Transform into KING and Eventually Become the Strongest on Earth

This king novel is already considered very good in Tomato. Compared with other harem novels with the appearance of a king, this novel is really good. I also hope that the author will not follow in the footsteps of those who started a harem with the appearance of a king.

It was unexpectedly good-looking. At first, I thought it was awkward for the author to write about time-travelers, because it seemed like the time-travelers were fused with King or even King got the memories of the time-travelers. After that, I gradually started to feel very comfortable, not in a hurry, not someone who completely followed the system, but putting my own needs first. It can be said that I have completely integrated into the world of One Punch Man. Most of the plots have undergone certain original transformations, and are half-life, half-combat types, filling in the plot of King's battles and enriching King's "spiritual mentor" sub-profession [Sneaky laugh][Sneaky laugh][Sneaky laugh][Sneaky laugh]

It's very faithful to the original work. It's not like other novels about human beings. The words and voices are completely incoherent, and it's not like the original work either. It's more like you're immersed in your own art and can't extricate yourself. The character settings are all broken, but this book is quite restored.

In line with King's style as the Strongest Man on Earth, Overlord's Luck is also written with great proficiency, and it feels like watching the sequel to One Punch. It brings back the excitement of watching the drama late at night, especially the powerful writing of Emperor Engine. It is King's character that relies on the momentum to frighten the enemy.

Personally, I think it's very good, and the author's writing has surpassed that of most fans. There is really no need to wash out the combat power, but after defeating Boros, I also increased the points to 500 points. The author is also more willing to listen to advice. Someone mentioned the problem with the experience card before, so he directly deleted the experience card. I'm not the kind of CS author who can make timely corrections when facing readers' feedback.

Compared to the harem novels of the same person, this is an excellent fanfic. Just keep the style until the end of the update. After all, the bald man in the cape is not finished yet [Blowing Kiss]

The better fanfics are no longer mere tricks, but let me see the king who has real power. The plot is coherent and does not deliberately suppress the combat power. The plot is non-toxic, and the battle will not be described. After all, the instant kill is also excellent in daily writing. The number of words is currently small. At the beginning of the new book, I suggest everyone to press for more updates.

It is very good, especially the description of daily life, and the most praiseworthy thing is that the author did not engage in fluff, but made the protagonist down-to-earth and improve. Although it was a bit overwhelming in the early stage, the author also listened to the advice and corrected it later. It is worth reading.

The gold found in the poop of foreign persimmons has an estimated score of 9.0-9.2 In terms of character creation, King's character design is very good. It inherits the original while adding a bit of sage spirit. There are no big problems in the details. You can't tell it in the early stage, but after King has the ability to take care of himself, it's fun to start fighting among the group. Famous scenes are adapted and recreated. There is a high probability that there will be no female protagonist, and there are even few descriptions of women. I like black light very much. When I saw black light charging at the dragon monster, I said: That's it, just bite it with big mouthfuls. Some people may not like this drastic change very much, so the above evaluation is based on your acceptance that the main plot remains unchanged, the S heroes all grow up under the inspiration of King, and King himself is invincible.

It's great. It's the best one-punch fanfic I've ever read. Although the writing was a bit green in the early stages, the author began to change after listening to his advice. The writing gradually matured and the plot became rich and delicate. It's obvious that you can see the growth. I hope the author can work hard!

Who knows! Dressed as "The Most Powerful Movie King on Earth" KING in One Punch Man, Lin Mo's face-to-face with the dragon-level weirdo Vaccine Man at the beginning, Lin Mo's time-travel journey simply welded "thrills" and "exhilaration" together! As a man with his own "Emperor Engine" and three layers of filters, the original KING relied on luck and aura to dominate the world, and the arrival of Lin Mo gave this falsely powerful man the real strength to match his title. The setting of the emotional value system is a stroke of genius - absorbing the extreme unwillingness of the vaccine man to grab 5,000 energy points when he dies, and even feel the slight melancholy after Saitama's "one punch", unlocking the B-level coercion skill at the beginning, and changing the "lay down" script into a "hardcore counterattack". There is no lengthy foreshadowing. From his weak legs and fear when facing the vaccine man, to his courage to fight against the Weird Association after relying on the system to strengthen, Lin Mo's growth line is clear and upward. He not only retains the true reaction of ordinary people, who will be nervous when facing strong people and want to run away when encountering a crisis, but also hides the kindness and courage in his bones at critical moments. His words "stop it" allow the humanity under the false name to shine through. The book contains famous fight scenes with fists and fists, as well as the cute contrast of being in the same frame as Saitama. Watching KING, who once relied on his acting skills to make a living, step by step to use his strength to fulfill the title of "the strongest on the surface" and turn all rumors into reality. This transformation from fiction to reality makes me excited to read the whole process and I can't stop at all!

