In the World of Doraemon, Use Your Spiritual Power to Become a God

How to put it this way, the appearance of the protagonist did not bring any changes to Nobita. The future Nobita is still the same as in the original work. The protagonist gives me the feeling that he is here to steal Shizuka.

It's very good. Compared with other Doraemon-like novels, this one is different just from the first part that I've seen now. Compared with the novels on Tomato, it's considered to be on the higher end. There is a clear and refined feeling.

To be honest, I don't want to have a female protagonist. I watch Doraemon fanfics just to see the ambiguous scenes where the protagonist has sex with his partner at a young age. As a subtitled anime, its characteristic is pure sincerity and warmth. The original emotional development of Daxiong and Shizuka is enough, and even the original work doesn't have much emphasis on it. Draw emotional lines, but focus on depicting friendship. Adding more emotional lines here will only destroy the simple and beautiful atmosphere. What everyone wants to see is that the arrival of the protagonist has some positive impact on the protagonist group, makes up for some regrets, has more exciting adventures, and maintains the warm daily life of the original text. This book is half the success. Support the author in changing it to five stars. I think this book has potential.

I feel that this Doraemon fanfic should be one of the best on Tomato. You can feel the author's care. After all, he even drew the cover himself. As for the plot, it uses the original work as the timeline from the beginning of the pregnancy, with the protagonist as the third-person perspective. The theatrical version, the daily series and my own personal settings are perfectly combined. The writing is good and the writing methods are very novel, such as the theory of space-time relativity, butterfly effect, symbolism, etc. The protagonist is created by scrolling backwards along the timeline. The three-dimensional and vivid characters appear in it are very vivid. Especially the latest chapter of Doraemon Seven Boys, which has not been seen in other similar genres. I can only say that I look forward to the follow-up. I feel like this book won't have thousands of chapters [Thinking][Thinking]

It's very beautiful, my favorite daily heart-warming story, and you can see the growth of the protagonist and other friends. It doesn't happen overnight, there is a process. Although it is slow to catch on, this is what Doraemon fans should do. There are many details that are not in the original work, which makes the unit drama not a unit drama. The entire main line has a development process, which I think is very good. The fanfic is originally based on the original work and refined, and the author did not write away from the original work and the character's OOC, but made the plot richer. It adds a lot of plots that are not in the original work, but it is not completely divorced. It can be seen that I really like Doraemon and know the characters in Doraemon very well. Each character gives me a unique feeling and is very full. What I like most is that the descriptions by Xiaoli and grandma are very good and very immersive. I was moved to tears. I love them so much! The place where Seven Boys is also very good, I look forward to the follow-up development. I hope the author can continue to write about the various emotions and experiences of the protagonist and the world of Doraemon. I love reading it and don't be a eunuch anymore. Come on! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

How can I put it, the part about the grandmother really made me cry, but the protagonist did not choose to better guide the young Nobita, but ignored it... This is quite easy to dislike. However, the content at the end is still good. There will be many seven boys appearing in this book, which is also unexpected. I can only say that I look forward to the follow-up and don't let it end unfinished. [Thinking][eating melon]

It's okay. The plot and characters are well written, but there are also some shortcomings, especially in the setting. I can't say that the setting is completely bad, because some reasons will be made up in advance. Even if something bad happens, it can be treated as not entirely to blame on the protagonist. But at the same time, this setting makes the protagonist unlikable. As an older brother, he is not very qualified, because Nobita is needed to develop the subsequent plot. It is difficult to change the character of Nobita, but to be honest, when Nobita is bullied, he can still help in some places. After all, the protagonist has this ability, otherwise it would feel like a failure to have the identity of an older brother. Maybe the main reason is that the author made the protagonist's character a bit mature, and if his thinking ability is too mature, he can't make too many mistakes. It would be better if the protagonist also has the protagonist's shortcomings, for example, adding a playful character to the protagonist's character. Because of the playful nature, sometimes he can't care about Nobita, and he can understand it, instead of having the feeling of "I know it well, but I won't do it" towards Nobita. At the same time, because of maturity, it loses a sense of childishness.

