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What attracts me to this book is the first-person description. The sense of immersion is indeed stronger than the "God's perspective". Advantages: Strong sense of immersion, good writing style, and detailed metaphors and status descriptions. Disadvantages: Strong sense of substitution, strange metaphors (like AI). I can generally understand the author's intention. Take away the gender and use the first perspective, so the sense of substitution will be really strong. But there's a problem: People often think they can make the best plan. Example: The protagonist wants to go to the embassy. According to the world view of "Bungou Stray Dogs", it should be modern. Even if you are in a ghost state and have contact ability, it is just that others cannot see you. If you want to go to the embassy or return to China, there are many solutions. The main character feels like a cowardly sissy to me.

I like it very much. I like it very much. It is not a brainless and cool novel with no brainless cheats. The protagonist walks very hard step by step. If you want to read a brainless and refreshing novel, you can't see it. I think the protagonist is a very gentle person and I have met very gentle people. Grandma and Shiraishi have become anchors. One is the hope of living and the other is the hook of human nature. Well, although he has killed countless people, he is a good person (Mist). The protagonist's superpowers are too damaging and he can't die, but the pain is real. The protagonist loses himself bit by bit and doesn't even have a name, which is really heartbreaking. The protagonist is also very strong, or has to be strong. What hurts me the most is that the protagonist doesn't even have a friend, Nakaya Hakai, Dazai has Ango and Odasaku, and the protagonist looks at them like children who need to be taken care of. Shiraishi's guide is gone, and grandma doesn't recognize the protagonist. I seem to have seen Odasaku holding a weapon against the leader and killing him (with a knife), and the protagonist thinks that Tosi is the one to blame. They are friends, and they still want to drink coffee together, but Tuosi's purpose was not pure from the beginning. The subordinates were afraid of the protagonist, the boss plotted against the protagonist, and there was a lot of cause and effect, and there was no one to talk to, so he was not crazy. He talked about the core values of socialism from time to time to make sure that he still had a basic conscience. I also like Leader Mori. Although the protagonist was plotted, Mori really rescued the protagonist and gave him a home. He also protected his grandma very well. Even when his grandma was sick, he told the protagonist to let him take a closer look. Although I still think that the gangsters who bullied grandma were arranged by Sen. It is the best solution for a few small people to win over the cadres. But even without Sen, the protagonist would not be able to go back. He did have a psychological problem at that time and was too indifferent to human life. There are too few chapters. Please update. Can you update ten chapters a day? Very nice book

The real writing style I have read is by an androgynous author, and the genderless Nakamura is really imaginative and touching! ! ! ! No matter whether Nakamura's gender is changed to female or male, he fits the character perfectly. No one dislikes Nakamura, and no one can hate Nakamura! ! ! I don't allow others to disobey Nakamura! ! ! Everyone give me the chance to be Nakamura's dog! ! ! ! ! ! (Screaming

It is very delicate, and the transformation from fear, disgust and disgust when a person shoots a gun to numbness and indifference after he can never really die due to his own powers makes people feel desperate. Shiraishi's death and grandma's forgetfulness (side effects of [death is life] superpower) are really very tearful,,,,

Very good book! Potential stock! The first-person perspective and the settings that don't clearly indicate the protagonist's age, gender, etc. Are very immersive! The plot is also very interesting and makes people want to read on. The plot is very good, very reassuring (falling to the ground peacefully) But there is still a little regret... I initially thought that the protagonist's ability was to become a ghost. I was really looking forward to it, but in the end it wasn't... Oh no! I don't think I will write another book after finishing this one, in which the protagonist's ability is to become a ghost. Death can realize the transformation from entity to ghost. It feels great! (Or I can write it myself... Hiss, have I finished it...) And Shiraishi! Why did he die (crying), and his grave was dug up by the idiot former leader? I'm so angry, the leader who killed a thousand swords! That's pretty much it for now... Anyway, keep up the good work! Looking forward to the next plot! ~(￣▽￣~)~

