The Lover of the Mortal World

I haven't read it yet, so I'd like to give the author a suggestion. You can consider following the anime. Many people got into anime, and you can add some pictures of female anime characters. Now everyone likes Song Yu, Mei Ning, Mu Peiling (animated version), Ling Yuling, etc. Nowadays, many of them are based on novels, and animations have done a better job of portraying some female characters, such as Zi Ling and Mu Peiling. The original works may not be very likable, but the animations portray them very well.

Mo Juren only has one wife? Has the author read the original work?

My main dissatisfaction is that the plot changes too suddenly and the next scene is suddenly reached before the previous scene is completed.

Since Nangong has been confiscated, I'll give you three stars. I'm a little disappointed.

The transition was too fast and there were three people getting married and only one of them had to be a tortoise!

The woman withdrew the push, but then just put it aside and didn't care about life or death. She was worse than Han Li.

It's time and again 🤢

Selling dog meat on a sheep's head, tricking you into reading the introduction

Rebirth of CB can make you stronger

This is not a TV series. The plot should be smoothly connected and not change suddenly.

After so long, all the women have formed elixirs. Even Xin Ruyin has formed elixirs. In the middle stage, the protagonist is still building the foundation. He seems to have no interest in waiting for you to become a god. The day lily has become cold.

I feel like the protagonist's system isn't very good [eating melon]

Aren't they four wives and three daughters?

The writing is a bit messy, here and there

My head hurts when I look at it. I don't know what you want to express. The more I look at it, the more sleepy I feel.

It's not a cool article, there are a lot of confusions!

It's not bad. There aren't many good-looking mortals left.

Tomato doesn't have any fanfics on Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, they are all second creations, and the author's words are all about letting himself go.

This book is quite enjoyable to read, but the male protagonist talks about everything except the system. Either spoiling some bad guys or enlightening some people. For example, he told others the complicated situation of each sect when he was only in the Qi training period. He was not the boss of Nascent Soul, so why did he tell others about the situation that only the time traveler knew.

Yes, the author has read the original work

It's pretty good. I can write it well.

Are there any mortal harem episodes?

Looks good, not bad, keep going

It's still very ok, but it's hard to hang it on the wall [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

Okay, okay, remember to remember bbdj multi-activity activities dress up phone number

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

It looks good. It's a pity to sue for copyright infringement. Come on, author.

Brother, give the characters, whatever, similar names, and keep writing, please, please, Good looking, good looking, good looking

It's good-looking, one of the better among mortal fanfics.

The book is a good book. Where is Han Li?