Dragon Clan: King! the Day We Return to the World

The author did a good job writing it. Although the story line of Eri Yi and Xiaolu in the original work can be said to be an official match, the little goddess who has been written in the original work for so long cannot just give up. It's not impossible to have a harem [shy] But in fact, as far as I am concerned, Xiaotiannu is more suitable for Xiaolu

It's good to watch, I want to watch Su Xiaoqiang and Hui Liyi's Shura Field [laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

I have read thirty or forty chapters so far and the sweetness is too high. I need to increase my efforts. Su's route is great, but it feels like it can be used in a harem. After all, there are little monsters and Zero.

Starting from Chapter 230, you can change the title of the book to Su Xiaoqiang's Harem Diary. I'm just kidding. The book is still good. It can be seen that the author explains very clearly about starting a harem and writes about the existing conflicts between the heroines. It is not like other books that brainlessly start a harem and there is no conflict between the heroines. In this regard, the writing is very realistic. Secondly, the later part is too procrastinating. In fact, there are about 400 pictures. That's it. In fact, it is still a large-scale rewrite of the emotional entanglement without real growth and change. Lu Mingfei is still a bit soft. Of course, there are definitely shortcomings in this writing. The plot is incoherent, and some characters cannot be focused on shaping and appear dry and flat. However, the author's serious and responsible attitude is still worthy of five stars. I hope the author can have more extras [Blowing Kisses]

Alas [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] The writing is really good. If possible, could it be a pure love story? The harem story is so heartbreaking💔

The writing is so good, it has the thrilling feeling of Dragon Clan itself, but also has a bit more of a romantic comedy. The author also gave some testimonials for the plot. At first glance, it seems that it was written with care by someone who loves the book Dragon Clan. Five-star review.

I can't watch the original version of Dragons, but I can definitely watch this sweet one (my friend is a bit conscientious and didn't directly recommend Dragons to me, so I didn't dare to watch it directly, but I will definitely watch this sweet one. Fortunately, my good son has some conscience.

Although the author is a novice, he is really good at writing, and the original work of Dragon Clan is also quite good. There are no poisonous points in the book. It just feels like there are too many children after the fusion of Lu Mingfei and Zero, and the emotional line feels a bit slow to develop. However, the author's writing is really good, and it is not enough to read at all. I am looking forward to Herzog's end later.

The author is too partial to Su Xiaoqiang. The writing is okay, but the plot is a bit mechanical, the characters are not well controlled, which leads to focusing on one thing and not the other, and some of the plot's instincts are not used well. It can only be said that this plot is suitable for expressing emotions. Unbridled imagination can bring you excitement and happiness like the first sip of Coke, but as the bubbles decrease and the temperature drops, it becomes difficult to finish the rest except the first sip. But for a new author, he has worked very hard. I hope that the author can continue to use his creativity in the subsequent plots and strive to improve his writing as soon as possible. The more I think about it, the angrier I get. I originally wrote a lot of unpleasant things, but halfway through I just ran out of energy, so I'll give you a little bit of my opinion. The relationship between Su Xiaoqiang and Lu Mingfei should be well described in Chapter 200 before inserting the line depicting Li Yi and Ling. In Chapter 50, the local development was too fast and the relationship between Lu Mingfei and Su Xiaoqiang lacked time to settle. The following 150 chapters are the most poisonous point in the whole text, the end of the collapse of Zero and Eri's society. Zero was described as being too ignorant and willful, and Eri did not show any growth in her new life. The author treats stupidity as cuteness, stupidity as innocence, and willfulness as possessiveness. How can an article written like this not collapse? If I can't write anymore, just leave it like this. I wish the author will write better and better in the future.

The author's writing is so good. Although I have only read five or six chapters now, the author's writing style and emotional lines are so good. I think it's the best one among the Dragon Clan fanfics. Let me talk about my little expectation. I hope there will be multiple female protagonists because each female character has been greatly shaped and modified by the author. It's great [Adoration]. I hope the author can try his best to meet my small expectations.

It's a very interesting novel. Lu Mingfei is no longer the weak and weak kid he used to be. He has transformed into a real man with lions in his eyes. The author's writing style is also good. There is no such thing as speaking in vernacular for a long time, and the content is quite reasonable.

The writing is very good, mainly in terms of settings, which is relatively rigorous among the fans. Lily Wen covered in harem writing [laughs] Brothers, run quickly

The writing is very good, except for part of the plot of the little goddess, which is very consistent with my imagination of what Lu Mingfei will do when he is reincarnated. I like the author to keep writing. Author, you have to take the time to finish it (bushi [laughs]

I don't know if I should post this book review, because the first few chapters have already given me some clues that this book may be written by an AI model. It is most likely Gemini, because I am a heavy player of AI models and I am very sensitive to words. Things like the pebbles and piety are common problems in Gemini, because normal people basically don't write articles like that. It can be said that the atmosphere of eight-part essay is very strong [smile]

It's so beautiful, so sweet, I hope it's the author of harem novels [blowing kiss]

I feel that Su Xiaoqiang, Little Monster and Zero are all very good. I want Little Monster, and I feel that Zero has let me down. So I still like the three of them in the drama "Dragon". The three of them are together, I like them the most, so I feel better. After all, "Dragon" makes me feel irritable, and I have that dead look on my face all day long.

