Yoshikage Kira, but a High School Student

This book is too reductive of the characters. What I like most is the description of Dongfang Tomoko's language and behavior. The dialogue between Yoshikage Kira and Yoshihiro Kira is also outstanding. But in the original work, the anthropomorphic creature Kishibe Rohan... I can't stand it, so come on.

It's a good book. It's beautiful. You can really see the expression on Kira Yoshikage's defense [laughing and crying]

The battle of wits is very interesting, but the emotional scenes are a little stiff and slightly different from the original character. Maybe it's because of the change back to the student days? Overall, the development of the story is very interesting [Like]

The teacher seemed to be possessed by Araki, ah ah ah ah, I was in awe all the time, I haven't eaten this well in a long time - those metaphors are so amazing, they have the weird yet reasonable feeling of the original work. And the text and pictures are so strong, I feel like I'm reading another comic, but it's too short and not enough to read. Wow, oh, oh, oh, I caught up with the latest chapter in one day, Kurushi🥲

My name is Yoshikage Kira, 33 years old. Live in Duwang In the villa area in the northeastern part of the town, she is unmarried. I'm at Turtle Friends I work in a store and come home from get off work at 8 o'clock at the latest every day. I don't Smoking and drinking only lightly. Go to bed at 11pm, Make sure you sleep for 8 hours. Drink a glass of warm milk before going to bed, then Do 20 minutes of soothing exercise to warm up before going to bed. Ben Ben slept soundly until dawn. Like a baby, never tired Save the labor and stress for the next day. Even the doctor said I was very upright. Often I just want to say that I don't have any extravagant desires, I just hope Able to live in peace of mind. Win or lose, it's me who wins or loses The one who dislikes fussing the most. Because, that will only do it for yourself Come trouble and enemies. I am such a contented person, this It's also my outlook on life However, if I must take action, I will not lose to Anyone's [laughter]

It's very good, very good. Tomoko Higashikata and Shinobu Kawayasu have more scenes.

It's very JOJO-like, especially the intelligence game and stand-in battle. It's a rare resource. Compared with other Kira stories, the character change is pretty good. There's a good chance that Kira will become the ship's doctor [Thinking]

I think it's very fun. Although I have only read some clips and read some fan fiction, I can see the hidden things in the story. In my imagination, this is interesting.

I am Shennong, let me taste the saltiness first. Starting from 0 stars, Creativity +1⭐️ Writing +1⭐️ Beautiful JOJO Zhi Dou +1⭐️ Ups and downs of plot design +2⭐️ Matches the original settings +1⭐️ A little frustrating in the early stage -0.5⭐️ Wo! I am Shennong, this is the grass jelly

Good-looking 8K ultra-realistic facial modeling, soft skin filter (intensity 40%), iris dynamic highlight tracking "Blink parameters: "1.52 Second blink cycle (error ±0.1S), upper eye face droop angle 150, lower eye face micro tremor frequency 0.5HZ" Hair system: "2000+ hair independent dynamic simulation. The hair root fixation coefficient is 0.95. The fluttering range of the hair tips is 8-12cm"[Physical simulation·Wind field settings: "Point-shaped wind source behind the neck (wind speed 1.2M/s, turbulence intensity 6%)·Clothing lock:"The stiffness coefficient of the clothing anchor point is set to 9.8. The elastic modulus of the cloth is raised to 200GPa" The viewing angle does not move, only the hair is allowed to flutter, and the eyes blink once for 1.5 Seconds. Others do not move, and then cover with a slight blur filter.

Just like the original work, the peak wits and wonderful metaphors, smooth and natural prose and mature writing style are not brainless and cool. The IQ is online. The characters are real and awesome but not OOC. There is no problem in reading with a brain. I read the first Kira Yoshikage on Tomato and finished it. I didn't expect that the first one was the peak. This is the real treatment of the protagonist. He has suffered and grown. There are characterizations and bonds... Although there are a lot of foreshadowings buried in the article that are not recycled in the end, although the ending is so abrupt, and although this ending feels like there is a sequel but it is over, it does not affect this book becoming the top one in my heart at the moment😌🙏 Can someone punch me and make me lose my memory and read it again, or can the author write more that I will do anything.

It's good, but since Kira Yoshikage is reborn, he should awaken different abilities

The best Jojo fanfic I have ever seen. Although the protagonist is Kira Yoshikage, the author's writing is able to retain Kira's loving hands while still retaining Kira's taste without being disgusting. It is quite jojo-like. I can look forward to the future.

The combat wits so far are really good, there are no mentally retarded deus ex machina, the villains are given enough pressure, and the ending of the big event is also very warm. As for the amount of updates, although it is quite a lot, it is still too little. It is not enough to watch.

Not bad, not bad. The author is very good. I have been reading novels for two years. I have met very few people who are so good. There are only three in total. This is the third one. It is very good and the level is quite high. I hope it will be better in the future. Hehe, the original plot is quite high. I am not just adding the original plot to it.

