable to watch. Don't be aggrieved, don't compromise, just be cool, or die together at worst. I like the character of the protagonist very much, and the emotional scenes are also very natural. The protagonist is not forced to get along, but the protagonist is also very straight. He doesn't have feelings first. From other tomb robbers fan fiction, I feel that they are a bit licking the protagonist. Even the one who is being chased is quickly attracted and doted on.

The story is very interesting. If the language can be clearer and more concise, readers will be more immersed in it and the rating will increase. As long as some contradictory logic and incomplete components are corrected, the readability will be greatly improved. Overly lengthy modifications will blur the main body of the sentence, and continuous and multiple overly complex sentence patterns will increase the difficulty of reading, making the reader need to wipe a piece of glass repeatedly to see what is inside. Repeated reading can only understand the idea expressed in the sentence, interrupting the coherence of reading and destroying the sense of immersion. Appropriate use of dashes and semicolons as logical connections will greatly improve this. For example, in the chapter about Monty Python, when the protagonist looks at the wound of the giant python, the overly long modifier "almost stabbed by him" destroys the main sentence of the sentence, and the logical adverb in this modifier is (almost) a little far away from the modified word, and the paragraph about the wound at the beginning of the next chapter "Spreading Salt", "Almost at the same time, I discovered "After the python's reaction", almost (close to but not completely) and at the same time (completely at the same time) are two completely contradictory words. If they appear as adverbials in the same sentence, there will be logical contradictions. It is understandable but very awkward. If the fixed phrase "at the same time" is not added after, there are many similar problems. Again, the core of the story is very interesting, but the expression is somewhat lacking. If it can be improved, the rating will definitely be higher.

I want to see the main attack on the heartthrob + all the members single arrows + the male protagonist Tie Zhi Dumei [I learned it]

It's a really good read about Tomb Raider 00100. The protagonist Xiao Mo is super cold-faced and cute, and it's natural to get along with the protagonist group. With the help of the system and him, in the eyes of outsiders, Xiao Mo is a super beautiful and strong woman who can arouse people's desire for protection. However, the experience is just to complete the background and not abuse the protagonist. The protagonist control can feel free to enter.

The setting of this book is also great. It is a series of beautiful, powerful and tragic stories. The male protagonist is not controlled by the system, and he threatens the system to die with him at every turn. What looks beautiful and miserable in the eyes of outsiders is actually not that miserable. This book is very interesting, but there are too few of it nowadays. But looking at the introduction, can the male protagonist be bent? Can he not be bent? The male protagonist has always been straight, and others are interested in him. This kind of writing is very interesting.

It's a fairy tale. Needless to say, the author's writing is great. The plot is smooth, the emotions are sweet, the protagonist setting and Goldfinger are refreshing and reassuring. Different people have different points of dissatisfaction. To me, the whole story is unremarkable. The protagonist is too cute. It is a contrast between cool guy and cuteness. The atmosphere with the little brother is truly the only one I have ever seen in a BL article. Both of them are people of few words. In some cases, there is a cute and cute sense of déjà vu (pure eye contact is like this), but at critical moments, they understand each other very well, and they are very in tune with each other. They are both strong. It's delicious. Come on boss, I will chase it to the end [Send heart] I saved some articles before after seeing the protagonist pass out and travel to another world and meet Wu Xie and Heixiazi from different periods. Is there any sister who is following the article and can kindly inform me that the protagonist has returned to the previous timeline? [Sending Hearts]

He's so good-looking, I just like male protagonists with this kind of personality! ! ! It's been a long time since I've been a bitter, charming and funny heroine! ! I beg the author to update more chapters four times a day, please, don't interrupt, don't be a eunuch! Don't finish it too soon, okay? The reboot of Hidden Sea, Flowers and Sand Sea has to be finished, okay? After restarting the writing, you can write original ones. As long as the author keeps writing, I will definitely keep up with the updates! ! [Crying][Crying][Crying] It's so beautiful, why is the score so low! ! Worth 9.5 Points!

It's so beautiful, it's so fake and beautiful, it's really touching [heartfelt], I feel like the main character and the little brother Wu Xie, Hei Xiazi Xiaohua, are really close to each other [shy]. Believe me, this book is worth it [Blow a kiss] Keep up the good work, author. More and more people will definitely read it.

