The first book had many flaws and areas that needed improvement. When I was rushing to finish the manuscript, I didn't handle many areas well. If you had read my other books first, you might not be able to stand this one.
Reader comments
The writing is pretty good, and there are many plots that really touched my heart. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] I feel very fond of the two male protagonists [Admiration]. I feel that this novel is very good and the author is also very good. The writing is very good [Love] [Love] [Love]
It feels okay so far, and I'm looking forward to Su Mo's original world.
Anyone who doesn't look at me will be sad, okay?
If I don't update for a day, I will be very sad. The author is great~
Come on! The author is great.
There is writing style, but the current writing is too early for me to write. Maybe it's not enough. ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑
Very exciting, looking forward to the follow-up
It's a sweet little novel, with average writing style and compact plot structure. It's still a very good book! ! [Full] Looking forward to the next book [Blowing a kiss]
Five stars, no need to say more
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
I would like to ask the author how many worlds he will write. When I saw the second world, I felt that the progress was so fast [face covering]
The writing is pretty good, and there are many plots that really touched my heart. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] I feel very fond of the two male protagonists [Admiration]. I feel that this novel is very good and the author is also very good. The writing is very good [Love] [Love] [Love]
It feels okay so far, and I'm looking forward to Su Mo's original world.
Anyone who doesn't look at me will be sad, okay? If I don't update for a day, I will be very sad. The author is great~
Come on! The author is great. There is writing style, but the current writing is too early for me to write. Maybe it's not enough. ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑
Very exciting, looking forward to the follow-up
It's a sweet little novel, with average writing style and compact plot structure. It's still a very good book! ! [Full] Looking forward to the next book [Blowing a kiss]
Five stars, no need to say more
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
I would like to ask the author how many worlds he will write. When I saw the second world, I felt that the progress was so fast [face covering]