Japanese Light Novel: How I Save Everyone in a Dating Sim

After reading it, the article is overall good. The writing style is very fresh and has a pure feeling. The description of the characters' emotions is also quite reasonable. There are no sudden changes. The plot is also handled well, neither compact nor protracted. The system settings are also good. It is not too overwhelming or has no sense of existence. Overall, it is an excellent work. However, we have some humble opinion, that is, some sentences appear too frequently, that is, some emphasis on the heroine(s?) Character modification, such as the heroine's acceptance of "imperfection", there are too many, and it feels a bit... Burdensome? (Nothing malicious, but it feels a bit like AI) But all in all I think it's a good work and I quite like it.

I just want to know if anyone really wants to come back without a father or a mother?

This is a very traditional systematic redemption novel. In the early stage, the male protagonist redeems the female protagonists in one direction, and in the later stage, there is a high probability of two-way redemption. The writing is good, but the plot is old-fashioned and classic, and it's something you can watch at a glance. But as you can see from my ratings, classics never go out of style 😎

It's very delicate. I've never played this game (I saw other people in the comment section saying that this game actually exists). It's a bit different from the author's other styles, but I quite like this one. It feels warm and reassuring.

The writing is quite good, but the role of the system is a bit too great. The methods for discovering problems, pointing out problems, and solving problems are basically provided by the system, which may be a bit confusing. It is recommended to weaken the role of the system. For example, giving props can be replaced by giving guiding clues, so that people can directly see that the memory can be turned into a guide to find other people who know about the matter. Personally, I think it's well written, but the plot is a bit cliche. Maybe I've read too many similar novels. Overall, it's pretty good. If I had read this book earlier, I might have liked it more.

Certified by Shennong, tsk~ No one eats the classic fine rice novel. It is a very good light novel. The writing and plot are all top-notch. I read the author's previous novels and they have nothing to do with this subject. I thought it was Pineapple B who came here to play. Come on, author. I have read many light novels with this theme. Without exception, none of them can handle the harem problem well. I hope the author can deal with the subsequent emotional problems of the protagonist cautiously.

Five stars for encouragement. Everything the protagonist says and does is quite comforting. It is different from some clichéd Asasi stories that have their own flaws. Despite the fact that the introduction and title are quite funny, the protagonist's character is actually quite serious. The rating is low, it is considered comfortable among the same type, at least 8 points or above

Good reviews, but soul wear. The protagonist's attitude towards the heroine has also changed from taking advantage of it, which is good. Being considerate and caring means treating others sincerely. 🥰🥰🥰[Admiration] Let's add another chapter 😢 😢 😢

Bookworm certified! Very well written! Watch it all in one go! Each heroine has her own characteristics, and the story of each heroine is also well written, neither blunt nor brainless! This is very important! It's a bit unsatisfying to read, so come on, author!

This is a very good redemption story. Redemption requires not only saving others but also saving oneself. This has always been the main line of many redemption stories. Fortunately, the emotions of this story are natural and the rhythm is appropriate. Reading it in one breath makes people feel natural and not very unreasonable. Although the characters used are indeed a bit cliché, it is good to integrate them into their own stories. I look forward to the author creating more interesting and distinctive characters.