How to Develop the Male Protagonist Aoife Enoch

1. I want to develop the story step by step, so reading this book may require some patience, but I promise it will not be superficial. 2. Strictly speaking, this article is not a single male protagonist, but a group portrait. I hope to do my best to portray each character. 3. The plot framework roughly follows the direction of the original work, because I don't want to break the character impressions in the minds of fans of the original work. 4. The behavior of the protagonist will affect the development of the plot, everything depends on what the protagonist does. 5. The CP of the original work will not be changed. The protagonist is not the faceless male protagonist of a love game, and he will not fall in love with each other. 6. If there is an original plot, we will try our best to integrate the plot framework of the original work. 7. I am not very good at lengthy descriptions. Please bear with me. I will learn how to describe accurately. 8. I plan to write one million words. If you think it's good, please follow and support it. Your support is the motivation for me to continue to update! Supplement: In the early stage, the plot of the original drama and the original plot are mixed and intertwined. Later, as the protagonist's behavior affects the timeline, there will be more and more original plots. The title of the novel was typed incorrectly by the author of Mint, and it cannot be changed now. Thank you readers for your support [send heart][send heart]

The writing style is okay, it has the flavor of a Japanese comic, but I still have to complain. Let me talk about what I personally think is a bad point. Zero - The combat power is stretched, but it is strengthened later, and it becomes stronger after death. 0.5 - The American cockroach Orpheus is very strange even though it is not native. It is not as good-looking as the golden beetle. It is not as good-looking as the animal state. I can only say that it is not pleasing to the eye. If you like the second form later, it will look better. First, the plot progress is a bit slow, but I won't say anything for the sake of establishing the characters. However, the unimportant plot can be speeded up a bit. Otherwise, the back and forth between Kiba, Haitang, and Yuka in the original plot, including those of the villain group at the back, your writing will probably be more procrastinating. Second, the inexplicable darkness. Ponyboy was influenced by darkness and killed Makino. Makino was influenced by darkness and almost killed Michiko. Yuka saw Michiko's painful expression and wanted to kill Michiko. The influence of darkness was overemphasized. If the influence of darkness was so outrageous, then in the original drama, Haitang, the store owner and some other Aoife were forced to kill by the company. After all, the influence of darkness was so great that other Aoife should have taken action long ago. Third, I'm speechless when it comes to Xiao Ma's refusal to kill him. Although the author explained a lot, in my opinion, even if Xiao Ma didn't kill Yizhang himself, he should at least be written to death. I hope that a passerby, Ao Fei, will kill him later. There is another book I read recently, which started with Fazi. It can be said that the writing of this book is not delicate, but the plot direction is much better. Unfortunately, the intervention point is after the ending, not the beginning.

Kamen Rider's favorite is 555. The most important thing is that I watched it when I was older, and I feel more deeply about it. 555 Has a lot of regrets. The author and us as readers want to try our best to make up for these regrets. It's very interesting, and I recommend it with five stars.

The writing is pretty good. The only sticking point is why I didn't kill Xiao Ma's cousin. I feel really uncomfortable about this. It's OK, but not too holy. But I still give it five stars. I hope it's not so uncomfortable.

Shouldn't you be afraid of turning into Enoch of Orpheus? People who have read this basically know that Enoch of Orpheus will not live long, and he will lose his human form when he surrenders to the king of Orpheus. It basically ends in sand. I feel that becoming Enoch of Orpheus is scary enough.

If the protagonist wants to get rid of Orphenoch's fatal flaw, he may need to gain the ability to devour Orphenoch to replenish his orphen factor or improve his genetic defects, improve his strength and life permanence. Qianqiao is the wolf Orpheus Enoch. Why does the author feel that he is not Orpheus Enoch when he describes his thoughts?

I give a good review to a new author even though I like it 555

I look forward to finishing it. There are really few Kamen Rider novels with this type of protagonist. If you like the protagonist, you can slowly grow up.

It's good-looking, with characters struggling, descriptions of Mr. Qiao, and good group portraits

Yes, there is a touch of warmth amidst the melancholy.

Average, worth a look

Some ink stains. But pretty good.

Very good, not bad

It's great to watch, and the plot and characterization are well written.

Come on, I haven't seen such a beautiful knight story for a long time.

Good-looking author, please remember to fill in the pitfalls

I can only say it's pretty good

Very good, hope to keep it up

How could the score be so low, 5.6? The plot and writing style of this book should be above average.

It's okay, but can you arrange a belt of your own for the protagonist?

It was really fun to stay up late.

The book is good. Although few people read it now, more people will read it in the future when more people write it. Come on

It's pretty good, but I feel that Saya is a bit OOC. I remember that Saya in TV is not affected by the delta spirit.

Very good, the protagonist is not invincible, the plot is twists and turns, Nice [sending heart]

If you are interested in 555, you can take a look. You will know whether you like it or not after watching it. It is just a bit lacking.

It feels good, why are there so few people?