It's good to watch, and the character of the protagonist is very interesting. There are some points in the protagonist's speech that really poked at me and made me laugh to death. The system is also easy to integrate, not annoying and not too stupid. The abilities and prizes given by the system are not directly invincible, they are just right. Especially the current plot and this parallel world, I think it is quite interesting to write. Putting it down a bit, it's still a good watch, but Wu Xie has too many inner dramas about love, and he doesn't even realize that he is very attached to love. It feels like he has no core of his own at all. As soon as he sees the protagonist, he is obsessed with inner dramas about love, and he is extremely dependent on the protagonist. I think this is a bit too much. Although fan characters are inevitably biased, I think it's a bit too much.

It's really really really really really really super good-looking [Adore][Adore][Adore] Although 80% of the brain circuits of Mo Bao and the protagonist group are not on the same line, their actual actions can always coincide. A plot developed based on the edge of the original plot. I got excited just watching it, and then I got so excited that I threw away the original plot timeline [laughing] [laughing] The summary is just one sentence, it's so good that it's endless [Cool] [Cool] [Cool] It's not a loss to invest in the shares, hey [you taste it carefully] (that's what I understand [you taste it carefully]) I just like it

I love it to death. The protagonist has a lot of inner drama, but he handles the role steadily. This kind of setting of Poison simply kills me. Although the system is clumsy, it is also very considerate at times. It helps the protagonist solve a lot of troubles. He is timid and cute. Everyone portrays it. The story is very good and three-dimensional. The most important thing is that the author is very doting on the readers and responds to their requests. Many Zhang family members also came out to show up. I am really looking forward to the following plot. The author will give you more support. I will always support you and love you＾3＾

It's so pretty. In fact, I didn't want to click on the name when I first saw it. But after reading the content, I realized that it's so pretty. The only drawback is that the author can update it faster? ╰（‵□′）╯ It's not enough! ! I really like Xiaohua and Xiaoge. Let them have more plots. Update it soon, teacher! ! !

Marks: The writing is very good, and the characterization is also very good. I feel that the protagonist has a human-machine feeling. He has no emotions and only has acting value 😂😂 (it's good and doesn't feel sad). But there is only one person who is the reason why I choose to abandon the article temporarily - Wang Jing. The author's character portrayal is so good that I feel uncomfortable. I really want the protagonist to have a slightly softer attitude towards him, even a little bit, even if he says "I remember you", but nothing happens. I searched the full text and saw Wang Jing's attitude of not waiting for the protagonist until his death (he just put the body into the space in the end), but to me, all the treatment after death is imaginary. It's so uncomfortable😣I gave up! Let's wait and see when my heart becomes as hard as iron.

It's really, really nice, but two per day is too few, and I'm going to start three. There are works that are so in line with my xp. As for the main attack, the protagonist's personality seems cold but is actually very interesting. He is powerful and fake, but the protagonist is not harmed at all. The original image of the protagonist in Tomb Raiders Notes is also very good. Isn't it normal that everyone likes the protagonist? Even they like the protagonist. I had never read Tomb Raiders Notes or read the fanfic. After reading this book, I wanted to find something similar, but I couldn't find one that had the same feeling as this one.

Overall, it's pretty good. It's pretty good. The protagonist is not a nanny and has a high level of force. They don't abuse the protagonist, but they can figure things out and it's fun. In some writings, Wu Xie is simply stupid in the early stage and looks annoying and annoying. This one doesn't have it. Everyone's descriptions and characters are very good, just the descriptions he has. It's too long, there are a lot of repeated words, and I feel like I can't understand some of the writing. I can't connect the upper and lower parts, and I haven't written all of it. It's inexplicable. I can't understand what's written. Maybe I don't have enough IQ. The writing is too advanced. Apart from these plots, it's also very good. You can read it.

It's really great. This book is really great. Especially when I used the multi-character dialogue function, it was really great. It was very friendly to my ears and very consistent with the character. It allowed me to further appreciate the author's excellent writing style!

