After Ordinary Women Obtain the System

It's quite good-looking, one monkey is tied to another, and the heroine is very sober! A gentleman's words do not matter his heart. For the target of the strategy, the heroine is the perfect girlfriend, the heartbeat is real, and the added value is given by the system. With the heroine's character and execution ability, under the rewards of the system, she can break through the shackles of talent and succeed in whatever she does!

It's so beautiful. It's not an ordinary girl's heartthrob novel. It made me feel the same pleasure as watching Mary Fang. It's super, super good-looking! ! ! The heroine is sober! ! ! ! All the male guests are my sister's tools to get to the top of the fame and fortune fair! ! Highly recommended! I didn't expect it to be a short article, but overall it's pretty good. Some of the highlights are quite realistic. I highly recommend it! [Lick screen]

It's good. Each male protagonist has been given the right medicine. The female protagonist is timid but also growing. She has to rely on the system to break out of the cage, so she has a sense of substitution. Hahahahaha. Finally, it's not the kind of male protagonist who just likes the female protagonist inexplicably when he sees her. It can be seen that the female protagonist is using her brain and trying hard to find a strategy.

Apart from the excessive and cumbersome description at the beginning, this novel is really quite exciting. I felt the joy of nurturing. Every time I saw the progress of the heroine, I was particularly happy. I suddenly envied the author for the heroine who was created by your writing. I was thinking that the satisfaction and joy of creating a nurturing heroine should be greater than the inner satisfaction we readers get from reading novels, right? Come on, author, it looks great. It's read by tens of thousands of people but there are too few people who have rated it. I'm in a hurry. I hope this book becomes popular, so that the author will be more motivated. I feel like the title of the novel is holding me back. It should be brighter and more eye-catching, and accurately collect readers who love reading strategy articles. I hope that the heroine will gradually become stronger step by step. The system feels like it can be optimized, for example, can it be updated? Add some new features, such as various skills and items that are difficult to learn in life. The heroine needs a strong core. I look forward to when she becomes fearless.

Family members, don't be fooled by the title of the book. The portrayal of the heroine is really great. From the beginning, she was dissatisfied with the mediocre life and followed the system to conquer men. Later, she realized the cruelty of the system and the instability of the current situation. It can be seen that the heroine's core is always determined to fight for more capital for herself and have more choices. If you like to watch big heroines, come read it. The setting of the plot is also reasonable. You can feel that the author has personally thought about how the heroine can break the situation with the existing conditions. The process of conquering is not just to please. Instead, show your own value and ability and use your existing resources to get what you want. Very thumbs up! !

It's good to watch, but the first male protagonist was a failure in writing (don't say it's just a failure in writing) But other than that, there are many remarkable things The growth and conflicts of the heroine are very good

It's good-looking, and I like the heroine's serious strategy. Others are not like some other novels where the heroine is beautiful and I fell in love with it as soon as I met. I hope that the heroine can also develop on her own path, relying on men instead of relying on them.

The author's writing is really good. In it, I saw the life of a real heroine who is an ordinary girl who has been reborn and broadened her horizons. Just like at the beginning, the heroine wanted to conquer others and just wanted to learn to become better. Then she also madly absorbed the strength of men and turned it into her own motivation. She moved up step by step. Her emotions were also very delicate. She was very affectionate towards each male protagonist. He analyzes and transforms himself carefully, so that his core becomes very powerful. He does not blindly rely on men, but analyzes his own pros and cons in terms of relationships with them. He knows how to escape in time and rely on them to achieve his own leap. In my eyes, this is already a very good book. I hope the author will continue to write [Blow Kiss][Please update][Please update]

It's a really good and innovative article. There are a lot of foreshadowings for the psychological changes of the heroine in the early stage, which is a bit boring, but in the later stage, the heroine is really charming (I am honest about the development of female protagonists in the comment section). She gradually awakens her desires and ambitions under the aura of the handsome guy and the heartthrob, and does not easily waver in the face of her deep love for the target. P. S. Compared with some heartthrob guide articles that over-describe the men and make the heroine feel like she has been reduced to a supporting role or a cover-up, this article really puts a lot of effort into every change of the heroine, so her image is very three-dimensional. Focusing the writing on the heroine, the heroine is really comfortable

The overall recommendation is currently only about 80 chapters, but each chapter has a large number of words, so the content is very detailed. It has now advanced to the point where the heroine's career has taken off, and the fifth man has come to the table. The setting is quite good. The heroine is a real ordinary person. After getting the system, she uses the strategy to conquer men to become beautiful. But the ultimate goal is to gain knowledge, gain abilities and connections, and finally be able to control her own life. The growth line along the way is very obvious. There was a time in the middle where it was a bit ugly and I wanted to abandon the article, because the heroine was too conflicted and relied on the system. She wanted to be beautiful and devilish. She had obviously achieved stage success and had a lot of inner drama. For a while, I felt that she was very clear-headed and knew that relying on the system was poisonous. However, after reasoning for a long time, I finally concluded that it was outrageous to think that the system was my only life-saving straw. Every time the favorability level is leveraged or pushed to a certain level, the inner drama is very exaggerated, like winning a jackpot, tremblingly exchanging beauty skills, like a drug addict, the segments are too long, and it's a bit tiring to watch on mobile phones, the traces of AI in the front are obvious, and there are many repeated descriptions, which makes it very verbose and stiff. However, the author adjusted quickly and became more and more beautiful after his career started.

