An Ordinary Man's Path to Immortality Begins with Taking Over His Master's Body

The hierarchical logic is quite good, and the level planning is very good, but the description of the regional environment for cultivating immortals is not so fairy-like. I hope the author can describe the regional environment for cultivating immortals in a style that satisfies the readers' enjoyment of reading the book. The level upgrading must be based on the logic of age. Cultivation as an immortal should be done as it is. Don't make another story about cultivating immortals in the imperial era without the style of cultivating immortals. Come on, the author, please don't finish the book.

There's a bit of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality in it, but there are also a lot of innovations, so it's worth a look. The more I write, the better. Especially the plot in the secret realm is tense and interlocking.

It can be seen that there are shadows of the legend of mortals cultivating immortals, with foreshadowing and answers. I have finished the second volume so far, and it is not bad. The pace is good and the writing is okay.

And the Japs? Ran away

Shuguang, this book is the spiritual support for us bookworms for more than ten or twenty years.

Not bad, it feels a bit like the previous books.

Very good. I like this kind of novel about mortals cultivating immortals. The plot is not exaggerated.

There are a lot of things that I am not satisfied with, so I can only give it 4 stars.

Not bad, five-star support

The plot is pretty good