It's very interesting, I hope the author will keep it up! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Finally there is a rating, come on, come on [thinking][thinking][thinking]

Dragon Feast is a ritual in which one uses one's body to chase the power of a dragon. Dragon Feast hunters kill notorious flying dragons or giant dragons, drink their blood, devour their hearts, and perform rituals to gain their abilities during life. This entire process is called the Dragon Feast Ceremony. During the dragon feasting ceremony, while the dragon feaster possesses more and more dragon abilities, dragon-like characteristics will gradually appear on his body. First, he will grow scales, then his pupils will become vertical pupils, then he will grow dragon wings and claws, and finally he will become a small dragon. This is when the Dragon Eater is closest to being powerful, and it is also when it is at its most vulnerable. Because during the process of transforming into a dragon, the dragon's will contained in the dragon's heart that was taken before is unwilling to die. These violent dragon's will will unite and in turn attack the personal will of the dragon eater, trying to make the dragon eater into a fool, or assimilate it into a bloodthirsty beast. At the final moment, these combined dragon wills and even the dragon eater's own dragon power will counterattack the dragon eater. They will turn into spiritual dragons and fight in their spiritual world with the dragon eater who has nothing but his own will. If the dragon eater successfully slays the dragon again, he can leap over the dragon gate, completely master the power of the dragon in his body, and achieve the miracle of transforming into an ancient dragon in his body. He will become a special kind of dragon that is not controlled by the dragon clan or affected by the dragon's power. His own pressure is extremely restrained by other dragons. If the dragon eater is defeated by the spiritual dragon, the dragon eater's personal will will completely die, and the body will be controlled by the crazy dragon will and dragon power. Under the mixed effect, the body will be deformed and transformed into a huge earth-moving dragon beast, turning into a bloodthirsty and crazy monster. There is another side effect in the dragon feasting ceremony. After eating a large amount of dragon blood, dragon meat, and dragon heart, the dragon feaster will become addicted to it, and will not be happy eating without dragons in the future. This can be good or bad. The good thing is that it can become a driving force to promote Dragon Feast, and the bad thing is that it can accelerate the fall of Dragon Feasters. Therefore, the Dragon Eater is also called the Dragon Heart One. The ancient dragon will not be the target of other hunters, because the ancient dragon is not a dragon in the traditional sense. It does not have dragon blood, dragon flesh and dragon heart. The ancient dragon has eternal life and has no ability to give birth to offspring. As for the Dragon Eaters, they act alone most of the time, passing on the inheritance in the master-disciple mode, and they only gather when they fight against powerful dragons; in addition, the Dragon Eaters will fight against the dragon beasts in order to inherit the power of their predecessors. During dragon feasting, the types of dragons used as sacrifices are different, and the power the dragon feasters obtain from them also has different emphasis.

The author's writing is very good, and it is a rare masterpiece among foreign persimmons.

The music perfectly matches the scene. The drum beats during the battle make people's blood pump, and the melody during exploration is intoxicating. The plot is ups and downs and full of reversals. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the interactions are like real people, which makes people resonate with strong emotions. The pictures are as exquisite as works of art. Each sentence is full of details. With the shocking surround sound effects, it feels like being in a fantasy world. ([Sinister smile])

There are so many good reviews from the female protagonists, I would like to ask if the shrimps will be collected?

Su feels that the intensity is a bit high at the moment. I feel that this role is higher than that of Eri Yi. And I remember that Eri Yi's obedience is only for Lu Mingfei. She also has her rebelliousness. Her obedience is only for Lu Mingfei. Her possessiveness is so strong. It can be seen from Long San. She just trusts Lu Mingfei too much. Except for people she thinks her brother thinks, she should stay vigilant. How should I put it? I think it's better to add more scenes between Eri and Zero, especially Zero. I say that Eri is the most important person. I feel that Su is with her much more than Eri. Is this a contradiction? Well, it's a bit difficult to evaluate. After all, I am partial to Little Monsters. I have only read Dragon 4 once but I have read the last one of Dragon 3 30 times. I am too attached to the relationship between Little Monsters and Lu Mingfei, and I think most people have only seen Dragon 3, but I still hope the author will work hard.

Can you tell me in a big way who is the heroine of this book?

Well, it would be nice if I were Lu Mingfei

Speculations about Zero: The face of Zero in Dragon 5 is Lu Mingze, who said to Zero when he was fighting with Herzog: My girl. Lu Mingze took the lead at this time. He also said that he was not Lu Mingfei but Number Zero. Lu Mingfei was his stupid brother. Therefore, I think Number Zero was Lu Mingze, and Lu Mingfei's memories should have been given to him by Lu Mingze. The surgery may have been done at birth.

It looks pretty good now. There are five female protagonists, there should be only these five, Xiao Tiannu, Zero, Eri Yi, Nono and Isabel.

So pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! First class work

It looks good, I love watching it, I just want to see Lu Mingfei get angry

In terms of writing style, it is quite close to the original work, but the character creation is very different from the original work. If the core of the original work is loneliness and the obsession of a child, this one seems to be just a fun novel. Of course, it is qualified as a fan. Fans are supposed to make up for regrets. If it is fun enough, there will be no regrets.