Slaughter System: From Goblins to Gods!

If you continue it in advance when posting chapters, there won't be so many typos, the logic will be smoother, and the sentences will be more natural. Don't write too many characters. Novices don't have so much energy to write so many characters. Write a few with more distinct personalities. When describing characters, try to write more. Changing characters too fast, changing too many characters will affect the perception. About the protagonist There should be more descriptions, and you should look at the characters from the perspective of the protagonist. As long as there are not too many characters, there will not be too much sense of human-machine. And the author, you should not think one thing at a time. As an author, your ideas should be ahead of the readers, and you must learn to foreshadow. For example, you can reveal the Knights of the Holy Ring when they are in the City of Light. You don't need to reveal too much, and you can leave some suspense. Be sure to read the last chapter before posting it. After revision, it can improve the reader's perception.

Too many typos

The writing is mixed.

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Nice setting!

It's still good, but there are a lot of typos. The author can polish it up before publishing. Come on [please update]