JOJO：迪亚波奇的不妙冒险

It's okay, but I don't see the elements of the variety show. It's rare that the boss has a dual personality. I like this better.

It's very good, keep it up, and don't let the protagonist suffer. When reading this kind of novel, the only thing that is exciting is fighting, overwhelming strength, and handsome! There is also the element of organization, which must not be abandoned. In this era of chaotic chaos, not only the surface market, but also the underground black market must be luxurious and chaotic. The organization can completely eat both black and white, with a layer of golden body protection on the surface, and control an entire "underground empire" behind the scenes! As for the official attitude, I don't take the initiative to cause big troubles, but quietly build my dark market and underground empire. If you come to check "my past" [laughing evilly], let the entire officialdom know the anger of the emperor and the power of the "empire". Go develop more organizations, it will be of great use. [Laughing evilly] I would like to give you some advice, the author. I can understand that some people are investigating the protagonist, and I can also understand that the protagonist has some abilities that must be exposed. After all, the plot has to progress, but we must not let our protagonist be exposed because he is stupid again [awkward laugh]. Let's talk about the game. As a modern person who travels through time, even if you don't use your mobile phone for a long time, you will subconsciously know that such a big game is broadcast live, right? In short, you have to find a more reasonable reason, otherwise it will easily become a poisonous point. Anyway, keep going!

Yes, although the plot still needs improvement, overall the flaws are not hidden, and the content is very close to the original work. It can be regarded as the top-ranked book I have read in The Crimson King.

There was also a joke about Porky and JoJo. The protagonist's personality fits the villain better. In other words, the author wrote it based on the original Boos.

Well, it can be said that it is very good, but I have been thinking about a question in my mind. After completing the soul of the original owner and finding a substitute arrow to pierce myself, can I awaken another substitute?

Author, the overall writing of this book is quite good. I think the character creation in it is still good. Among the fanfics I have read, it can be ranked at the forefront. The only shortcoming is the author's new stand-in, but it is also understandable. After all, ordinary people do not have the brain circuits of ultimate creatures like Araki. Otherwise, the author would not be able to update three times a day. I would like to make a suggestion to the author here. Call the avatars of everyone except the protagonist as superpowers, so that there is no concept of avatars in this world. Otherwise, the author has written so many inhuman avatars, which looks weird. Although it is said that only powerful avatars and mental power can make avatars humanoid, the country in this article is Junjun Morio Town.

Very good, this is my type, join directly

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌

Good luck, good luck! I'm going to submit a piece for Red King's Requiem! The ability is to go back in time and delete a target, thereby erasing its existence in the future. Then send it to the future by sending a message, allowing your future self to activate its abilities to achieve a time closed loop and avoid the paradox of cause and effect.

Diavolo, who is rarely seen, please keep writing.

It feels good, but there are too few executions for the protagonist. According to the power of the Crimson King, there can be a few more executions, such as cutting off the limbs, piercing the chest, blowing the head and splitting the whole person in half, vertical and horizontal.

It's great. It suits my taste very well.

I finally found a good jojo author and I must read more.

Shen Qiu's two heroines, a reward of 45

Yes, the Crimson King's ability is very good, and then there is the battle of wits.

Everything I wrote above is fine, except for the appearance of Shen Qingqiu and the inexplicable interaction with the heroine. Can Shen Nong tell me what happened to this girl? I just gave a three-star rating to a book that was neither good nor bad but rather mediocre. I feel that based on this standard, the previous rating was a bit unfair, so I changed it.

I feel like the original owner could also use a stand-in [laughs crookedly] Why is there so much plot about the protagonist's younger brother? It's not interesting at all.

The portrayal of a four-point-five-star character is not that vivid [laughs awkwardly], but he is one of the few bosses with two personalities [eating melon]. This must be given extra points.

It's good. I want to watch The Emperor and I want to watch Shefengboqi Daida. Also... Can I change that inexplicable post?

As the author's first work, it is very good, but the number of words is too few, and the author I like you

This book should have gone moldy a long time ago because Porchi-chan turned into Diabochi.

The emperor is me, Diabocida!

I am Emperor Diavolo!

It feels good and has great potential

Let me guess, the appearance of the protagonist is related to the Crimson King's Requiem. What ability of the Requiem sent the protagonist back? Your boss writes like the kind of comedian who keeps clamoring to rule the world.

It's a great book, but why is no one reading it? What a great Narcissus! ! !

This is my favorite type, five stars straight away

Okay [Like] It's pretty good It's okay, but the organization specializes in producing crystals. As the boss, you can directly provide unlimited enhancements, and it's not that exciting after conquering the organization. It's really boring to write too much about the campus, and 18 chapters are all about the competition between novices (🙂) With such talent and power, don't become a J-class being to rule the world and then travel through the manga

Okay, in my mind this book belongs to the boss. If you have a website, you can recommend it.

Red King can be ranked first, but the updates are too slow. Let's wait for a while and then take a look.