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Recently, the criminals of the royal capital gathered for a meeting.
“Have you heard? An angel named Yanling just joined the guild, and he can fly!”
“What's there to be afraid of? No matter how strong he is, he's still just one person. I'll go take him on!”
“Um, can I help you?” Gauss asked the troublemaker who had come looking for a fight. Beside him, several max-level six-star characters all turned around at once, weapons at the ready.
“Uh, sorry. I came into the wrong room.”
“Since you're already here, why not come in and sit for a while?” Gauss called out warmly as the door closed by itself.
“No, no, I think I'll... Aaaah!”
A few minutes later, Gauss glanced at the troublemaker lying peacefully on the floor, then at the other troublemakers sprawled around the room, and sighed quietly. “Looks like I'll be Employee of the Month again.”
I just saw the latest chapter, it's pretty good, the setting is similar to the Magician's Manual, and I hope the author will ignore those who are calling for no female protagonist. If you really don't have a female protagonist, they will start to find male and female CPs for the male protagonist.
The writing is quite good, although there are still some flaws, but it looks more pleasing to the eye. It's still annoying. Why do you have to wait until you're about to be beaten every time before appearing, and during this period, you have to draw such painful pictures? It's better to let the character go offline. This kind of plot is really boring.
It's exciting but short in quantity. Although the writing style is not very good, the content of the article is wonderful. Although I don't know why some people say it is orthopedics in the comment section, I can't see where there is orthopedics. The emotional line refers to the love and protectiveness of a protagonist who is a brother who has passed through the body. As a person who has passed through the body, he may just want to live and protect his sister at the beginning. Protect or save my sister, and survive in that color world, but the golden finger given to the protagonist is still quite strong. From the drawing of the six-star human blood puppet, the director and other characters, the character image is very specific. Well, it is very humane. But if you start to look at it from other aspects and angles, you will feel that the real emotional line behind it may be a bit rich. But the main focus is on the strength and growth of the protagonist. However, you can update more to see if the plot below is good and whether there are multiple heroines or single heroines. In fact, it doesn't matter whether there is a heroine or not. The main thing is to see whether the relationship line is good or not. The main story is whether their love is love and happiness. It doesn't matter how noble and beautiful the girls are, they are together or not. There are indirect relationships that influence them to be together or to hinder them. If you really want to tell the story of love or the relationship between them, I don't recommend multiple female protagonists. Although the emotional line of the plot is a bit very toxic, I recommend it, but the overall article is still good. I have already seen some of the toxic points in the article, but it is okay. I recommend everyone to read it. Overall, it is wonderful.
It's good to read, but it's laggy, and all the highlights are missing. I need to save some of my writing, otherwise I'll get stuck and feel uncomfortable. I'd also like to ask if there's a female protagonist.
The world view design is quite novel and interesting. By the way, I hope my sister will also be the heroine. After all, time travel is not a real thing. There are already comments saying that it is a bit of a drag, so I might as well accept it. I hope I can keep writing.
In terms of world view, this is the first time I have seen a color-based world view. The subject matter is relatively new, but some settings are not fully described, such as the color world and the agent god. The color settings are not bad, and the character descriptions are also okay. The reason why the protagonist is imprisoned is very good. I like it very much. I hope that the jazz that sentenced the protagonist to death can be destroyed in the future₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑
This is a book that is not heavy in content, but can surprise people while reading. The story is coherent overall, but a little confusing. The world view is very interesting, and the resolution of the initial difficulties and the protagonist's golden finger development can be well brought into the story. What stands out is undoubtedly the characterization. The protagonist's image and human emotions are quite sufficient. The first half of the growth line is solid, but the second half of the plot, such as the upgrade of the gold level and the appearance of the little black dragon, is a bit abrupt. The original text is still a little lacking in foreshadowing. There is a feeling of showing up for the sake of showing up, and forcibly improving in order to face the boss. For the little black dragon, I feel that she can be set to be drawn from the drawing card. This can not only create an unexpected but reasonable feeling, but also pave the way for more things to face later. The merchant gave this character as a gift to become a "tool" to deal with the situation. Other supporting characters, such as the Loli doll who accompanies the protagonist to fight and fight with each other and is also a representative of output, and the director who treats the protagonist as one of his own, also have distinctive personalities, self-consistent emotional logic, and a very "human touch", which makes the entire story world come alive. Even though some of the tool-man roles are a bit thin, they appear just for the sake of "appearing". The sense of substitution at the end is slightly weak, and the atmosphere of this decisive battle cannot be well substituted. But these did not affect the overall look and feel. Overall, this work has found its own rhythm, the content is wonderful, and it is worth reading.
Soul travels, there is a sister, someone who doesn't like it comes in by mistake ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑
It's a good-looking book. It's rare for Tomato to read such a good-looking book. The writing style is humorous and interesting. It's relatively relaxed and pleasant. The progress of the plot development is relatively relaxed. I like this type of writing. It's well received.
Great setting and well written. But the protagonist is a spirit-travelling foreigner, and there is also a section where a Chinese god calls the protagonist a foreign devil, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to get involved.