Online Game Descends: I Become the Ancestor of the Dao Through a God-Tier Talent

The writing is okay, I feel like reading an ancient online game novel. The people in it have very low IQs, the beautiful women all fall in love with the protagonist at first sight, you can kill people casually in the real world, and the reborn protagonist is always stunned. I can only say that you can read it when you are bored to kill time.

After writing for so long, I realized that I haven't written a review for my book yet. This book is my first one since I entered the online literature industry (there was another book before me, and that one was for practice). From the moment I typed the first word, I didn't expect that this book would be read by so many pretty people. As a fledgling author, my writing style is immature and some parts are shocking. I know all these and I am trying my best to correct them. Each of you chasing updates, urging updates, and giving rewards are all pushing me to make progress. Thank you for your willingness to accompany a new author like me to make progress together. I will continue to work hard and strive for the next chapter to be better than the last one! Thank you all my pretty readers! ▄█▀█●

The plot is lively and interesting, very good-looking, I like the characters written in large strokes

I have caught up with the second book, and I am also an old fan. The rhythm of this book is smoother, and there are some minor problems, but in general, the flaws are not outweighed. Good luck, author! Keep up the good work! Urging bigger ones! [Code hold]

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With delicate writing and profound narrative structure, this novel successfully constructs a world that is both real and full of symbolic meaning. The author is particularly good at character creation. The inner struggle and growth trajectory of the protagonist are peeled off layer by layer, which not only shows the complexity of human nature, but also allows readers to reflect on their own situation in resonance. The plot is cleverly designed, with foreshadowing hidden in seemingly ordinary daily details. As the story progresses, layers of metaphors are gradually revealed, and finally a strong emotional impact bursts out at the climax. The language style is both poetic and restrained, the dialogue is natural and smooth, and the description of the environment is as accurate as a movie lens, injecting fresh vitality into the story. Although the rhythm of some of the subplots is a bit slow, the overall flaws are not concealed, and it is not a masterpiece worth chewing over and over again.

To be honest, it's okay, at least I personally think it's okay. You can watch it if there are many girls. If you don't like it, you can take a detour. After reading the latest one, I feel like you are digging your own grave. You have lost the initiative with every woman, including your pet, whom I just met, and that female demon cultivator from the Demon Realm. [Awkward laugh] Especially her, her control is very lenient. In addition, you don't have to be at a disadvantage if you have to accommodate every woman, and no one in the reader likes it. Every woman has to be accommodated, especially that female demon cultivator, which is particularly strong. [Awkward laugh] It will really get annoying if you keep accommodating too much.

After reading it for a while, there should be more female protagonists, but now in the novel, why does the protagonist always only like one when he likes a scumbag? After being reborn, he knows that someone likes him and accepts it, but there are a lot of girls.

The story is very interesting, the writing skills are good, and the scenes are picturesque.

A solid five-star review. The author's writing is great. I couldn't stop reading it in one sitting.