Although it was a bit frustrating to force a lottery to suppress the combat power without adding points, the author later listened to the advice and made changes. I feel that the protagonist has a master's demeanor inexplicably and has a correct outlook on life. I feel that the writing is very good and the rhythm is very comfortable. It is a good work among the One Punch fandom.

It's very good. People who read it feel happy and have the desire to read on. The system's hang-ups are also consistent with the king's identity. He is not invincible from the start, giving other characters in the book a chance to perform. Give you a like [like] [like] [like] and look forward to the follow-up plot

Comparing the same kind of novel side by side, the novel is quite good, maybe not that exciting, but I can definitely read it during the book shortage. The advantage of this book is that it not only adheres to the character design, but also does not have a vulgar idea. The protagonist accidentally travels to this world to settle down and settle down. He works hard not to pick up girls but to become a hero. This is better than many other one-punch stories.

This novel really understands the original manga so well! Whether it is the tone and personality of the characters, or the rhythm and flavor of the plot, they are highly consistent with the original work, and there is no sense of dissonance at all. Moreover, the story is written smoothly and naturally, and the details and emotions are perfectly complemented on the basis of fitting the original work. It is very comfortable to watch. It must be supported by high scores!

The fanfiction score is 8.5. If you like the original work, you can read it. This kind of plot control without destroying the original work needs to be very precise. It cannot be like watching the original work, but also needs to add your own understanding to prevent the protagonist from losing his sense of existence. Yes, the author will get better and better.

It starts flat and moves high, and the ending is a bit rushed, but except for the ending, the later period is still quite good. King's setting is solid, and there are no obvious surprises. You can clearly feel the author's progress in the writing process. The author has been carefully listening to everyone's suggestions during the writing process. It is considered a good masterpiece on Tomato. I look forward to the author writing better novels in the future! [Praise]

2026-04-2, 01:42, Cmr finished reading. I think it is a rare one-punch fanfic. The depictions of the king and other characters are very vivid and vivid. It is a rare masterpiece among fanfics and it is also very good. The beginning may be a bit perfunctory because the author did not intend to write it well at the beginning, but the rest is also very good. Keep reading. If you are a fan of One-punch, you will not be disappointed [laughs]

The whole book reads well. It retains the character image in the original work. It will not randomly change the characters like other versions. In the end, they will not look like King. Keep working hard and keep this. In addition, I hope the author will not add too many skills. The author of the previous second creation fan always likes to add too many skills, resulting in the characters having the original characteristics. It makes people feel very strange when reading. Or the characters grow too fast and the skill development is too divorced from the characters. It makes people read a bit uncomfortable. I hope the author can continue to maintain this. I will continue to watch it! Come on! !

I started reading it when it first came out, and I read it again after it was finished. This book is probably a book that is biased toward invincibility. There will be a growth process in the front. The main plot has not changed much from the original work. There are also some daily funny things but not many. It can be said that it is from the perspective of the truly invincible king. The characters are restored to their personality descriptions. The writing style is also good. The first few dozen pictures are written by the author with a fun mentality and there are many poisonous points (also The main reason for the one-star and two-star reviews) You can skip it directly (you can read the introduction after beating Boros and write about it, about 50 chapters) There is no experience card (there seems to be one in the early stage, but there is no more later) It is a good one-punch fandom among foreign persimmons. If you can accept the above, it seems very comfortable, and if you can't accept it, it seems quite uncomfortable [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon] Forgot to mention, there is no heroine, but the ending is very rushed (but the protagonist is already invincible, so there is nothing more to say), so the overall score is definitely not high.