High rating! ! ! It should be ranked high on the ranking list of literary and literary works, but maybe it's because this book hasn't been discovered yet, so the rating is a bit low. The character of Nakamura is really portrayed in a three-dimensional way. The design of the ghost at the beginning is really novel. I was attracted by this "ghost". The character is not oo c, the writing is superb, and the emotions are really rich! Very empathetic! ! It's a little bit sharp, but I think this kind of slightly sharpened writing looks the most enjoyable. It's such a good novel, and the author must not stop updating it! ! 🥰🥰 I originally read the original work, but I was rather sad later on. The early writing was very good, Nakamura's image was successfully created, and there was a plot that made people cry. However, the rhythm in the later stages was not so good, but then I went to watch this new Shushu line. It is really super good-looking! The author's writing becomes smoother and smoother after writing, and I feel like my wrinkles have been smoothed out 😌 And it's the limited edition black sesame rice dumpling Nakamura! ! ! I really love this setting, it's so cool! (Of course, it would be better if you could add some emotional connections between Nakamura and popular characters. In this case, this novel might become more popular (?) Out of some selfish reasons of my own 🥺)

It's super good-looking but I don't know why it's not popular. It has a strong sense of immersion and the writing is great. I also really like the character of the protagonist. His experience has been a bit miserable, but I'm a bt and I just like to eat knives (vomiting blood). The supporting characters are also described very realistically and realistically. I broke my guard several times [crying][crying][crying] because of the emotions inside, but I just watched it cool down. I have been trying to save it. The student party signed in to receive gold coins when they had no money. I hope the author will work hard, it is really really good-looking! [Blowing kiss]

At first small comment: It's very good-looking, not a cool novel, the emotions are detailed and very delicate, and the emotional lines are delicious! ! ! The plot is relatively slow and the update frequency is very ordinary, especially suitable for young and old people (?). There is no cp line in the main text, so you can eat it with confidence. There is no cp line in the extras, all cb, not OOC at all (´･ω･`)♪───Ｏ (≧∇≦)Ｏ────♪ Next are some questions: 1. Will the teacher consider issuing a single CP line? I really want to eat Zai x me (Nakamura) and Shiraishi x me (Nakamura) 2. Will there be more delicious candy extras? The new year will be better for me (Nakamura) (￣^￣)ゞ3. Can't find a few completed volumes or more books? ( ･᷄ὢ･᷅ ) 4. If Nakamura is 80 years old (maybe...) What age will the mouse be resurrected to? Is it a 16 that just came over or something like that? 5. Why does Zai's superpower not work on the village (me)? Is it invalid for all effects (such as clearing ST...) In short, Happy New Year, teacher! Looking forward to reply…(´･Д･)"

No, I went on Tomato today and saw that the rating was 7.1. I was really shocked. The author's writing is very good, the content is logical and absolutely not "striking". Every character becomes lifelike in his hands. It can be said that you are very comfortable reading it. I have been following this book since it was first written. The author listens to the opinions of fans very much. I want to hear the fans' evaluation of the protagonist. I really watched her step by step. Congratulations to the author for the rating of 7.1. I believe it will get more ratings in the near future and it will become popular! Come on!

What a very nice book! Great potential! It will definitely be 9 or above in the future (probably). Because it is in the first person, the psychological changes of the protagonist are really well written. Let people see a cold (bushi) and gentle Nakamura. And the plot is also very good, with ups and downs, very interesting. Although it is very rough, things are getting better now. I beg the author not to give me a knife. Nakamura was really suffering and tired before, but now he is finally getting better. Please understand me

Nakamura is a gentle person. He first existed as a ghost and did not belong to the worldview of "Bungou Stray Dogs". It can be seen that the author has worked hard on the setting. The power of "death is life" is very interesting. Nakamura's dependence on the power from the beginning to his later relief can be regarded as a kind of growth and integration. "Living towards death" may be my evaluation of Nakamura's character, which is very consistent with his power and growth background. As a reader, I can clearly see the strength and weakness of Nakamura as an ordinary person who strays into another world. A relatively novel setting, but there are still some holes in the article that have not been filled in. I look forward to filling them in the future. I didn't expect that the author is still a student. He is very good. Keep up the good work. ^-^