The plot in the first part is very attractive, the character setting is good, the emotional line development is normal, the mahjong also gives people a very comfortable feeling, and the system does not say it is annoying or anything. Overall it is really good, but the reason why I gave it 4 points is because the plot is a bit confusing in the middle and later parts, and then it pays more attention to the emotional line, and there are some repetitions of words. Generally speaking, it is not as good as it was written at the beginning. I had a very good impression of this book at first, and then I thought about reading it again after a while. After I came back and read it a few times, I gradually felt that something was wrong and it felt different from the first impression. Maybe I was a little too sensitive.

It's very good. The logical thinking is online, so it doesn't appear to be brainless, but it's a bit too stream-of-consciousness like the Riddler. Maybe I'm older and don't like to use my brain anymore. I don't understand many parts, but fortunately, I understand some of the little angel's comments. Come on! It's just a little hard to understand.

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks great, it has two male protagonists, there is a Shura field, and the protagonist is the Zhang family, it has a system, and it plays the younger brother Du Wei, a growth type, the protagonist is super good-looking~ The writing is super good~

It has the attributes of a heartthrob, but it is not embarrassing at all. If I were in it, I would also fall in love with Zhang Mobei. The protagonist is not abusive. Although the plot is a bit tactful, it does not really abuse the protagonist. The author's writing is really good and makes people immersed. All the plots of the knives are made up by him, but I still can't help crying. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] The protagonist is a bit difficult to follow, and I particularly like the one with the little brother, double strong CP!

Lively and interesting, fluent sentences, immersive, choose clever, appropriate and meaningful words, use even and neat or well-proportioned sentences, and use rhetorical techniques such as sports personification. The delicate, vivid and emotional description conveys the author's unique feelings about the novel. It is really a good article with substantial content and sincere emotions.

I really like the beautiful, strong and miserable characters. The author has a good grasp of the point of view and will not make people feel disgusted. I like this kind of thing very much. Welcome to read a very good fanfic. It is very beautiful. I estimate that if this book develops according to this trend and does not collapse, it will have a rating of at least eight points, and I can't say more than nine points. Author, please keep writing, I just can't get enough of it. After tying it up, it made me want to write more.

It's a fairy tale. Needless to say, the author's writing is great. The protagonist has a lot of inner drama, but he handles the role steadily. The setting of Poison Wei is simply killing me. Although the system is clumsy, its carefulness helps the protagonist solve a lot of troubles. It is cowardly and cute. Of course, it also takes a lot of blame for the world consciousness. Everyone is well described and very three-dimensional. The most important thing is that the author is very doting on the readers and responds to their requests. The emotional scenes are also very natural. The protagonist is not forcefully involved. There is a lot of ambiguous pulling and pulling. Of course, the protagonist is a straight man, but it looks better this way. I love it so much. I'm really looking forward to the following plot. Please give me more support, author. I will always support you. I love you.

Among the same type of books, this book gives people a good reading experience. There is not a lot of system nonsense, the plot is smooth, the characters are stable, and the overall plot is very attractive to read (the male protagonist has a light temper + I personally like to eat this kind of fake beauty and strong misery + brain supplements). But it is really not enough to read. Give the teacher five stars to encourage and urge the update. It is best to have ten chapters a day () There are some repeated uses of sentences and words in the middle and later stages, and there are also some overlaps in character descriptions (such as Wu Xie in the early stage and Li in Shahai later). The plot in the later stage is a bit confusing, and the perception may not be as good as the previous one. But fortunately, there are still some exciting and interesting plots from time to time. In addition, this author is really rare for stable updates, which can still be praised.

The protagonist is very powerful, and many people find it frustrating. I highly recommend it. But there are some parts later that feel a bit boring. It feels like I am writing water characters. It doesn't have the same feeling as before.

It's really good to watch [heartfelt], but it was discovered too early. It would have been nice if I could have discovered it later. There are very few, and it's not enough to see. [Please update]

This article is so good, really good, so good that I can no longer read other Tomb Raider fanfics. I even re-read the Tomb Raider novels and movies because of this article. It is really good. I hope the author can release 1000 chapters for me to watch it. It is really good, good, good, good. I say the important things three times, it is really good! ! !