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The long review is here, I really like Sister Ran, she is unique and delicate, I need more sisters (serious) [smile] I like Dada's text, quiet and gentle, she is what I love (Satisfied Dada: You! Hao! Handsome/Nihao Bang) The plot is very good, especially the description of rebirth, which is very good. I personally (don't ask) approve of it. I expect/desperately need to be sick! Sweet! Write the ending: The wind in the mountains and fields was picked up by the pen tip, half of it was found by the author, a quarter fell into the world, a quarter embraced Sister Jiang Heran, and the last quarter blew away Yue Lao's eyes, making him hurry to pull the red thread, and the marriage was happy from then on. Come on, don't ask for updates, just take your time. Once we meet, blessings will always follow. Come on (reply to me and be longer...)

I was really touched by the early plot. The author perfectly describes a girl who suffers from mental illness due to family reasons. The girl's resistance to the outside world can only be revealed when she faces the person she really likes. Her love for the boy can only be expressed through her own psychology. 3526.2 She knows that the boy will not be short of money. This series of numbers implies the bravery of the girl in her final love for the boy. In the second life, the girl feels the boy's affection for her, but is afraid that the other person will leave and abandon her and deceive herself. I love the boy silently in my heart and use the boy's love as motivation. I dare to face my past self and inner demons. I defeat my scumbag father. Under the influence of the boy, I gradually open my heart to the world and successfully integrate into the new family. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is at the peak of ambiguity, but it has not been broken. (The future plot direction should not be far away from Maya expressing her feelings, and it should be a two-way confession together.) It is really well written, and I hope that people like us can find our own salvation. Escape from the Pain is so well written that I cried when I read it TT [I almost cried] Author nb

After reading for a while, I probably finished the Li Yang chapter, and I feel that this book really has great potential. The despair and powerlessness in the first dozen chapters are very vividly depicted, and the scene where the hospital receives rescue really makes the male protagonist feel desperate. Even after rebirth, the sequelae of this despair, such as claustrophobia, are still affecting the male protagonist. Despite this, the male protagonist is still taking good care of the female protagonist, and at the same time, the female protagonist is also dispelling the male protagonist's fear bit by bit, which can be regarded as a two-way journey. The second point is that the author's writing is very tense. For example, the male protagonist Li Yang is described in two paragraphs, but it lingers in my mind. The feeling of paranoia, madness, and the explosion of suppressed emotions is indeed novel. The third point is that the plot arrangement is also very reasonable. The first 65 chapters are very open and close, and the general process is: despair (before rebirth to fight Li Yang) - beauty (the happy life of the male and female protagonists) - despair (the female protagonist disappears, I have to say that in this section, the male protagonist's hysteria relapses is really shocking) - good ending. This kind of bold plot is really enjoyable to watch. That's about it. The remaining 60 or so pictures will be savored when I have a holiday tomorrow.

I've read about chapter 90, so let's review it. Let's talk about the ugly things first, let's talk about the shortcomings first 1. Typo This point has basically been corrected. There were a lot of typos when I first read it, but it's much better now; 2. Theme There is basically no yandere (I didn't see it anyway), and there is always a feeling of being a sheep over someone's head [face covering]; 3. Character dialogue There are some places where it's a little rough, but it's not a big problem (mainly because I'm more picky); —— Advantages: 1. Sweet I can't criticize this point, it's just a sweet little article, it's really healing to read when life is very tiring [ Eat Melon ]; 2. Slow pace Strictly speaking, this cannot be considered an advantage, but I think it is not easy to slow down in a fast-paced life; 3. Personality The character of Sister Xu is very well written. Although she is basically not related to the yandere, she is a gentle and intellectual elder sister who can be said to be the white moonlight of many people. To sum up, I give it four stars. After all, there are still some shortcomings, but maybe they will change after I watch it for a while.

After watching the blockbusters: Disaster Movie: "Breaking Bad" Inspirational film: "Update" Action Movie: "Send the Blade" Horror Movie: "Abandon Update" Liberation Film: "Continuous Update" Detective film: "Who is not updated" Youth Movie: "Update of Leaving in a Hurry" Bitter romance film: "Silently Waiting for Updates" Friendly film: "Brothers, let's update together" Romance Movie: "The Indissoluble Bond between the Author and Update" War Movie: "The Updated Battle between Authors and Readers" Suspense film: "The mysteriously missing author" Family film: "Where Are the Authors?" Science Fiction Film: "The Alliance" Fantasy film: "I am reborn as an immortal and urge updates in the immortal world" Martial arts film: "The Legend of the Hero"

The first few chapters depressed me so much that I couldn't help but feel really redeemed. But the writing style is quite good, with a bit of a literary youth feel. The plot connection is also relatively smooth, and there is nothing to criticize, so I give it 5 stars [laughs]

It's very beautiful. The description at the beginning is very good. It reminds me of Little Ears.

