[Soft and sweet girly voice
Tang Mi, a little Buddhist doctor [Tangxin Tangerine] who is cautious because of her fat figure and is addicted to farming and medicine, mustered up the courage to join the first gang in the server in order to help Gong.
The first time she helped Zhan turn on the mic, she timidly said "please give me some advice", but the [Jin Tian] on the other end of the earphone
——The cold-faced school bully Jiang Jin who controls the Conferred God——It's like being struck by lightning!
A hundred thousand volts of electricity ran through his spine, and an unfamiliar feeling of heat and loss of control surged over him.
Hold! This sound is... Deadly!
From then on, the No. 1 Yanshi in the server had a new goal: to include her in a regular team and carve her an exclusive brand! In reality, he followed the sound and locked onto her city, forcefully invading her world.
He loved her soft voice so much, and wanted to peel off her shell of inferiority with his own hands.
"Honey, you deserve the best."
His deep voice was her exclusive charm.
When the divine costume in the game was engraved with [Ember Sky], and when the school bully in reality transformed into a loyal dog, Tang Mi discovered that this "accident" that started with the sound was his long-planned preference.
From high school to college to wedding dress... He would spend his whole life listening to her call "Jiang Jiang" softly in his ear.
Reading guide:
1V1, double cleansing, mild abuse, HE, from school uniforms to wedding dresses
The male protagonist is extremely doting, with voice control in the early stage and all love in the later stage.
The heroine grows up, from low self-esteem to self-confidence, facing the wind and rain together
Reader comments
The sweet romance novel from the early days has a bit of a sadistic flavor, and it's okay for newcomers to write it. However, in the later stages of the novel, it may not be particularly relevant to the title of the book. However, there are early ancient novels where each character has the feeling of a little related story, which is more suitable for those who have just started novels, or those who are not smart and like sweet things, just skip the sad scenes.
These are suggestions only.
The title of the book is Online Games, and the introduction is about the same. The early online games and meeting parts are okay, but after this stage, it basically has a little bit of content, so it feels like the positioning is wrong. It would be more accurate to change it to another name and a more suitable introduction. (If it's not suitable, just keep it now)
In terms of character design, in fact, the protagonist, supporting characters and their families are relatively complete settings. Some of the descriptions may feel like a novice novel, so the character design slightly makes up for this shortcoming.
In terms of emotions, because the male and female protagonists are set in different places, it is probably the male love brain that falls in love at first sight vs. The female sweetheart who responds to the preference after receiving it. There is no big problem in this aspect, but the description is a bit old-fashioned and crooked. Emotional descriptions in the early ambiguous period are better than straightforward verbal descriptions in the later stages.
The storyline is fast-paced and somewhat jumpy. After all, it is an online game - meeting - campus - junior battles between wealthy families - grudges - big fights between wealthy families. This is probably the case
If we were to look at the early ancient times and complete the writing, it is estimated that there would be 1000-2000 chapters that could not be finished. The rhythm is just right at the moment, but there are too many parts that I want to express, and the transitions don't seem to be well connected. In the newbie period, the focus is on the complete ending and writing and character creation.
On the whole, I feel that the writing style mainly needs improvement in the transition from emotional ambiguity to the later stage and later (mainly I still think it is too much, maybe now I prefer the kind of implicit but direct expression without losing unrestrained. This requirement is high, hahahaha). The supporting character setting and deputy CPs are better off because they don't have so much emotional expression.
Come on
Good looking! ! Although Zhou Yuan's words earlier made me very angry. But I feel so distressed when I see it later. Can you please let Zhou Yuan leave as soon as possible? I beg you.
What is the relationship between Xia Ru and Lu Shujun? [Thinking]. It was mentioned earlier that Lu Shujun is a playboy. In the newly updated chapters, it seems that he also has feelings for Xia Ru, so what is the situation between them? What is Lu Shujun's relationship with Xia Ru? Does Lu Shujun really have many women? [Exploration]
The sight of Lu Shujun and Xia Ru makes me heartbroken [staring], I don't want them to be together, I want Xia Ru to be beautiful alone [laughs]
It's really good-looking, I like it so much. The love between Brother Jin and Tang Tang is so amazing, I like it so much.