Not to mention that the sense of immersion in the first person is very strong and the author's writing style is very delicate. The integration of some emotions is just right and immersive. Anyway, I was quite moved. And the beginning is not like other Bunno works, of course it is not to belittle other works, I just feel that the protagonist has no mission from the perspective of an ordinary person as in other works, or I originally knew that this is an anime about Bungo Stray Dogs, but I first wrote about the transition of ordinary people to a strange place to get to know Grandma Kimura, and then meet Mr. Shiraishi and then get to know the other protagonists. The relationship between the protagonist, Grandma Kimura and Mr. Shiraishi is also very touching, and it makes me feel sad to watch it. I hope to keep updating, it would be better if there are more updates [Shy][Flowing Kiss][You Savor][Admiration][Sending Hearts][Love][KISS]

It's so good. It's one of the few literary works that I find good. The author's writing style is very good, the character of the protagonist is very interesting, the plot logic is reasonable, and the character's personality is not OOC. I hope you can stick to it [Love][Love]

Nakamura Nakamura, you are so gentle, I like you so much, Nakamura Nakamura, you are so beautiful and handsome, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you so much ♡＾▽＾♡ Nakamura Nakamura, your black hair is as dazzling as silk, your eyes shine like stars, my poor words cannot describe you, I love you, I love you so much, I keep repeating, I love you so much, because I really do I love you so much ᰔᩚ/•᷅•᷄\\୭It's no surprise that I like you, because you are you. I fall in love with you in the author's writing. There is no ghost more handsome than you in the world. Nakamura, what's wrong with you? You are so cute. Nakamura, Nakamura, you are a ghost, floating in the world. There is no ghost more handsome than you in the world.

It's very good-looking, there are swords for those who deserve it, and there's no OOC, nothing like that. Dazai's restrained and respectful favor in the early stage, and his coquettishness and cuteness in the later stage are all delicious, Nakaya is very cute, Odasaku is very good, but it's a pity, I feel sorry for Shiraishi, and the heroine is miserable, but she is really good and deserves the happiest life.

This book is considered to be the best fanfic of Bungou Stray Dogs that I have ever read. It is also the first novel that I have read that is narrated in the first person. The substitution is very strong. Nakamura's character is very full and sadistic. However, the two endings are heart-warming. Nakamura has finally come to the end of his hardships. Good cheers to the author!

Beautiful, very beautiful. Love Nakamura! I like Nakamura who is very good! ! Lovely Nakamura! ! ! Already succumbing to its charm, surrendering without any resistance... Who could not like Nakamura? (≧▽≦) Crying loudly late at night... Really, my heart hurts, it hurts so much, and I feel so tired. There is nothing left... Is it the price of staying up late reading novels? …

It's a very nice fan book, and there's no problem keeping it on par. The quality is good, but why isn't it popular? Anyway, I like it very much and thank the author for his creation and dedication [love].

The ending is full of flowers ~ I really like Dada's writing and plot ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ ) ✧ There are tears and laughter, Nakamura is a very good person, and everyone watched the good ending, which makes people's hearts sour and warm (Fei Jia:?) Hehe, I always think the other line will be very interesting. I look forward to the extra and if lines. Thank you for bringing such a delicious book [Sending Hearts]

I can no longer express my understanding of Teacher's plot and characters in words... Thank you Teacher for writing this fanfic [crying] This is also the first time I have eaten such delicious food! No gender setting, open ending! It leaves room for readers to imagine. I am really lucky to have read this book. I have given up on being a writer for several years, but after seeing the fanfic written by the teacher, I decided to catch up on my progress after taking the exam! Nakamura has changed a lot. From the transparent person at the beginning, to the novice who accidentally joined the mafia, he rose to the cadre and killed his own soul. The moment I saw him lose his memory, I couldn't help but breathe a sigh of relief for him across the screen. Every death was real. In order to keep his subordinates safe when working in the mafia, he took over risky tasks by himself. No matter how many times he died, he would be resurrected... It was so gentle. When I saw Grandma Nakamura forgetting and driving him away, I guessed the development in my heart, but I still couldn't help but get wet in my eyes. In a strange city, learning a strange language, and finally forgetting everything about myself, the teacher is too sweet, and Nakamura's early madness, hidden tenderness and occasional weakness...! I will follow you! Moreover, while reading the article, there is also a drawing of Nakamura Hehe from the reader teacher in the comment area. It is simply a state banquet! I would like to praise the author again. His grasp of the plot is really great. From the foreshadowing of the ghost at the beginning to the death of Bai Shi, Bai Yueguang's "resurrection" is like a substitute meal, but it is also very delicious! God knows how surprised I was when I found that it matched the foreshadowing of the previous dozens of chapters. The author is so great. What did he say during the character game? How will the plot develop next? It also needs to correspond to the settings of the original work. Thanks for your hard work! I open Little Tomato every day and read this book, but it only took a few days to reach the ending? Oh my God, the squatting teacher is out of line! [Shy]

