(Single heroine) (Urban high martial arts) (That tag was assigned by Tomato itself. It has absolutely nothing to do with this story.) (Inspired by Xia Dou, but this isn't a template, let alone fanfiction.)
You say my F-rank mist is weak? Who told you it was F-rank? Why are you going on and on? Take it up with the family behind me!
You say I use both mist and snakes, and a combat scan only gives me a score of six. Have you never seen anyone else who uses snakes? As a seasoned transmigrator, surely I know how to copy a few tricks! Orochimaru, Kabuto! From today on, I am An Yang, the Hidden Hero of the Jianghu!
An Yang can summon a family member at any time: the strength-type Mist-Hiding Snake, the agility-type Phantom Snake, and so on. They can merge into An Yang's body, and each snake that merges with him adds to his skills.
As mist swirls around him, forming the faint outline of snakes, the shadow of a massive silver-white serpent coils over his left shoulder while a black Phantom Snake wraps around his right arm. His entire bearing changes. The gentle, youthful aura vanishes, replaced by a cold and dangerous presence, like an assassin in the fog, ready to strike a fatal blow at any moment.
Use the whole family's strength just to catch a glimpse of a prodigy? No, no, no! Use the whole family's strength to leave the geniuses eating our dust!
It still feels good, but the same old habit has occurred, so I'll ask the question again. 1. Change the book title, book cover and introduction. Although the title of the book makes me feel good as a villager, it still won't work in the long run, so I try to change it. The cover of the book is so targeted. I didn't read the introduction at first and thought it was a template book, but it turned out that it was a beast-control book. The introduction is too long, I read it and only left the last two paragraphs. 2. The progress is too fast. The second snake appeared in just a few dozen chapters. Maybe the author wanted to come up with the topic earlier, but it was too fast, and the protagonist has been successfully selected in just a few dozen chapters. According to other books, the current total number of chapters should still be fighting encounters in the wild or finding ways to raise them. The author can adjust the progress appropriately. 3. Combat power system. Many books now have this problem. This book uses numerical expressions and levels, but it feels weird. There is no specific realm expression. It doesn't feel like high martial arts, but more like low martial arts or online games. I am not writing so much to attack the author. As a novice, the author is already very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard. After all, the results of hard work must have results. In order not to affect the subsequent ratings, I will give you five stars, written by Ha Ji I read the new chapters again and found that the author has made great progress. It can be said that he is on the right track. The plot has begun to slow down and the battle descriptions have become much more detailed. However, the emotional changes in the characters are too vague and make me feel unnatural. I feel that the relationship has improved without experiencing anything. However, the author's writing is considered very good among the newbies I have seen.
The special effects of Xia Dou's appearance are very cool. Author, you should understand what I mean, right? 😏
Nice looking, who is the heroine? Black snake?🍉🍉🍉 I like black snakes, and I dislike the integrity of my body.
It's ok. Although the plot cannot be avoided, those who don't like to watch plots that are more templated still need to think carefully. Personally, I don't care. If the plot template is well written, it is the kingly plot😏
There's not much to say, but it's time for new snakes. There are only two at present and there are only two in the introduction. They won't disappear. Then the expectation will be greatly reduced. That's it again 🥲
Such a beautiful book, why are so few people reading it? [Shocked][shocked][shocked]
Good, good, good, good, good, good, good
Directly start with five stars
I really like the one about snakes
It looks good. I'm going to buy one to play when the Heroes come back. But I feel like the title of the book could be changed.