Lin Yue cooperated with the quick travel system, traveled through various worlds to complete tasks, and also enjoyed different exciting lives. (Most worlds have cp)
World 1: Luotuo Xiangzi (Xiangzi's daughter)
World 2: The Lost Moon (Original World)
World 3: The Brilliant Star (Cheng Shaoshang)
World 4: Alley People (Wu Shanshan)
World Five: Ode to Joy (Fan Shengmei)
Reader comments
It's a very nice novel, and I can feel the power from the words. In fact, I have been in a bad mood this month because of my internship. I thought I was going to be depressed and wanted to switch to internship. Yesterday, my teacher called my family, who comforted me and told me to go home if I couldn't stay any longer. Whether I took a year off from school or went home without my diploma, they all supported me and I felt a little better. At least I didn't want to die. But the physical discomfort is still there, such as insomnia, chest tightness, loss of appetite, incontinence of tears, etc. Need to adjust slowly. When I was looking for a novel today, I was immediately attracted by the introduction of this book. I didn't skip a chapter and read it in one go. I felt a little happy. Watching the heroine walk step by step, I felt that I also gained strength from it. Although I am just an ordinary person, I don't have any cheats and I am not very smart, but I still have family members who love me. I will also learn from the heroine and move forward step by step. Even if I am not as successful, I will be self-sufficient. The author's writing is actually very beautiful. I hope it won't be finished hastily. If it is written as a long novel, many people will definitely like it.
Finally, if there are high school students or college students who will see this comment, I actually want to share my thoughts. If ordinary people don't have money and power, it is recommended not to apply for private universities. Basically, they will only bully students. It's best to find someone to go with for an internship, and don't go too far from home, otherwise you'll easily get depressed.
That's basically all. I wish the author a prosperous career and a fortune.
Very nice! I really want the author to write the story about Luotuo Xiangzi into a long article. It must be very interesting. [Cool] I want to see the reactions of Xiangzi and Huniu when they changed their lives time and time again with the help of their hard-working and smart daughter. I want to see the reactions of Xiangzi and Huniu when they moved from the shanty town to live with their grandfather. [Catch Crazy] I want to see how the family has slowly built up a fortune. The most important thing is the reaction of Xiangzi and Huniu when the news came that they were invited to Hong Kong when they grew up. Mr. Liu said that he wanted to go with them. It must be very nice. Please [face covering] [blowing kiss]
Baby, have you seen everyone praising Luotuo Xiangzi? You have to have confidence and promise me that I will expand it and write it into a full-length novel, okay? I believe many people will watch it. The story about Starring is also very good. The relationship between Shao Shang and his mother is too complicated. I don't like plots that make my mother miserable. It's also a great perspective to be able to solve the fundamental problem and join the army! The neglected brothers raised chickens and vegetables together, and then gradually benefited the poor people in the border areas, changing their lives is very realistic! The focus is here, and a few or more chapters will be used to return to the capital to be with Yuan Shan. This part of the description does not need to be too much, and then (learn literary and martial arts, sell goods to the emperor's family) and complete the ultimate goal of becoming the Duke of Zhenguo!
Of course, this is just my personal suggestion [blowing kiss] I really like these two articles you wrote!
I came in because of Luotuo Xiangzi's daughter. Because I am only interested in this world, I only evaluate this world. The writing is very close to the life at that time, and contains details of ordinary happiness. Moreover, the protagonist really writes from the perspective of the people at the bottom of the class and writes good articles that are really helpful for people to improve their lives. He does not say that he does things that are not suitable for his age and the current environment because of relying on his little golden fingers.
And the family is working hard to get better little by little. It's not like suddenly getting rich, or picking up some magic medicine and selling it, and suddenly the money is available. Everyone is working hard to build this happy little family. Well, there is a good happy ending for Hu Niu, Luo Tuo Xiangzi and Lao Liu.
Huniu survived, and she should become a charterer in the future. In the early stage, Xiangzi became more and more dignified when pulling a cart, improved his emotional intelligence, and could speak some Mandarin and English. Huniu's father did not lose his daughter and his son. He followed the heroine and his family all the time, and the family was never separated. The heroine also changed her family life and her own destiny through hard work. (With CP, there is no emotional drama, it's mainly about career, and CP is considered a childhood sweetheart who knows everything about her) [Sending Hearts] [Love]
I like Shao Shang in Xing Han Brilliant, and I don't feel aggrieved at all. Originally, I thought that the restriction would not be so great if I could only marry Lou Yao. To deal with Shao Shang's mother like this, it turned out that I could just do it like this from the beginning. I was very happy to see this, and Shao Shang was also very happy. She didn't need maternal love, and she wouldn't aggrieve herself at all.
It's a very good book. When I first read Luotuo Xiangzi, I felt that a very good and hard-working person should not end up like that. The writing here is really good, and it feels like it is finally complete.
Luotuo Xiangzi and Xinghan's Brilliant World written by the author are the best. Since Xinghan Brilliant is not finished, I will give it four stars.
The writing touches people's hearts, especially the line in Xing Han's Brilliance, "When the wind comes, I will stand firm." I hope the author can update it.
The writing is really good, it would be nice if each world could be written more fully.
The writing is good, and it has a sense of life and is not aggrieved. Will you write about old things in the south of the city?
The first story is well written and very heartwarming. [Like][Send heart]
The writing is quite good, and it's rare to see Luotuo Xiangzi's fans. Come on
It's strange, this is the first time I see Luotuo Xiangzi's fanfic. Come on, five stars for encouragement.
I came here like Luotuo Xiangzi, but I feel, well, it seems that the character is a little bit broken. But the author can write it well. Four stars for encouragement.
