A Twist in the Beginning: a Dragon Survival Guide

Lu Xiaozi has been eating too much lately, and there are three marriage-change novels that I know of [face-covering]. The heroine is similar to Ming Fei's eldest sister, cheerful, and the speech spirit is unlocked in Chapter 62, similar to the son of Yuanliu? Then he turned white (White-haired Saigao), which is also one of the few wealthy people I've seen (Mayor Goose). She's pretty.

If nothing else, it has a literary and youthful flavor. The protagonist is well portrayed. I have to say that this book is the best one Lu Mingfei has ever read.

The writing is very good. The most gratifying thing for me is that Lu Mingfei has really grown up in this book. I have read fanfics written by others and found that Lu Mingfei has not changed at all in 3 or 6 years. This is the point that I don't understand the most. Therefore, the author of this book has written Lu Mingfei's character changes that I did not expect, and the writing is good. He should be a man with gold lining his collar.

The writing is so good, much better than that Dragon Clan fanfic written by Jiang Nan [face covering] This is the real Dragon Clan [smile] Jiangnan knows nothing about the Dragon Clan, I declare that this is the orthodoxy [smile]

It's a dream come true. The writing style is very comfortable and not overly modified. The plot... Well, I can't tell much at the beginning. But it's okay for now, a relaxed style for everyday use. Lu Mingfei's character is also quite consistent, but I forgot about Ang. Did Su Xiaoqiang like Zhao Menghua? It's been so long that I forgot. Which classmate can tell me. [Sending Hearts]

The writing is very good, the heroine is probably the No. 1 Among the Dragon Clan [shy]

Hmm... How should I put it? The writing is really good. I have read so many novels on Tomato that it is rare to find an author with such good writing. It is a rare work. I sincerely recommend it. The author is not ordinary. Sooner or later, this writing style will become popular.

Love to watch! But I've been watching straight men write about dragons for so long. I don't know why, but why do they all keep knocking Chu Xia? It's obviously very difficult to knock off. It's just a toilet product. It's no better than Lu Nuo. Let alone compared with Lu Hui, even Kai Nuo can't compare. Why do so many people like it? I myself will yue yue yue even if I see a hint of Chuxia.

So far, I think it's pretty good. It's the first Dragon Clan article I've read on Tomato. I hope the author will continue to update it. There aren't any bad points in the article, and overall it's pretty good. Of course, you can pick them out if you have to pick them hard, but isn't that just nitpicking? I've seen it all with foreign persimmons, and the requirements can't be that strict. So overall it's a pretty good article.

Very good! ! ! The language is fluent, the plot is coherent, and you can watch it well (too many people are not qualified to say this) The daily life at the beginning was very interesting, and the plot was also changed very well. I just want to talk about the male and female protagonists (I'll make my own guesses and explanations, everything depends on the author, but the author probably can't say [laughs]) The quibble (crossed out) is understood as follows: When Lu Sui traveled through the past, he and Lu Sui existed independently like two personalities (Lu Sui's personality was in a dying state - so she shed tears when looking at her mother's photo) When saving Lu Dad, it was equivalent to the fusion of two personalities (more like the protagonist being driven crazy [laughs]). Lu Sui accepted that he was Lu Sui, and Lu Sui accepted his cheerful self. (Actually, I prefer to understand it as: Lu Sui seizes Lu Sui, and Lu Sui absorbs Lu Sui after being stimulated)

The emotional description is delicate, which is the best aspect The disadvantage is that after the protagonist's personality changes, there is no transition at all, and he still acts according to the thinking of his previous life. The key is that no one at home feels strange. What I cannot accept the most is, who is the protagonist here? I have read about 20 chapters, and 90% of them are described from Lu Mingfei's perspective. It gives me the impression that a poor boy meets Bai Fumei who loves him, and then pursues Bai Fumei. It is written from the perspective of the male protagonist.

It's super good-looking and highly recommended. The heroine has a very good personality and I feel like it suits Lu Mingfei very well.

The emotional descriptions are delicate and well written, but I am afraid that the author will play with knives. I saw at least three pitfalls that could be used to write knives.