I read the book with two mobile phones, so the display time may be a bit short. It was quite enjoyable to read. I think it was a bit invincible. It was quite interesting. Generally speaking, it stayed with me during my senior year of high school. I was particularly obsessed with King in One Punch Man, so I kept looking for those second-generation fanfics. This one is the most satisfactory to me. To be honest, thank the author for persisting. Although the ending is a bit sloppy, in general, the writing in King's second-generation creation is very good. I highly recommend [Love] [Love] [Love]

This huge work is really full of wonderful writing and every word is exquisite, which makes reading it feel like a spring breeze. The author's writing style is smooth and contagious, as if every sentence contains profound thoughts and rich emotions. The article has a rigorous structure and clear logic, and each paragraph serves the theme appropriately, allowing readers to easily follow the author's ideas and deeply appreciate the profound meaning contained in the article. What's even more commendable is that the author cleverly used various rhetorical techniques in the article, making the whole article rich in literary grace and full of charm. Whether it is vivid metaphors, vivid descriptions, refined wording, or powerful arguments, they fully demonstrate the author's profound literary skills and excellent writing ability. After reading this article, I was deeply shocked. It not only allowed me to appreciate the charm of words, but also made me stand in awe of the author's talent and knowledge. This is truly a rare masterpiece, worthy of careful reading and study by everyone who loves literature. I believe that such an excellent article will be widely circulated and become a shining pearl in the literary world. Although I copied it, it looks really good!

Very good. I haven't seen such a hearty One-Punch Man fanfic for a long time. The integration process of the protagonist and the king is also very natural. The characterization is vivid and fits the original work well. I hope the author can stick to it. Come on!

Super super super nice. The combat power is gradually improved, and it may be a bit frustrating in the early stage, but after the early and mid-term, the combat power soars like crazy, and it becomes particularly beautiful from this time on. Explains what a true hero is.

No more talking, just watch it! But one thing is that the protagonist doesn't seem to have traveled through the past and taken over King's body. It's more like King has awakened his past life memories. Anyway, it's really good-looking.

To be honest, I have been looking for fan works of One Punch Man before, but many of them failed in the middle, but this one is very good, it is enjoyable from the beginning to the end, and when I read the One Punch Man anime and comics before, I have been thinking, it would be great if KING really had the strongest strength on the surface, and if the scene of suppressing the four dragons was not luck but force. It is a pity that KING is an ordinary person, and this book just makes up for my regrets about the original work, so I also wish the author great success in realizing his dream! ! !

Tomato is a good source of food. The supporting roles are very well controlled. The protagonist is still the main character in the story. This treatment also allows some accessories to have the same character arc as the protagonist. It is a pity that the theme has changed. In the early days, it was obvious that it was going to be a diversion. The contrast between the inner activities of the protagonist was used as a selling point. Unfortunately, it was led by typical readers to become a little bit It's a clichéd invincible cool novel. At the same time, in the middle period, there are a lot of chicken soup protagonists educating others and even making the supporting characters OOC to a certain extent. The motivation behind watching it is purely because the main and supporting characters are vivid enough. At the same time, although it is an invincible cool novel route, the protagonist has always maintained a positive heroic image, and there is no heroine, no ambiguity, and no vulgar sexual repression in the plot.

I forgot to rate it, so I'm going to add it now. I wasn't optimistic about this book from the very beginning, and it seemed almost uninteresting, but, but! The author really gets better and better as he writes. The plot arrangement is smooth and natural, perfectly fits King's character, and the changes are quite reasonable. Five-star praise. There are flaws, but the flaws don't hide the goodness.

It's just an average fanfic, not terrible, but not much better. At least, in my opinion, a good fan would subdue G4 before it launches its missiles, instead of trying to show off.

It's not bad. I feel like there are one or two bad points in the early part of this book, but as you get to the back, the writing style will be slightly better. It looks really good. I feel it's about four stars, but I give five stars. I'd like to give the author some encouragement. I originally wanted to save a few pictures and then continue reading slowly, but I didn't expect it to be finished! Depend on!