Ming Chao: the Chao Girl Knocked Her Out of the Dragon Ball System at the Beginning

To be honest, the author's writing is pretty good. Well, don't complete the Dragon Balls directly after transferring it to Huang Long. Otherwise, the subsequent plot will be difficult to write, otherwise there will be no fun. Otherwise, it will not look good if he is invincible from the beginning. The protagonist's personality is worse than that at the beginning. I am more irritable. Later, the author's writing is better and the protagonist's personality starts to escape. It is quite good. The protagonist's personality is still very cheerful. This is a good protagonist. It is good to create an image for Dujue [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

As a fellow Mingchao fan author, I have to support a group of authors. I can see that this book has the strongest resonance in terms of style. It is quite good. This kind of funny and humorous writing is actually quite popular among the fans and has great potential. In comparison, my writing of the main drama is a niche among the niche. I am lucky if I don't die suddenly. The Dragon Ball system is also well written. Although I don't know much about Dragon Ball itself, it integrates well with the world view of Mingchao. At least it is used appropriately as a refreshing point and to advance the plot. The plot is a little flat at the beginning, but then it grows rapidly, and it has the tendency to become a passionate growth drama and become an invincible one. Finally, the book develops at a moderate pace in terms of love, and there is no brainless acquisition of girls. Ah Piao seems to be the eldest wife, and another wife who is in strict control hh Also, this is the first book I've seen about harvesting rice. The author is really the fan author who respects Kanban Niang the most on the Internet, but u1s1, I really want to see Saki-senpai and Yun Fude eat, I'll see if the author can arrange it [laughter]

Eh! It suddenly occurred to me that if I was afraid that the protagonist's combat power would be difficult to suppress, I might as well not suppress them at all, and let the protagonist deal with these guys like One Star Dragon and Two Star Dragon. This would also pave the way for the subsequent Super 3 and Super 4. I don't have to worry about the protagonist being too invincible and don't know how to write it. It would also allow Mingshio's characters, especially Niaochuang, to deeply understand the power of the Saiyans and see if he still feels that he can defeat the protagonist [laughing], and no one would like it if he overpowers the protagonist. As for the people who died because of One Star Dragon and the others? You're stupid (it doesn't matter), with the dragon ball here, you can be resurrected at any time (scumbag dog's empty face) [sneaky laugh]

Author update soon The author's soul returns. 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul has returned, driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles. 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul comes back. Comes over the mountain and sings. Comes back. The soul comes back. 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul comes back. It sings loudly and triumphs. It is the same robe and glory. 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back. The soul is back. Tao: Rebirth Mantra The Supreme Lord's decree transcends your lonely soul, all ghosts and ghosts, and is blessed by you in all your lives. Those with heads will surpass, those without heads will rise, kill with spears and knives, dive and hang on ropes. Die openly and secretly, die unjustly, creditor and enemy, beg for life. Kneel down in front of my stage, the Eight Diagrams will shine, stand out from the threshold, and transcend other places. As a man or a woman, you are responsible for your own responsibility. Whether you are rich or poor is your own responsibility. The order is given to save the people, and the people who are waiting for it are saved. The people who are waiting for the order are saved, and the people are saved. (Heart of the mantra: The Supreme Order, transcending your lonely soul. You can just recite these eight characters. If you can add: escape from the sea of ​​suffering and reincarnate as an adult, even better)

Yes, one of the few Mingchao fans who can watch it It was fine at the beginning, but the back has collapsed. Any monster in the back can explode stars at will. How can Pig's Foot protect others and the planet? The rest depends entirely on the author's settings, and it's still very stiff.

It's still very good, although the early stage is a little bit off, which is a bit annoying for me who don't like to read very much, especially those who are in the second grade, but it is an advantage for those who like to read. After I read it to about 20 pictures, I felt very comfortable reading it [Like] [Like] [Like] The writing can at least rank in the top three of the Ming Dynasty novels I have read.