I saw this novel on the recommendation list. Looking at the name, I thought it was a very cliched heartthrob at first, but no, the heroine has her own goals. Although she uses a strategy to gain the love of the target person and gain points to get what she wants, it gives me a feeling of fighting monsters and upgrading. After climbing over a mountain, what I see is not the summit, but a higher mountain. I like that the heroine in the author's works is very ambitious and dares to think and do. I will always follow you, author!

The writing is quite good, but the introduction is very simple, but the heroine still doesn't feel very suitable. In my opinion, it's not a problem for the heroine to date several men at the same time, because he is very good and very good. I support the heroine to date several men at the same time and leave if she can't accept it.

It's super well written, my God, the thinking of this writing is not like that of a novice at all, it's completely like that of a mature author in Jiang, haha, I haven't seen such a great book in a long time, keep updating, the book will definitely explode [Blow kiss]

So pretty! It whetted my appetite enough. The sense of immersion is so strong. These male protagonists all want to win over the female protagonist. The use of language is particularly good. Some parts made me cry. Oh my God. Author, please add more soon.

Very good, the writing is smooth and natural. Although she is a heart-throb heroine, she also really does her homework and carefully conquers the story. It's not just that the other person will like her just by flirting with her. The strategy process will not be overly embarrassing. In addition, the heroine's breakup is clean and tidy, and her goals are clear. She is ambitious, and it is not the ambition to marry into a wealthy family, but the ambition to be a powerful person herself. Come on. I hope that the heroine will not forget her original intention and become that big tree herself.

It's quite interesting and novel, but it feels like it's the author's debut novel. It's not rigorous in some places, but it's still interesting. My favorite part of the story is Brother Chulian. It's really on a Bai Yueguang level. The only thing I don't understand is Qin's final ending. Well, how should I put it? From the very beginning of a well-photographed male idol who was bohemian, to later ending up in a mental hospital, it's a bit cruel. I'd rather the heroine not attack him and let him immerse himself in her own life.

It's a very interesting story. The heroine goes to great lengths to get to know and gain a crush on men who have a crush of 85 or above. It's an eye-opener. It's true that everyone needs a different routine. In fact, I feel very sorry for Lin Yusheng. She was broken up by a cliff when she loved her most, and there was no revenge or anything. Fortunately, I accepted him in the end. The process was quite good. The heroine used the help of beauty to boost her career. She is a very sober heroine. The ending was quite unexpected, I actually ended up with a few! (Why did the author write Qin Yu as a person with mental problems? He could have written Qin Yu as a normal person, which is not bad anyway.)

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh comments comments like Mary Fang's comment about them. I didn't expect it to be so good. The heroine is really beautiful when she improves herself Well, it ended so suddenly. It was very interesting to watch at the beginning, but the story just started to end.

In the article about becoming beautiful, the man in the strategy is basically pretending to be weak, and the whole thing accidentally makes the man feel pity for him, that is, pity her, and then the heroine becomes more and more beautiful, and the man likes this kind of weak, pitiful, and beautiful girl, and then the strategy is successful, which is a lightning mark for me.

It's really good-looking, and it's not just a love at first sight joke that makes you fall in love until death. It's unrealistic. This is realistic enough. It's very difficult. And the heroine is really cruel. With this courage, even if she doesn't change her beauty, she is still the best among people. One more word. If there is a spin-off or a second book, it will be written about returning to reality. As all the things that Li Momo has mastered after rebirth, and the changed personality, returning to her introverted 30-year-old, will she set sail again? The feeling will be directly sublimated.

It took me two days to catch up. The female protagonist is my favorite character. She has a clear goal. She can only use the bad male protagonist, but she also has feelings for the better male protagonist. However, she always knows that she must rely on herself to go further and use the system to continuously make herself better. Personally, I feel that the shortcoming is that the author polished the previous chapters, so they have a very obvious AI feel, which makes me feel more human-machine when reading. However, after the changes were made later, the writing became more natural. All in all, it's not bad. The heroine, like Mary Fang, is sober and has a strong core.

