Lord: I Can Draw Heroes from Every World

Lord Farming Struggle plus Summoning Stream has my favorite type of moon, encouraging one star. But whether it is the creation of the world view or the advancement of the plot, which is "too flat and straightforward" and lacks waves, the natural freshness and expectations will not be too high. "After all, the online writing is too convoluted, and the routines and plots are all the same." The character creation is also at the Pomodoro level, and there is still room for improvement. Although the writing is a bit stiff and immature, the topic selection is still attractive. If you can think more carefully about the plot and control the plot better, you can look forward to the future! "However, I suggest that the author treat this as a mentality of practicing writing." Don't be discouraged if there is not much positive feedback. Although the conditions of the Tomato platform are average, as long as you are willing to persevere, you can still improve the author's writing skills, and the future is promising!

It's so beautiful 🥺 Why is no one watching it? Why no one is watching Why no one is watching!

It's strange, I feel like it's okay when I read it, why no one read it, it's quite pitiful that no one cares about anything the author said in this chapter.

It's okay, but the progress is too fast and there is no content to develop the territory. And what about the Tobirama panel?