It was a bit annoying to watch the protagonist's passing and escaping, but after accepting it, it's not impossible to watch. In addition, I won't say much else, but I feel that this is not a Dragon Ball, but a fragment of the Four Souls Jade. When Inuyasha looked for the fragments, he was not as diligent as the protagonist, and he found them. Moreover, the effect is very similar. Holding the Dragon Ball can strengthen oneself. After seeing the Four Souls Jade, I said yes [face covering]

If all seven Dragon Balls are collected by then, I hope that the protagonist will stop the Dragon Balls when they fly away again after making a wish (I read other novels about Dragon Balls and I don't understand why the protagonist doesn't stop the Dragon Balls. This directly saves a wave of time to find the Dragon Balls and prevents the Dragon Balls from being taken away by others)

The writing is very good, and even those who have never played Mingchao can understand it. O(*≧▽≦)ツ I will add comments in the future if the writing is not good.

The fusion of Mingchao and Dragon Ball plots in this book really touched my taste. At the very least, I enjoyed reading it. The author said in his final remarks that his writing skills are not good, and being able to write it proves that his writing skills are strong. So I really like this book and may read it later. After reading it a few more times, the author's thinking is very good, and there are not many poisonous points for me. I hope to see the author's new books in the future. If there are Chinese comic settings such as Yiren or Sun and Moon books that are integrated with other world views, I will definitely support it [Adore][Adore][Adore]

If I were to be a fun person and A-Piao would be the heroine, it would be okay if I had a single heroine.

After reading it, Harem has good reviews, overall it's not bad, but I feel like it can still be written. 😋 Later on, the Dragon Ball system is a bit dominated by the evil dragons, but if you really want to write about Super Saiyans, you really have to get some alien enemies, otherwise the quality will drop too much, Mingchaoli is already considered a fairy grass, you can watch it

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, A blessed moment, happy New Year's Eve, happy New Year, all the best, all your wishes come true. In the new year, I hope you have stars in your eyes, mountains and seas in your heart, a road under your feet, and a bright future. Even if there are hardships and hardships, you can move forward fearlessly; even if you are ordinary and ordinary, you can still reap joy. May everyone you miss be safe and happy, and may all of you be able to protect each other's bonds and find your own destination in the long river of time. (Inner OS: These children are always so straightforward and cute. I hope my blessings can really accompany them through the new year.)

I've finished reading it. It's very good. It's to my liking. Come on, author. I support you. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Overall, it's pretty good, at least for me (it gives me the feeling of reading a comic book from seven or eight years ago). It's good [learned] and [like]. If possible, it would be better to optimize the details, huh.

But don't stop updating, it's not easy to find a book about Longzhu Mingchao [crying]

It feels pretty good. But it depends on the author's control over the protagonist's combat power in the future. After all, Dragon Ball's combat power is difficult to say.

You can come and take a look, it's finished, it's not much but it's very nice [shy][salute] God can do anything, no knife can hide it

I have finished reading it. The protagonist was frustrated at the beginning, but only once. He improved very quickly in the later period and was basically not frustrated at all. The ending is not bad. Generally speaking, it is relatively good among fics. If you like Mingchao and Dragon Ball, you can check it out.

Why is the rating so low? I find it quite interesting.

Come on, big brother who likes to write about little Liu Bei! ! [Laughs][laughs]

It's a book with great potential, but I don't know how the author will solve the problem of combat power later on. Although I haven't read Dragon Ball, I heard that star explosions are common in it.

The author has good ideas

There's nothing more to say, just wish me Chisaki, brothers!

It is indeed possible, but it has to be in the middle and late stages. It still looks very poisonous in the early stage, but I am a new author, so I understand.

I don't know why this book has such a low rating. Personally, I feel that this book is quite good-looking, but its combat power may be a bit low. If you don't look at the combat power, it's basically okay.

Take a look, recruit more girls, those female characters are quite good-looking, super two are good-looking

Ah, don't stop, don't stop, I love to watch, I like to watch, I will keep chasing [shy]

This is the most beautiful Mingchao fanfic in my opinion