Dragon Raja: King! The Day He Returns to the World

The author did a good job writing it. Although the story line of Eri Yi and Xiaolu in the original work can be said to be an official match, the little goddess who has been written in the original work for so long cannot just give up. It's not impossible to have a harem 😳 But in fact, as far as I am concerned, Xiaotiannu is more suitable for Xiaolu

It's good to watch, I want to watch Su Xiaoqiang and Hui Liyi's Shura Field 😂😂

Starting from Chapter 230, you can change the title of the book to Su Xiaoqiang's Harem Diary. I'm just kidding. The book is still good. It can be seen that the author explains very clearly about starting a harem and writes about the existing conflicts between the heroines. It is not like other books that brainlessly start a harem and there is no conflict between the heroines. In this regard, the writing is very realistic. Secondly, the later part is too procrastinating. In fact, there are about 400 pictures. That's it. In fact, it is still a large-scale rewrite of the emotional entanglement without real growth and change. Lu Mingfei is still a bit soft. Of course, there are definitely shortcomings in this writing. The plot is incoherent, and some characters cannot be focused on shaping and appear dry and flat. However, the author's serious and responsible attitude is still worthy of five stars. I hope the author can have more extras [Blowing Kisses]

I have read thirty or forty chapters so far and the sweetness is too high. I need to increase my efforts. Su's route is great, but it feels like it can be used in a harem. After all, there are little monsters and Zero.

Alas 😢😢😢😢😢 The writing is really good. If possible, could it be a pure love story? The harem story is so heartbreaking💔

The writing is very good, mainly in terms of settings, which is relatively rigorous among the fans. Lily Wen covered in harem writing 😄 Brothers, run quickly

I can't watch the original version of Dragons, but I can definitely watch this sweet one (my friend is a bit conscientious and didn't directly recommend Dragons to me, so I didn't dare to watch it directly, but I will definitely watch this sweet one. Fortunately, my good son has some conscience.

The writing is so good, it has the thrilling feeling of Dragon Clan itself, but also has a bit more of a romantic comedy. The author also gave some testimonials for the plot. At first glance, it seems that it was written with care by someone who loves the book Dragon Clan. Five-star review.

The author is too partial to Su Xiaoqiang. The writing is okay, but the plot is a bit mechanical, the characters are not well controlled, which leads to focusing on one thing and not the other, and some of the plot's instincts are not used well. It can only be said that this plot is suitable for expressing emotions. Unbridled imagination can bring you excitement and happiness like the first sip of Coke, but as the bubbles decrease and the temperature drops, it becomes difficult to finish the rest except the first sip. But for a new author, he has worked very hard. I hope that the author can continue to use his creativity in the subsequent plots and strive to improve his writing as soon as possible. The more I think about it, the angrier I get. I originally wrote a lot of unpleasant things, but halfway through I just ran out of energy, so I'll give you a little bit of my opinion. The relationship between Su Xiaoqiang and Lu Mingfei should be well described in Chapter 200 before inserting the line depicting Li Yi and Ling. In Chapter 50, the local development was too fast and the relationship between Lu Mingfei and Su Xiaoqiang lacked time to settle. The following 150 chapters are the most poisonous point in the whole text, the end of the collapse of Zero and Eri's society. Zero was described as being too ignorant and willful, and Eri did not show any growth in her new life. The author treats stupidity as cuteness, stupidity as innocence, and willfulness as possessiveness. How can an article written like this not collapse? If I can't write anymore, just leave it like this. I wish the author will write better and better in the future.

Although the author is a novice, he is really good at writing, and the original work of Dragon Clan is also quite good. There are no poisonous points in the book. It just feels like there are too many children after the fusion of Lu Mingfei and Zero, and the emotional line feels a bit slow to develop. However, the author's writing is really good, and it is not enough to read at all. I am looking forward to Herzog's end later.