Dual male protagonist/sweet pet/unlimited flow/gram series/protagonist Su Bai 1v1
Is it wrong to just stay up all night and travel to a weird dungeon game? I'm just a little painter who usually likes to draw some paintings? ! No one told me that I need women's clothing to travel through time. Help! Lord Earl, it turns out that you are a big fan! ?
Reader comments
Overall, it's a very good book, especially the plot. There's a lot of room for improvement. There are some problems with pronouns, some paragraphs are too long, and some descriptions could be reduced appropriately.
All in all, it's a very good book. I hope the author writes better and better. [Blow a kiss]
After reading the first copy, I feel that it is quite good. The emotional descriptions are quite delicate, but the author could reduce some descriptions of appearance and environment appropriately, which may make the reading smoother. Overall it's pretty good now [KISS][Like][Like][Like][KISS][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]
If you like touch control, you must read the first copy! ! [The masterpiece of bird food][The masterpiece of bird food]
Great author, this book is very good. I have already seen it when I read Chapter 5. The setting and plot of this book are very interesting. However, there is a problem with your person. It is third person, second person, and then first person. Also, there is a problem with your paragraphing. It would be better if you can change it. I hope the author can change it.
Awesome, I haven't seen such a beautiful book in a long time! ! !
Ahhhh! It's great to read, I hope the author will update more! [Send heart][Send heart]
Overall, it's a very good book, especially the plot. There's a lot of room for improvement. There are some problems with pronouns, some paragraphs are too long, and some descriptions could be reduced appropriately. All in all, it's a very good book. I hope the author writes better and better. [Blow a kiss]
After reading the first copy, I feel that it is quite good. The emotional descriptions are quite delicate, but the author could reduce some descriptions of appearance and environment appropriately, which may make the reading smoother. Overall it's pretty good now [KISS][Like][Like][Like][KISS][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love] If you like touch control, you must read the first copy! ! [The masterpiece of bird food][The masterpiece of bird food]
Great author, this book is very good. I have already seen it when I read Chapter 5. The setting and plot of this book are very interesting. However, there is a problem with your person. It is third person, second person, and then first person. Also, there is a problem with your paragraphing. It would be better if you can change it. I hope the author can change it.
Awesome, I haven't seen such a beautiful book in a long time! ! !
Ahhhh! It's great to read, I hope the author will update more! [Send heart][Send heart]