It's really good to watch. It starts from birth and writes a very warm daily life. It doesn't mean that I was born all of a sudden and then fast forwarded to the arrival of Doraemon. It has a lot of my own things and it is well written. My own story is well integrated with some plots of the original work. I can't get enough of it!

After watching it for a while, it felt like the filthy thoughts of adults entered the childhood in my memory.

It's really good among Doraemon fans. There are detailed character descriptions, the characterization of the protagonist, the joys and sorrows of childhood, and the necessary process of growth. I added my own settings based on the original work. The integration is very good. Personally, I feel that the writing style and writing style are really lacking. It is hard to believe that this is the author's first book. The main reason is that the author really uses his brain to write, and the writing is really good, which is quite surprising!

A very heartwarming and everyday novel. The intention is obvious. The orphan protagonist traveled to Doraemon's world not to change anything, but to experience family, friendship, and love that did not exist in reality in the past, and to participate in Doraemon's world. Traveling through time naturally brings about a lot of butterfly effects.

Don't be a eunuch, I like it very much, the writing style is very novel compared to others

The content is quite good, but I think since there is a protagonist, the author can appropriately increase the strength of Big Bear. After all, Big Bear is not a complete waste. Develop Big Bear's shooting and sword skills, and let the arrival of the protagonist change Nobita's character. This is the responsibility of being a time traveler and an older brother, isn't it! The author can consider it [top post]

It's really good to read, the family relationship is well written, the character's growth and unit parts are also very comfortable to write, and it fits the character design very well. I hope the author can maintain this style and continue. Unfortunately, the rating of this book is a bit low, maybe because of its slow popularity and my own Doraemon. The popularity of the fandom itself is not high, so the score is low. If you want me to say, the text must be around 9 points and it is very interesting, but the story has not been fully developed yet, otherwise I can confidently say it is 9.4 Points. I hope there will be more theatrical versions and healing stories.

It's okay, better looking than most Doraemon fans (blue ~ purple)

It looks good, but the chapters are too few and not enough to read. The author's writing style is very delicate, the details are well handled, the logic is self-consistent, and it is very similar to the original work. It does not change the character as written in some articles.

It's okay, but I just don't accept it when I use my family to experiment with my mental superpowers. The plot is about the journey of growing up. I am one of those people who can't stand sadness, so I struggled a bit while watching it [face-covering] [face-covering] [face-covering]

The protagonist traveled through time and became Nobita's older brother. He also has super powerful mental abilities and can do many things, making up for many childhood regrets. Personally, I think it's worth a visit!

To be honest, this book is very well written. It not only makes up for Grandma Daxiong's regret of not seeing Nobita go to elementary school, but also makes up for Tianjia's regret through some clever plots.

Thank you readers for your support. All encouragement and suggestions have been received. The author will work hard to improve the work [love] [love] [love]

Stick to writing two hundred chapters, okay? Is it ok to not want the plot to be watery? Don't keep writing the theater version and ignore the starting point of the dream (a comic that everyone has read) OK? Is it okay to update more? After finishing the book, I feel that I will review it.

So good so far! Looking forward to the follow-up!

Just being Nobita's nanny

I feel that there is very little participation. Basically nothing has changed. It is just a retelling of the original drama without much change. Others may have different opinions, but I still don't like it very much. I always feel that something is missing. [Roll eyes][roll eyes]

Personally, I feel it is very good. It may have some flaws, but the flaws are not outweighed. This book is worth reading.

It's okay, but is this book a eunuch novel? Can you tell me if you know?

Very good. I hope to write more plots of big movies. When will the author write/Magical World? By the way, I don't know if the author has read the Doraemon Seven Boys comic. Many of the stories in it are quite interesting. If possible, I hope the author can insert the Seven Boys into the novel. In this case, it is estimated that hundreds of thousands more words can be written, and it can also provide the author with great ideas [Chigua]

It's okay, I feel like there's a little bit of privacy here, after all, this is a fandom

I feel that the author's ideas are really good. While filling in the holes for the original work, he also dug holes himself, digging and filling them again.

It's very good-looking, and his daily outlook on life is somewhat positive, but Nobita seems to be unable to correct himself no matter what. Maybe this is his characteristic. Because if it is corrected, there will be no Doraemon. Very nice.