It's beautiful, I like it very much, it's wonderful
Wow, I really like this kind of book. I also found such a beautiful book. The author's writing style is so good. Please give me more [love] [send heart] [make faces] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]
It's sweet at the front and slightly knifey in the middle, overall good. The previous settings are fine
The writing is a bit immature, but the plot is pretty good.
It's very interesting to watch, with ups and downs in the plot. It's a bit sadistic to make people happy, but a big bit sadistic is harmful to the body. Cry hard for me
Good-looking, good-looking, super sweet
The writing is very detailed, the scenes are very real, and it feels like you are actually there.
Very nice
This is so sweet~
Good nice!!! Ahhhhhhhh! Good-looking [send heart] [shy] give it to me [smile]
The sweet romance novel from the early days has a bit of a sadistic flavor, and it's okay for newcomers to write it. However, in the later stages of the novel, it may not be particularly relevant to the title of the book. However, there are early ancient novels where each character has the feeling of a little related story, which is more suitable for those who have just started novels, or those who are not smart and like sweet things, just skip the sad scenes. These are suggestions only. The title of the book is Online Games, and the introduction is about the same. The early online games and meeting parts are okay, but after this stage, it basically has a little bit of content, so it feels like the positioning is wrong. It would be more accurate to change it to another name and a more suitable introduction. (If it's not suitable, just keep it now) In terms of character design, in fact, the protagonist, supporting characters and their families are relatively complete settings. Some of the descriptions may feel like a novice novel, so the character design slightly makes up for this shortcoming. In terms of emotions, because the male and female protagonists are set in different places, it is probably the male love brain that falls in love at first sight vs. The female sweetheart who responds to the preference after receiving it. There is no big problem in this aspect, but the description is a bit old-fashioned and crooked. Emotional descriptions in the early ambiguous period are better than straightforward verbal descriptions in the later stages. The storyline is fast-paced and somewhat jumpy. After all, it is an online game - meeting - campus - junior battles between wealthy families - grudges - big fights between wealthy families. This is probably the case If we were to look at the early ancient times and complete the writing, it is estimated that there would be 1000-2000 chapters that could not be finished. The rhythm is just right at the moment, but there are too many parts that I want to express, and the transitions don't seem to be well connected. In the newbie period, the focus is on the complete ending and writing and character creation. On the whole, I feel that the writing style mainly needs improvement in the transition from emotional ambiguity to the later stage and later (mainly I still think it is too much, maybe now I prefer the kind of implicit but direct expression without losing unrestrained. This requirement is high, hahahaha). The supporting character setting and deputy CPs are better off because they don't have so much emotional expression. Come on
Good looking! ! Although Zhou Yuan's words earlier made me very angry. But I feel so distressed when I see it later. Can you please let Zhou Yuan leave as soon as possible? I beg you.
What is the relationship between Xia Ru and Lu Shujun? [Thinking]. It was mentioned earlier that Lu Shujun is a playboy. In the newly updated chapters, it seems that he also has feelings for Xia Ru, so what is the situation between them? What is Lu Shujun's relationship with Xia Ru? Does Lu Shujun really have many women? [Exploration] The sight of Lu Shujun and Xia Ru makes me heartbroken [staring], I don't want them to be together, I want Xia Ru to be beautiful alone [laughs]
It's really good-looking, I like it so much. The love between Brother Jin and Tang Tang is so amazing, I like it so much.
It's beautiful, I like it very much, it's wonderful
Wow, I really like this kind of book. I also found such a beautiful book. The author's writing style is so good. Please give me more [love] [send heart] [make faces] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]
It's sweet at the front and slightly knifey in the middle, overall good. The previous settings are fine
The writing is a bit immature, but the plot is pretty good.
It's very interesting to watch, with ups and downs in the plot. It's a bit sadistic to make people happy, but a big bit sadistic is harmful to the body. Cry hard for me
Good-looking, good-looking, super sweet
The writing is very detailed, the scenes are very real, and it feels like you are actually there.
Very nice
This is so sweet~
Good nice!!! Ahhhhhhhh! Good-looking [send heart] [shy] give it to me [smile]