I haven't read it yet, but I'll comment first. When I read Luo Tuo Xiangzi, I thought it would be nice if the ending could be changed. I couldn't accept that Hu Niu died, Xiao Fuzi committed suicide, and Xiangzi lived numbly. When I saw this book, I added it to my bookshelf first, and then I finished the one I was chasing, and then read it.
It's a very nice novel, and I can feel the power from the words. In fact, I have been in a bad mood this month because of my internship. I thought I was going to be depressed and wanted to switch to internship. Yesterday, my teacher called my family, who comforted me and told me to go home if I couldn't stay any longer. Whether I took a year off from school or went home without my diploma, they all supported me and I felt a little better. At least I didn't want to die. But the physical discomfort is still there, such as insomnia, chest tightness, loss of appetite, incontinence of tears, etc. Need to adjust slowly. When I was looking for a novel today, I was immediately attracted by the introduction of this book. I didn't skip a chapter and read it in one go. I felt a little happy. Watching the heroine walk step by step, I felt that I also gained strength from it. Although I am just an ordinary person, I don't have any cheats and I am not very smart, but I still have family members who love me. I will also learn from the heroine and move forward step by step. Even if I am not as successful, I will be self-sufficient. The author's writing is actually very beautiful. I hope it won't be finished hastily. If it is written as a long novel, many people will definitely like it. Finally, if there are high school students or college students who will see this comment, I actually want to share my thoughts. If ordinary people don't have money and power, it is recommended not to apply for private universities. Basically, they will only bully students. It's best to find someone to go with for an internship, and don't go too far from home, otherwise you'll easily get depressed. That's basically all. I wish the author a prosperous career and a fortune.
Very nice! I really want the author to write the story about Luotuo Xiangzi into a long article. It must be very interesting. [Cool] I want to see the reactions of Xiangzi and Huniu when they changed their lives time and time again with the help of their hard-working and smart daughter. I want to see the reactions of Xiangzi and Huniu when they moved from the shanty town to live with their grandfather. [Catch Crazy] I want to see how the family has slowly built up a fortune. The most important thing is the reaction of Xiangzi and Huniu when the news came that they were invited to Hong Kong when they grew up. Mr. Liu said that he wanted to go with them. It must be very nice. Please [face covering] [blowing kiss] Baby, have you seen everyone praising Luotuo Xiangzi? You have to have confidence and promise me that I will expand it and write it into a full-length novel, okay? I believe many people will watch it. The story about Starring is also very good. The relationship between Shao Shang and his mother is too complicated. I don't like plots that make my mother miserable. It's also a great perspective to be able to solve the fundamental problem and join the army! The neglected brothers raised chickens and vegetables together, and then gradually benefited the poor people in the border areas, changing their lives is very realistic! The focus is here, and a few or more chapters will be used to return to the capital to be with Yuan Shan. This part of the description does not need to be too much, and then (learn literary and martial arts, sell goods to the emperor's family) and complete the ultimate goal of becoming the Duke of Zhenguo! Of course, this is just my personal suggestion [blowing kiss] I really like these two articles you wrote!
I came in because of Luotuo Xiangzi's daughter. Because I am only interested in this world, I only evaluate this world. The writing is very close to the life at that time, and contains details of ordinary happiness. Moreover, the protagonist really writes from the perspective of the people at the bottom of the class and writes good articles that are really helpful for people to improve their lives. He does not say that he does things that are not suitable for his age and the current environment because of relying on his little golden fingers. And the family is working hard to get better little by little. It's not like suddenly getting rich, or picking up some magic medicine and selling it, and suddenly the money is available. Everyone is working hard to build this happy little family. Well, there is a good happy ending for Hu Niu, Luo Tuo Xiangzi and Lao Liu. Huniu survived, and she should become a charterer in the future. In the early stage, Xiangzi became more and more dignified when pulling a cart, improved his emotional intelligence, and could speak some Mandarin and English. Huniu's father did not lose his daughter and his son. He followed the heroine and his family all the time, and the family was never separated. The heroine also changed her family life and her own destiny through hard work. (With CP, there is no emotional drama, it's mainly about career, and CP is considered a childhood sweetheart who knows everything about her) [Sending Hearts] [Love]
I like Shao Shang in Xing Han Brilliant, and I don't feel aggrieved at all. Originally, I thought that the restriction would not be so great if I could only marry Lou Yao. To deal with Shao Shang's mother like this, it turned out that I could just do it like this from the beginning. I was very happy to see this, and Shao Shang was also very happy. She didn't need maternal love, and she wouldn't aggrieve herself at all.
It's a very good book. When I first read Luotuo Xiangzi, I felt that a very good and hard-working person should not end up like that. The writing here is really good, and it feels like it is finally complete.
Luotuo Xiangzi and Xinghan's Brilliant World written by the author are the best. Since Xinghan Brilliant is not finished, I will give it four stars.
The writing touches people's hearts, especially the line in Xing Han's Brilliance, "When the wind comes, I will stand firm." I hope the author can update it.
The writing is really good, it would be nice if each world could be written more fully.
The writing is good, and it has a sense of life and is not aggrieved. Will you write about old things in the south of the city?
The first story is well written and very heartwarming. [Like][Send heart]
The writing is quite good, and it's rare to see Luotuo Xiangzi's fans. Come on
It's strange, this is the first time I see Luotuo Xiangzi's fanfic. Come on, five stars for encouragement.
I came here like Luotuo Xiangzi, but I feel, well, it seems that the character is a little bit broken. But the author can write it well. Four stars for encouragement.
I haven't read it yet, but I'll comment first. When I read Luo Tuo Xiangzi, I thought it would be nice if the ending could be changed. I couldn't accept that Hu Niu died, Xiao Fuzi committed suicide, and Xiangzi lived numbly. When I saw this book, I added it to my bookshelf first, and then I finished the one I was chasing, and then read it.