Dream of the Red Chamber: I Steal Tanchun's Marriage Alliance and Unleash the Power of a Tyrant

It's almost meaningless. The protagonist wants to be patient but also wants to pretend to be a bitch in front of outsiders. Overall, it's okay. I hope the author writes better and better [laughing]

So far it's not bad, but you have to keep it, don't lick, don't abuse, and treat the heroine with a normal attitude. Writing a novel is not an easy task, but with a good start, the difficulty will be much less. Spend more time conceiving the plot, follow the plot to follow the plot line, and try not to substitute personal preferences. Novels are different from self-interested works. The plot needs to be reasonable and reasonable. You can't say, I can write whatever I want. Ahem, maybe my expectations are too high, so I am playing tricks on my own. After all, there are really not many good-written Red Mans fanfics. They are either matryoshka dolls, random writing, or they are just made up of a single female protagonist. Come on,

It's okay, it's just a refreshing piece of writing that uses conflicts and conflicts to cause emotional changes. It just feels a bit disconnected to me. The timeline has been greatly changed, and then you still use the original timeline for the relationship between them. Although it is less written, it is there.

It looks good, I like this kind of cool article, but I still have to remind you that the Tiger Cavalry is a heavy cavalry and the Leopard Cavalry is a light cavalry.

Hello, I am your reader My hometown is in a rural area and I have a donkey. This donkey is very talented and very good at grinding. He is very creative and the noodles he grinds are loved by everyone in the village. Even wealthy people from countless big cities come here to buy the noodles it grinds. This donkey has extraordinary intelligence and works hard every day. He has been working hard and grinding countless high-quality flours. The best flour has even won a world-class "Best Flour" award. All of us love this donkey, he is our divine donkey. But now he is slacking off and no longer grinding dough. We try to coax it and give it delicious food, hoping that it will continue to grind flour. But he said nothing and was unwilling to continue working. It said, "I'm tired and want to take a rest." As a result, it was dragged to the entrance of the village by the village chief and the villagers who were angry because they could not eat high-quality flour. They killed it and made it into donkey meat for burning. You said it was true. Even the donkeys in the production team didn't dare to rest like this. You said, why did it... Alas, why do you think I am talking to you about this? By the way, when are you going to update?

As expected of a female author, the writing and drama are good, the protagonist, the boss, is very interesting and not empty-handed, and the political battles are well depicted, but the martial arts drama is really average, and the overall structure is a little messy, and there are very few logical inconsistencies. Overall, it's a 7 or above. As a cool article, it's reasonable to give it four stars.

It is a refreshing article, which has the effect of sorting out the mood, forgetting worries and making you happy. And the control of the characters is also quite good. Look, keep going.

This book looks very cool and elegant

Urine is very beautiful and colorful under the microscope

The beginning is pretty good, support me [smile][smile] I scribbled it later and it felt very messy.