Riqing: My Way to Save Myself in the Love Game

After reading it, the article is overall good. The writing style is very fresh and has a pure feeling. The description of the characters' emotions is also quite reasonable. There are no sudden changes. The plot is also handled well, neither compact nor protracted. The system settings are also good. It is not too overwhelming or has no sense of existence. Overall, it is an excellent work. However, we have some humble opinion, that is, some sentences appear too frequently, that is, some emphasis on the heroine(s?) Character modification, such as the heroine's acceptance of "imperfection", there are too many, and it feels a bit... Burdensome? (Nothing malicious, but it feels a bit like AI) But all in all I think it's a good work and I quite like it.

I just want to know if anyone really wants to come back without a father or a mother?

This is a very traditional systematic redemption novel. In the early stage, the male protagonist redeems the female protagonists in one direction, and in the later stage, there is a high probability of two-way redemption. The writing is good, but the plot is old-fashioned and classic, and it's something you can watch at a glance. But as you can see from my ratings, classics never go out of style [Cool]

It's very delicate. I've never played this game (I saw other people in the comment section saying that this game actually exists). It's a bit different from the author's other styles, but I quite like this one. It feels warm and reassuring.

The writing is quite good, but the role of the system is a bit too great. The methods for discovering problems, pointing out problems, and solving problems are basically provided by the system, which may be a bit confusing. It is recommended to weaken the role of the system. For example, giving props can be replaced by giving guiding clues, so that people can directly see that the memory can be turned into a guide to find other people who know about the matter. Personally, I think it's well written, but the plot is a bit cliche. Maybe I've read too many similar novels. Overall, it's pretty good. If I had read this book earlier, I might have liked it more.

Certified by Shennong, tsk~ No one eats the classic fine rice novel. It is a very good light novel. The writing and plot are all top-notch. I read the author's previous novels and they have nothing to do with this subject. I thought it was Pineapple B who came here to play. Come on, author. I have read many light novels with this theme. Without exception, none of them can handle the harem problem well. I hope the author can deal with the subsequent emotional problems of the protagonist cautiously.

Five stars for encouragement. Everything the protagonist says and does is quite comforting. It is different from some clichéd Asasi stories that have their own flaws. Despite the fact that the introduction and title are quite funny, the protagonist's character is actually quite serious. The rating is low, it is considered comfortable among the same type, at least 8 points or above

Good reviews, but soul wear. The protagonist's attitude towards the heroine has also changed from taking advantage of it, which is good. Being considerate and caring means treating others sincerely. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] Let's add another chapter [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

Bookworm certified! Very well written! Watch it all in one go! Each heroine has her own characteristics, and the story of each heroine is also well written, neither blunt nor brainless! This is very important! It's a bit unsatisfying to read, so come on, author!

This is a very good redemption story. Redemption requires not only saving others but also saving oneself. This has always been the main line of many redemption stories. Fortunately, the emotions of this story are natural and the rhythm is appropriate. Reading it in one breath makes people feel natural and not very unreasonable. Although the characters used are indeed a bit cliché, it is good to integrate them into their own stories. I look forward to the author creating more interesting and distinctive characters.

It's a very good book. The setting is common but also novel. The writing is the strong point of this book. The emotional portrayal and the growth of the main characters are particularly good. It is not abrupt or deliberate. The system's over intervention is also a foreshadowing. It is explained later. If you read it patiently, you will become more and more involved. The 200 chapters are not long, and I feel that the author's writing skills are also steadily improving. Adding tomatoes is also a top-notch choice. It's a pity that the author's ending is still a bit hasty. It's understandable to polish the supplementary details (such as why Liuli and other participants are different from the protagonist and can be explained with the privilege of friends). If you like the author, you can reincarnate and continue the work.

It is a good light novel, the writing is delicate, and the story is very simple. The hero redeems the heroine in order to return to the original world. In the process, the heroine falls in love with the hero, and the hero also becomes reluctant to let go of his current life. In short, the story is simple, but it is not easy to write well. There is no problem with the author's writing. The only problem is that the update is too slow. I don't know why so few people read this book and the rating is so low.