I forgot to rate... This one is so good, woohoo, I have a little brain fog, maybe it will be confused with other secretaries... Nakamura, I saw a lot of people saying that he is cowardly, but I don't think so... I can't do better if I substitute him, not to mention that he is not a particularly powerful person in the first place. I felt very uncomfortable when I was forced to kill Shirakawa and dissect him later... It was so warm when I got along with grandma... It turned out to be a big knife woo woo. Being dragged to grow up, forced to work hard, even if I want to die, I can't help it because I feel so distressed by the superpowers that I can't get rid of... QmQ (I haven't made up for it until now. I will make up for it tomorrow!

The writing is good, I like the feeling of confusion and despair in the first few chapters. Although the author said that the protagonist has no gender preference, I am a female, so I assume that the protagonist is also a female [laughing], no cp praise

Okay, this author is also writing about awesome Foklas, okay, I just told my whole family to call me to resign, to drop out of school, and to read this novel full-time at home, okay, I am Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? After reading it, my depressed child is no longer OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I want to eat 200 servings of this awesome Klass every day. Doubao helped me generate the author's bikini photos, and Doubao told me tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, and os finally allowed me to eat something delicious. The author's daily updates are also very fast. It must be highly praised and supported. It is very well written. It's awesome, okay. I directly wish the author that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty-six, seven seven forty-nine. I'm so afraid that the author will post updates. Isn't that what I'm afraid of? Do you dare to post updates? I heard that an author suddenly posted more than 600 posts and won 5 million in the lottery. The author is awesome. Apache Apache.

The teacher's writing is so good that I almost cried. I strongly recommend it. The teacher's writing style is very delicate. Nakamura's superpower is really a big knife. In the end, the teacher dares to update a hundred chapters and it scares me to death. [Aggrieved]

"Wen Ye: I can't die, I can't die at all!" Book Review This novel takes "immortality" as its core setting and explores the cost and meaning of immortality in the worldview of "Bungou Stray Dogs". The protagonist gains immortality due to supernatural powers or curses, but has to endure mental torture and emotional blunting. He continues to experience the death of relatives and friends during his long life, and gradually falls into loneliness and self-doubt. The story adopts the narrative style of "sugar with a knife", and the warm daily life is often followed by the death or betrayal of the characters, forming a strong emotional contrast. Through the protagonist's inner monologue and other people's evaluations, the novel deeply explores philosophical propositions such as existentialism and the value of life, and shows the kind heart that persists in despair.

It was really well written, I read it in one night. But I really feel for the protagonist. I cried all night after watching it ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅

The teacher writes very well! I feel that Nakamura and Dazai get along very warmly, and we are both good kids (ˊ˘ˋ*)♡

The characterization is delicate and rich. It really makes you feel immersed and sad when you look at it. Why is it so well written? I will follow you for the rest of my life [I'm about to cry]

The logic and plot are written very clearly and completely. It is one of the few articles that I can read word for word. The writing is also very good! [Sending Hearts] There will be no mistakes in the character image, you can rest assured to watch it

It's really good to read. The author's writing is delicate and comfortable to read (somewhat strange adjectives). It's the best literary fanfic I've read so far [laughing] I hope the author will work harder❛˓◞˂̵✧ It's so beautiful (Kuai Chi [Sparrow Food Masterpiece])