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Overall it's pretty good. Compared with the original plot, it has changed a lot and is very creative. But I have a few suggestions. The scene where the protagonist and his teacher meet in the dream feels a bit abrupt, and the teacher's personality is also a bit contradictory. For example, the teacher said: "A child like you is not worthy of becoming my wife." It feels arrogant and takes the protagonist as his partner for granted, but "Don't cry... I will give you everything..." "It doesn't matter if I am a dog for you." These two sentences have a humble feeling. I feel that if a vague figure appears first, faints from stimulation, and then formally meets the teacher, and the teacher does not explain his thoughts first, and slowly guides + psychological hints + frames his brother + seduces, it will be more in line with the teacher's character, and the original text will be more natural [Thinking] In short, if the author has a different idea, just pretend I didn't say it^ω^

The plot is very entertaining! Fei Fei Fei Fei Fei Fei is very beautiful, the author will update soon! ! ! ! ! ! And the potential for Harry to become gey again [laughing]

It's good to watch, it's good to watch, it's good to watch, it's good to watch, the plot is fun and the characters are not OOC [laughs] It's just that the chapters are a bit short, the author, please don't stop updating.

It's good to read, but the number of words is a bit short and not enough to read. Please let me watch it all at once. Www◝(●˙꒳˙●)◜⚘

I almost died laughing after reading it

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It's so funny. If you like me [admiration], don't stop following me. I will follow you to the death [blowing kiss]

Very good, when will it be updated? [Crying][crying][crying]

If books could win beauty pageants, this book would definitely be the best, and you won't be able to stop reading it!

The content of Dian Dian is interesting and relaxing, but the emotional descriptions are a bit scary. Mainly because I'm only 11 years old and it's scary to watch them fall in love.

I can't do it anymore and I'm going to die laughing.

Beautiful, beautiful!

Looks good, keep up the good work.

It's okay, you can take a look

I almost died laughing while watching it

Unearth the treasure of HP fan fiction! The whole process was hilarious and full of snacks.

Very beautiful, looking forward to the follow-up

Super, super pretty! Hurry up and update 100 articles, it shocked me

It's beautiful and has a lot of funny parts.

It's so pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡❤️(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's beautiful, it's so beautiful, my aunt can't stop laughing [shy]