A very good novel. I saw it for free on Tomato. The quality is really great. When I first read it, when I saw those Touhou Tomoko in front of me cheating on people, I still wanted to open up the harem. Looking at the later plot, there should be no harem, and there is no simple battle of the heroine, which is very consistent with Kira. I have read more than a hundred chapters now. I was still wondering why the time didn't match up with when I was in high school. Jotaro was probably in junior high school. You don't need to care about this anymore. It may be regarded as the author's private design. Some people may not like the plot with Touma Tomoko in the front and want to watch the battle more, but there are only dozens of gentle daily battles that are really good.

What a pair of miserable mandarin ducks, miserable partridges, miserable cormorants, miserable quails, miserable ostriches, miserable peacocks, miserable parrots, miserable cuckoos, miserable emu, miserable herons, miserable swan geese, miserable crested ibis, miserable hornbills, miserable lyrebirds, miserable hummingbirds. The goose is suffering, the nightingale is suffering, the crow is suffering, the sparrow is suffering, the heron is suffering, the albatross is suffering, the hoopoe is suffering, the shrive is suffering, the thrush is suffering, the woodpecker is suffering, the white-headed bulbul is suffering, the gray magpie is suffering, the lovebird is suffering, the weaver is suffering, the bird of paradise is suffering, the snowy owl is suffering. Snipe, Demoiselle Crane, Canary, Blue Bliss, Waxwing, Crested Fish Dog, Wood Finch, Kestrel, Bar-headed Goose, Red-crowned Crane, Yellow-breasted Bunting, Spoon-billed Sandpiper, Black-necked Crane, Blue Peacocks are suffering, flamingos are suffering, kiwis are suffering, boobies are suffering, frigate birds are suffering, herring gulls are suffering, rock doves are suffering, mountain doves are suffering, gray doves are suffering, rock doves are suffering, snow geese are suffering, pintail ducks are suffering, ribbed ducks are suffering, crested pochards are suffering, ugly ducks.

It's good, but it lacks some feeling when it becomes humane, such as the identity of the criminal. It should be to create the righteous Kira Yoshikage, so I feel a little controlled by others, but it has been laying the groundwork. It was not until Tsuji Aya's statement that I suddenly discovered that the character did not belong to my expectations but to the author's expectations, so I can only give this rating, but it is well written.

It's finished. There's such a big blank space. Suddenly I feel very empty. I want to read the next book as soon as possible.

In the original work, Kira Yoshikage kept hiding because he was afraid that his normal life would be broken, but he was not afraid. When Jotaro found out that he could not hide, he decided to seriously injure Jotaro and Koichi. After being beaten up by Star Platinum, he started to be afraid of the protagonist group after losing one of his hands. But the arrogance in his heart did not allow him to leave Morio Town, so that a loser was born, and Kira Yoshikage here was too weak. First, he was forced to go on a date with the epic-level enhanced Tomoko, and then he was coerced by the future Kishibe Rohan who did not know where he came from, and he was also blackmailed by the young Kishibe Rohan.

It's wonderful. The characterization, including the action language design, is perfectly in line with the original work. It also has the author's own innovation, but it doesn't feel abrupt at all. I didn't expect that Tomato could find such an excellent novel

A very good JoJo fan. The last time I saw such a good novel was Li Sin and the Stand's Creed. He is also very good at writing team battles. This is something that many fans try to avoid. These ghost things are too bad for team battles.

The flaws are not hidden, the author has worked hard, the battles and wits are very tense, but some of the foreshadowing has not been finished (it should be), the plot is logical, the loose combination is okay, but it is obvious that I can continue writing, and I look forward to the second part

I couldn't stand it when I read Chapter 100. The previous daily routines were well written, and the interactions with several characters were very interesting, especially Tomoko. As a result, a stand-in cult battle broke out. In the middle of the battle, I basically skipped watching, and then I was inexplicably threatened. I went to play a group game and saw the protagonist bidding farewell to Duwang Hall. I originally wanted to flip through the catalog to see if there would be any daily chapters in the follow-up, but the last one was about leaving the Green Dolphin. Looking at the catalog title again, I saw that the follow-up was basically full of chaos in various places. There should not be the daily chapters I expected. Alas

The main reason for Kira Yoshikage's crime is the uncontrollable desire to kill, and the stronger this desire is, the faster the nails grow. Hand fetish has nothing to do with the desire to kill, but the author seems to have banned this desire to kill. Kira Yoshikage can indeed pretend to be an ordinary person, but at most he has no conscience.

All I can say is that the author is a very nice character.

So beautiful. The characters are not OOC, the plot is interesting, and the writing is JO-like. I sincerely recommend it.

It is no exaggeration to say that with the author's thinking and his detailed understanding of J0J0's world view and various avatars, he was able to survive at the starting point, and finally had fine sugar in Tomato

The writing style is very good, fits the tone of the character very well, and the skill is sufficient. "And until I find [the truth], I will keep myself in pain, just like a believer who is ordained, suffering is salvation. I have to keep this in mind every moment!"

A very excellent Jojo fanfic, with Yoshikage Kira as the protagonist, telling the story of his last failure to return to high school and change his abnormal psychology in the outside world.