It's a very good book. The writing style (especially the description of emotions) does have the flavor of Jiangnan. The daily life in the early stage is quite suitable for me (most Dragon Clan fans will stuff a lot of original works before entering the main plot, such as going to the hunter website to do various tasks. It's not that this is not good, but it just feels a bit out of the framework of the original work). The early stage of this book has the flavor of a campus love story. While the protagonist and Lu Mingfei have established a relationship and gradually warmed up, it also makes the book more interesting. We saw how the old bad kid gradually changed under the influence of the protagonist, which paved the way for making up for the regrets in the subsequent main line. At the same time, the image of the ordinary supporting characters who appeared in the early stage of Ryuichi was more vivid and three-dimensional. Some of the original works after entering the main line are just right in my opinion, which can be regarded as a foreshadowing of the identity of the protagonist. I hope the author can keep writing (at least to finish the Japanese chapter, I really want to see the interaction between the protagonist and Eri)

When I saw sex change, my initial purpose was actually to see that sex change was not the way to go. But in fact, this novel does not need to emphasize the point of sexual transformation. A weak child encounters his own light when he is at his weakest. What will that cowardly little boy grow into? Whee. But speaking of it, the author is not Ma Lu Mingfei...ψ(｀∇´)ψ The writing style of the novel is considered to be very good among the Dragon Clan fanfics I have read - it does not rigidly apply the vocabulary of the original novel, and it does not rigidly describe the characters. Although I read the online novel very quickly, I can still tell that the writing style is quite good. As for the plot, I won't say much because I haven't finished watching it yet. But so far I am very satisfied.

Very sweet, very beautiful, highly recommended. You can really see a gradually perfect and complete Lu Mingfei. The process is worth savoring. In short, I strongly recommend it to old bookworms, you can give it a try

It looks good. Lu Mingfei eats so well. I don't know what to say when I go to Uesugi Eri's place.

The emotional lines in the early stage are really well written! It has the feeling of a youthful campus. But I didn't understand the last few chapters. Why did Lu Mingfei suddenly disappear? What's going on with fate and reincarnation [what] By the way, I haven't read the original book Dragons

The writing is really good, the personal setting is well combined with the original work, the plot is also very exciting, and the emotions are also very prominent. Although the ending is not so perfect in my opinion, I think it is a rare HE. There are very few Dragon Clan fandoms that make me feel melancholy and unfinished after reading it. Personally, I think this book is top-notch among Dragon Clan fandoms. I read Dragon Clan for the first time during the May Day holiday this year. It took me a week to read it all. I felt very uncomfortable after reading it, so I looked for fan fiction. I have read almost 10 books until now. After reading this book, I felt satisfied for the first time, and I didn't want to read Dragon Clan fan fiction for the time being.

A very enjoyable book to read: Dragon Clan Changes Marriage

I personally think this Dragon Clan fanfic is pretty good. I can't fault the writing and plot. The quality is quite good among Dragon Clan fanfics. It took me about a week to read it. I am the kind of person who can read the battle scenes at a glance, but I will read the emotional scenes and daily parts in detail. The author did a good job in this aspect. I like watching Lu Sui and Lu Mingfei's sweet romance, and I'll admit that Lu Sui's transition from male to female actually has almost no impact on the content. It basically made up for all the regrets of the original work. The ending felt a little rushed, but it was above the passing mark and didn't make me feel too abrupt. I have read almost 10 Dragon Clan fanfics, and this one probably ranks fourth overall.

The protagonist is not a flower vase. He is very powerful and may be able to target the White King in the later stage. Lu Mingfei is very good. As soon as he entered the school, he had the flavor of Lu Mingfei. He directly sacrificed his life for the protagonist. He was so manly.

The daily life of the school in the early stage is very well written. What is surprising is the transformation of Lu Mingfei, a dead child. It is well written. A boy will always grow into a man in order to protect the one he loves. The only bad point for me is the change between Lu Hui and Lu Mingfei before and after their relationship. Their personalities and daily interactions are completely different from before. It is like a different person. They seamlessly replaced the shy little girlfriend, but they still prefer the way they get along with each other on campus.

The writing is really good. I have read relatively few romance novels, but I am a gal. I couldn't hold back my laughter while reading the emotional scenes in the article. It is a really good fanfic. I really don't know why the rating is so low and the popularity is so low.

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Very beautiful, with Jiangnan's writing style

Very interesting article, reminds me of my ex-girlfriend. My story is still full of sweetness, but the ending is unsatisfactory. Maybe I was once a bad kid. I hope that bad kid is different from me and can get a perfect ending.

It's well written, but one thing that stands out is that when Lu Mingfei erased himself, Lu Sui shouldn't doubt whether the experience with Lu Sui was real. After all, the protagonist should have read Long Si when he was still Lu Sui. After all, Long Yi to Long Si all had physical books [face covering]

Can be very sweet.

The extreme pulling and ambiguity between the male and female protagonists are very beautiful.