After Two Years of Hiatus, I Will Broadcast Live Again. Shenhao Can't Live Without Me!

Teacher, the writing is really good and the plot is very lyrical, but let me give you a suggestion. At present, most readers like the heartthrob heroine, but they don't like to have sub-CPs, and there are too many sub-CPs, which will give readers a bad impression. I think the most important thing to improve is that many plots are not connected to the following plots, and there is a sense of fragmentation. To me, it feels like the stories of multiple different people are stitched together into one piece. This is okay in ordinary romance, but it will make many readers feel uncomfortable in a heartthrob novel. Also, I think the heroine does not need to keep all the sad things in her heart. She can talk to her elder brothers and sisters. I think this can be written as a redemption story for the younger sister to spend her life healing her childhood (ˊo̴̶̷̤ ̫ o̴̶̷̤ˋ)

I'm very happy, actually this is not the first time I have written an article. I wrote several articles in the past because of academic studies, or because no one read them, and I lost enthusiasm. In fact, I am very grateful to everyone who reads my book. Whether you have not read it for a while or you just clicked in and read it once, I am very grateful. When I see the number of people reading my book increasing little by little, I am very happy, and I have shown off to my friends many times. Frankly speaking, I am a person who needs emotional value. I remember that I wrote Chapter 1 just because of inspiration. When I clicked on the button, someone urged me to update it. At that time, I was completely stunned. It was the first time, and it made me want to update like crazy. It is true that my writing is not very good. I dare not read it myself. Many of the settings are quite inexplicable. But I am working very hard to complete it. I have spent some time on writing. I am also very happy when I see people commenting on me. Signed now! Can any kind-hearted person help me generate electricity for love? Now I watch the ads by myself and generate electricity for my love. Maybe it's because my updates and the time when I signed the contract are not in the same time period. All in all, all in all, I really, really appreciate you. Thank you to everyone who reads my book. As long as you read my book, I will be very satisfied. Thank you. Don't delay your studies because of reading my books, you must put study first. I love you [laughs]

I hope that the male protagonist who is my only pet will be clean, physically and mentally, and not abuse the female protagonist. I hope that the female protagonist will have many big brothers and sisters, and I hope that she will want them all in the end.

Again, thank you to the author for clearing up the mines in advance, but I feel like you can still take a look at pictures 41 to 43. Can I wonder if that handsome guy wants you to be well, or is it one of the two people you all gave to?

The fried chicken written by Rouse is so good [Sending my heart] Now I look forward to updating it every day. I can't get enough of it. The more I read, the more I read it. The writing is also very good, and the details are well described. Rouse must continue to read more [Sending my heart]

The author thinks your writing is super beautiful. As long as you keep updating, I will always follow you! ! ! As a result, the author, your good writing is so good that you can get more updates. Are you surprised? (◍•ᴗ•◍)♡♬

It's very beautiful, with many small details, and the writing is getting better and better. I'm curious about new articles every day ദ്ദി˶>ᴗo)✧

This book is really good to read and the plot is not embarrassing. Recommended. Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people.