After playing the Gala game and then reading a chapter, it was really pleasant [admiration] [laughing]

After roughly reading it, I found that the author has too little description of the character's appearance, the characters' characteristics are okay, and the plot progress is also okay. Just like a fourth comment in the comment area said, some plots have been mentioned too many times, making people feel like AI writing. So far, I feel okay, unlike what a third comment said, I suggest the author in the future. When describing a character, remember to describe the character's appearance, because every time you meet a new character, you basically know the character by looking at the color, but without knowing the appearance, it gives people less of an immersive feeling. It is more like someone telling you about a person orally, what his character is like, etc., But you don't know what he looks like and you can't imagine it. Regarding the appearance of the characters, I saw that they only pointed out some of the more obvious features, such as whether they wear glasses, whether their bangs are long, etc., But the specific appearance, height, etc. Were not mentioned, which is a big pain point.

It can be regarded as a piece of light with delicate emotions, especially the tomato. Emotion is the biggest advantage of lightness. The shortcomings are also obvious. The purpose is clear, such as determined to return to the home where you are alone; strong execution ability, such as pressing the refresh button; strategizing, such as knowing how to press the refresh button; for example, the difficulty of the task is moderate, and the difficulty of destroying the world can be solved by picking a tooth. Chapter 46 was updated to say that there should be an undead Bai Yueguang, so it is not so blunt to go back, but the lack of confidence in strategizing is once again aggravated, "I don't know why I can, but I just can, anyway, I have refreshed" The dirty planning

Can this book survive the emotional changes of the characters in it? The author seems to be addicted to the classic Japanese Asashi male protagonist's redemption harem story. Will the innovative personality setting be ruined by the routine redemption drama? The kidnapper scene makes me even more curious about how the personality breakdown scene went. There will be no introduction scams or no outline. Can't you continue writing? Is it going to end badly? [Laugh]

After doing Shennong so many times, I finally got to eat fine chaff😭 Boss, you must keep writing it🥰

Well, the first female protagonist liked the "protagonist" in the game and was comforted by the current protagonist. She started to like the current protagonist again. It's not too toxic, because the characters she met were all very good and reasonable. There was no classic derogatory part, and the protagonist's personality was also good. After half of the book, it was still interesting to read. Later, a certain female protagonist suspected that the male protagonist had traveled through the soul and suddenly felt discouraged and didn't want to read it. I guess the ending will be a bust. Or is it the dream of the previous sister who appears to the protagonist? The protagonist has always wanted to go back.

The writing is delicate, and the female characters do not have a single personality label. They have both a soft side and a firm core. Their growth and transformation are natural and delicate, and the characters are full and tense. And the protagonist also looks like a human being [Like]

The writing is quite good and worth reading, but it may be cut in half due to poor data. As far as the plot I have read so far, the plot of the president sisters has not developed, and the beach vacation has turned into a sudden accident. I hope I can continue writing it.

The author's new book Come on Come on

What I want to see is this mouth tooth!

It's really good. I hope the author won't interrupt the book midway and end it hastily. Maybe this is also an opportunity for me and the protagonist to come out [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

The plot is very interesting and very interesting.

It's similar to My Girlfriend is a Villain, Tokyo's Most Affectionate, where the system tasks upgrade the all-round protagonist, and the harem is full of pretentiousness and slaps in the face. The psychological description in this book will be relatively delicate. I don't know if it uses AI. I haven't read this type of book for a long time. I miss my youth~

It's very beautiful and the writing is very delicate. It's a pity that so few people have read it. I hope many people can read it, and I also hope that this book will not be unfinished.

A rare good work

I'd better give it a four. I couldn't stand the anonymous threat part. In fact, it's no different from playing with an open card.

Why is this okay book rated so low? Is it because of the previous book Homecoming?

Will you write a side story about Sunset? I'm curious about the story before the time travel. And will the heroines remember the protagonist later?