Luo Zhan: I Am Invincible

It looks good. Except for the fact that Feng Xi conceals his identity at first and it looks a little uncomfortable, everything else is good. The author seems to be worrying about the ending of Feng Xi. I think the earthbound spirit mentioned in the comment is very good [thoughts]

It's very beautiful. Xiao Hei and Xiao An are very cute, and the storyline is very detailed. The battle scenes are also well depicted, but the update is a bit slow. ♪ Come on, come on! ♪ ミ ゛ミ ∧＿∧ ミ゛ミ ミ ミ ( ∀ )ミ゛ミ ゛゛＼／゛゛ I⌒ヽ｜ (＿) ノ ∪

The interaction between Xiao Hei and Xiao An is very warm and their relationship is very deep. They are two children who care about each other. However, some details (such as plot connection) are not handled perfectly. For example, when leaving the island, Xiao An always wanted to see Xiao Hei, but when he actually saw him, he did not recognize him. The characters' thinking and behavior conflicted, which looked weird. In addition, Xiao An's combat power seems to have improved a bit too quickly. He didn't see any traces of cultivation and he directly became an immortal on the spot? But overall it's pretty good. Worth a look.

If anyone reads it, just treat it as a summary of the entire book. First of all, the author used his own ideas and set the starting point in the flower shop, but at the same time, the author also let Xiao Hei live with the protagonist in the flower shop (a reminder, before Xiao Hei moves in, it is the protagonist's role, which is a bit infinite), allowing Xiao Hei to see the good and evil aspects of human beings first, and at the same time, the identity of the protagonist's "brother" has a big impression in Xiao Hei's heart, so that Xiao Hei does not think that the club is all bad people, which is more conducive to the development of the plot. Of course, if you don't read the first few chapters, you may be a little confused. (Of course, if what I said is wrong, please point it out and I will not reply) Come on, author, work hard to update! ! !

Strange, I remember that I had already commented before, but then I found that I didn't comment. Did I remember it wrong? Forget it, let's make it up first. This book is very well written, better than most of Luo Xiaohei's fics I've seen. Come on, author, Luo Xiaohei's fics have not even been rated yet. After a few points, you are considered to be very good at ranking. I will comment once first. When you finish, I will come back and comment again. As long as you continue to write like this and update stably, I feel that it will definitely be more than 8 points, but it is not necessarily more than 9 points. After all, there are too few Luo Xiaohei now, and there is no precedent.

It's so beautiful, the interaction between Xiao An and Xiao Hei is so warm, the family bond is really great! The character's personality is almost the same as that of the original work. Although it is based on the original plot, there is no sense of separation, and it is easy to accept the protagonist. The character of this protagonist is also super good. He is a very warm person. I feel like I have watched another Luo Xiaohei that develops in a different direction [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Laughing][Like]

It's okay if you ignore some inexplicable places I retracted what I just said. Not long after I finished writing, a big lump was given to me.

The fanfic by Luo Xiaohei that I have read so far is the most satisfying to me. Compared to original novels that center on the protagonist, I prefer fanfics to make up for the regrets of the original work. This one is more balanced. The protagonist has a strong presence, and the regrets of other characters are also filled in one by one. I hope everyone has a bright, cheerful and positive future.

The author's writing is very good. The author can follow the plot of the original drama and at the same time expand his own additional plot, and it can fit well with the plot of the original drama. To be honest, the writing is really great, and the author can persist in writing, which is already very good in itself. Although the author has fewer books since he started school, I believe that more and more people will read this book. I took a look at the author's homepage. This is the author's second book. The second book can be written to this extent. Author, you are really amazing.

There are not many Xiaohei fans on Tomato, and many of them are written by Lanxi Town (I came here for Xiaohei). This is the best Xiaohei novel I have read on Tomato.

@KaliBORUTO Author, does this book have a knife? Is it a sweet text? I don't like knives. I like sweet stories. If the author sees it, please reply. Thank you, author. [Blow kiss]

Very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, but I have been chasing him for so long, and I feel that the boss has grasped the essence of Luo Xiaohei [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's a very good fanfic. The writing is pretty good among fanfics. I just can't update a hundred chapters a day [rolls eyes] Add a book review at the strong request of the author

My favorite subject matter, it satisfies all the fantasies I would have had if I went to Luo Xiaohei's world. Personally, I feel that although the wind type is excusable, what he did is not worthy of sympathy and forgiveness. I look forward to the author's follow-up😊

As an old bookworm with more than 38,000 hours of reading, the quality of this book is passable. At least it is considered a good product among ordinary fan fiction. It can be seen that there are no obstacles. What is interesting is that the update speed is a bit slow. I hope the author can speed up the speed.

Well written. Entered suddenly. Salvation plot.

It has various elements such as saving, making up for regrets, passionate, funny, heartwarming, etc. I like to watch it. I love watching it. The little misunderstanding in the middle of the plot is quite funny to be honest. I don't understand why I was scolded. It is obviously to pave the way for a better friendship in the future. Pad, the writing style is very smooth, and it embodies a very warm and flowing feeling. I like it very much. I am quite picky when it comes to reading articles, but I really think this book is quite interesting. After following it first, I became a long-time fan (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)

I think this book is pretty good, but I don't know why no one has read it. It's beautiful to look at, and there are many people coming to see it! ! !

I hope the author can continue writing. After all, there are not many books about Luo Xiaohei's war in my mind.

The language description is very good, especially the dialogue and interaction between Xiao Hei and Xiao An. However, before Chapter 61, at least most of the settings are in line with the original work. Later, there are too many private settings and I have no choice but to abandon the book. Of course, it's highly recommended for those who want to read fanfiction! ! !

It's good-looking, the daily life is very warm and has the feel of Luo Xiaohei's TV drama. Even if it follows the movie plot, it doesn't lose its own ideas. It's a fanfic worth reading. I hope there will be more soon😄

I read it all in one afternoon. It's a very interesting book. The author's personal settings are very refreshing and not obtrusive. The characterization of some scenes is also good. It's very entertaining. It's a very interesting fanfic. I recommend it.

Everyone, go read this book, it's so good. The author simply wrote it on my heart [blowing kiss] The descriptions are detailed and the lyrics are beautiful, and they literally spoke to my heart. No matter what, just one word is enough.

So far, the author is not OOC at all. It's been a long time since I've had such a high-quality meal [Sentimental]

This is my first time using Tomato Balance. Although it's not much, I hope the author can take a look at my piety and make a million-word update [smile]

Overall, it's very interesting. From the beginning, Xiao An deceives Xiao Hei into feeling uncomfortable, but the subsequent scenes on the boat made me laugh.

Of all Luo Xiaohei's second creations that I have read, this one is definitely one of the best.

After looking around a lot, this one is the best [love] [sending heart]

It looks good, author, come on, author, you can do it, author, you are the best, this article is very to my liking, so please update it quickly. The child is hungry, and the food [gives heart][gives heart][gives heart]

It looks good, the characters are not OOC, and it's comfortable