A very good book, I stayed up for another hour [I understand] [I understand] [I understand], the writing style is more delicate, the male and female protagonists are vivid, the psychological description is a little exaggerated, but it is within the acceptable range [full] [full] [full] [full]

All the softest folds of the soul are spread out under your eyes, as if the lines of the heart are soaked in the moonlight, and even the gossamer-like trembling with every beat is clearly visible. , It is doomed, the wind passing by your fingertips can turn me into spring water and drown me, and when you turn around, you can bring up the shadow, and it can also cut me in half, allowing the moonlight to leak into the cracks. The trust you hold out is a double-edged sword, but when you look at me At this time, my eyes were filled with the light of falling stars, so I was willing to take off all my armor, put the switch that could easily crush me, and gently put it in your palm. There are thousands of people in the world, but you are the only one I dare to bet on, the chip that will not let me lose all. PS: Rate this book

Yeah, let's watch it for a while. It's quite good. If I think it's good, I'll help you push it more in Shuhuang Square [crying] [crying] I gave you all my power generation for love today.

The author's writing is very good, the writing style is very delicate, and the content is also very warm. I have read many articles, but the author's writing is the most comfortable. Every silent companionship and daily life can reflect the emotions of both parties.

Less toxic, the plot is simple and direct, and the writing is okay The heroine is not sick enough👊😡This is why she is possessive👊😡Write more for me later👊😡Otherwise you know my methods, my friend🤤At the moment, I can probably give it 8-8.5 Points. When was the book opened?😡It only has less than 100 chapters👊😡I read it in one night Two updates a day to maintain health👊😡👊 Roll it up for me😡😡😡I know this is difficult but this is the order of the reader master😡Do not disobey🤤

The author's writing is first-class, and the details of the characterization are also very good. It's just that the settings of the male and female protagonists are the same as TM stacking buffs, but it doesn't affect the look and feel at all. Some places may even make you feel inexplicably reasonable.

Endless grassland, endless corridors. You and I are both running. The hearts have been fused together for a long time. Since the body cannot touch, then abandon the body and throw it out of the universe. Then feel it with your heart. Destiny makes us meet and makes us lose. Infinite love has grown in my heart, so use infinite love to break the barriers of fate.

The characters are vividly described, but the environment is missing a bit. The psychological descriptions are very appropriate, and the facial expressions are also very good. Especially going to the amusement park makes me yearn for it. The description is very good, and it allows me to experience it myself.

This review is written specifically after reading the latest chapter. It can be seen that the author's writing style has a bit of a dragon flavor, but it also has its own style. The male protagonist's gradual change in mentality to make up for the regrets of his previous life, as well as the fusion of the vicissitudes of rebirth and the youthful spirit are all shown. Although the pace is slow, the changes in the male and female protagonists can be seen. Among the slow-burning yandere novels I have read, it is considered good. I gave it five stars and look forward to the plot after the heroine is reborn.

Fortunately, the theme is very novel, and I think the male and female protagonists are pretty good. But first of all, there was nothing wrong with it before rebirth. After rebirth, the male protagonist did not go to the female protagonist immediately. Instead, he became passive and waited for the female protagonist's call. Secondly, it is admitted that it is important to obey traffic rules, but human life is at stake, and in reality there are examples of people breaking the rules to save lives. Then, after arriving at the heroine's house, it's okay to comfort the heroine first, but then I feel that it's not the time to eat cake. Although the heroine can kill that person alone with a knife, she needs to be prepared to some extent, such as bringing a weapon, or calling the police, preparing evidence in advance, and even getting in without imposing a death sentence. Fortunately, the person is not strong, or the hero is too strong. Anyway, that's it for now. The front may be a little bad, and I may try to persuade some people to quit, or maybe I'm trying too hard, but the back is really good [Thinking] In short, it feels pretty good, and it's a nice little sweet article.

The psychological description of the male protagonist at the beginning is very good. After the male protagonist was reborn, the female protagonist also successfully defeated her inner demons and said goodbye to her past self. At present, I personally feel that the writing is good, please support the author [Like]

Just love looking at yandere without thinking.

Four stars. The plot is very interesting and the story is interesting. One star less is just because I don't like watching Lily dramas.

Redemption and yandere, perfect setting

Forget it, forget it, I'm afraid you'll be proud, so I'll give you five stars [laughing evilly]

It's pretty good-looking. I think it's no problem if it scores high. It's pretty good-looking.

The author's writing is delicate, the characters are well-drawn, and the rhythm is great. It's a very good book.

It's good-looking (♥∀♥), but if you, the author, make abusive articles [angry][angry][angry], I'll wait for you on the national highway

Hello author, why is what you write so true? I feel a little pain in my heart, I seem to be stressed, and I miss my mother.

I have read Chapter 30 and highly recommend it. The male and female protagonists really impressed me, especially the image of the female protagonist. She is slightly sickly and has no bloody plot.

Very nice and well written, but not many people read it. Highly recommended👌🏻

The plot is relatively delicate, which is a bit lacking for veterans, but the author listens to advice and knows how to read comments. These are his strengths, so I give it five stars [I understand]

It's really good. After reading it, it's pretty good. I personally feel that the relationship between Bai Xinyue and Wang Lin can be expanded a bit later. The writing is a bit too hasty. I hope the author's books will get better and better.