The overall pace is not sluggish and fast. There are 5 male protagonists, and I prefer the innocent one. The heroine has a good personality, relatively independent and sober. From the beginning when I was not confident when facing handsome guys, I later became unfazed when facing handsome guys, and I could easily exude charm. I feel very relieved to see the heroine grow up step by step. But it felt like it ended a little too quickly. Maybe I felt that the male protagonist's character or description was not very well established. As a result, I actually didn't have a deep impression of the male protagonist in it, maybe because. The male protagonists in it feel quite easy to win, and the strategy process has been reduced to a certain routine, which lacks new ideas and the interest is not as high as it was at the beginning. But overall, I think this work is worth watching. Based on the above, I give it four stars. I encourage the author to write better novels. I hope that the emotional lines between men and women and the portrayal of the male protagonist can be more detailed and three-dimensional [Blow kiss] Moreover, in fact, the system behind it has no sense of existence. This is not a system in the real sense. Wen Ye does not have any popular cheats or anything like that, and it almost relies on the heroine's own efforts. Of course, in fact, the system still provides some "little help", which is a breath of fresh air in the kind of cheat text where the heartthrob has opened a lot of plug-ins.

Mary's visual sense ~ It's really good-looking, but I always feel that too many guides highlight the feeling of wholesale production on the assembly line [face covering] Overall, it's good-looking. Currently, my favorite is Zhou Fang [blowing kiss]

I must sigh with emotion. Sure enough, all the good books are rated 7 or 8. I wanted to go to bed at 10 o'clock, but after reading this novel, I didn't want to sleep until 1 in the morning. Oh my god... And I want to focus on one point. The characterization of the heroine is my favorite among the novels I have read recently. She is self-interested but not silly. No matter what decisions she makes, the psychological description is sufficient, and there is no sense of mystery. In fact, most female romance videos nowadays still focus on the creation of male protagonists. The portrayal of female protagonists is often slightly inferior to that of male protagonists. Some female protagonists may even appear to have a "human-machine" feeling and are a "tool person" to promote the plot and emotions of the novel. However, the author does not do this at all. It has already tied up and it is time to go to bed. I'm going to take a nap thinking about this favorite novel of late. Zzz

It's so good. Come on, author. I feel that this novel is really in line with my taste. It's not random and it's not brainless and refreshing. The heroine is not just a man who attacks men. She also realizes her own shortcomings and is constantly growing. I really love it! ! ! Not enough, not enough at all

A superb strategy type, playing with sincerity (intentionally seducing) [laughing evilly]. The first one became Ultra since he could talk to others. I can accept that the heroine can have a few conversations, but the man must torture him severely. The second one is really dark. He can imprison the heroine and even get angry at her. It's really No special No. The younger brother I haven't dated~ is suitable for being a polite little dog [laughing] Who wouldn't like someone who is well-behaved and sensible [blowing kiss] The third man who can exploit his abilities can be used. The heroine is very sober, and everyone can be trapped by the heroine one after another ~ [Chigua]

This book is the most popular one I have read about Heartthrob Raiders. The protagonist is just like an ordinary person, from being greedy, anxious, lost, and scared at the beginning, to becoming alert, agile, and wise after meeting various male protagonists. The male protagonist of each guide is actually more like a mirror to the female protagonist. They reflect what the female protagonist desires, needs, and lacks most at the moment. The female protagonist slowly climbs up on her own. It is a different and exciting article. It is so beautiful. The writing style needs to be improved, but others can never take away the core of your article. Support ❗

Many updates from the author. Very true. There are no cliche plots where everyone falls in love with the heroine because of her halo. Not bitchy, not flattering, but a great heroine. You are always the most important. [Shy][shy][shy] [Blows a kiss]. The hostess sets a good [air kiss] and will always move forward towards her goals. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It looks good, the heroine is very sober! Finally become a female entrepreneur! ! For the five of them, living a good life is more important than anything else! Qin's ending is a bit disappointing. He was a cold male god who didn't take anything seriously at first, but he didn't expect to be so self-centered later on. Although he often treated the heroine as a decoration and handled the work himself, causing the heroine's head injury. He kidnapped the heroine twice. He used his power to suppress the heroine. He couldn't imagine being kidnapped into a dark dark room and doing it every day. How scared the heroine was. Maybe people really can't be judged by their appearance. She was not like this when she was reminded that her first love will turn black.

It's tied, now the plot is getting better, come and comment: It's very good-looking. It doesn't crazily show off men's greasiness and magic in the name of Mary Sue. No matter how the plot changes, it still focuses on the feelings and growth of the heroine. Although it is a bit idealistic when solving the problem of conquering men, the heroine is very clear-headed and knows what her goals are. She does not regret herself for a moment. Stop moving forward for your own career, and men are not perfect either. Although the early stage is really a bit artificial, and the heroine has little experience in dealing with men's problems, but the growth of the heroine is written in the follow-up. I can only say that it is not silly and sweet, but a story about the career of a strong Mary Sue woman. The strategy for becoming beautiful is just a means and not an end [laughs]