Xingtie: Diary? the Artifact of Sitting and Forgetting!

Finally there is a book that cannot be read by AI😭

I have seen Chapter 66 so far, and overall the impression is very good. The current emotional scenes include Hoshi, March 7, Esta, Ranpo, Liuying, and a black tower doll "Aita" belonging to the protagonist. (Although Daheita Ruan Mei appears, there is no obvious emotional line) As a harem article, let's talk about the emotional drama first: My personal opinion is quite good. If it were a normal emotional drama, it would actually seem a bit rushed. However, the author cleverly arranged cheats such as "the main character of the book" and "absolute dominance" so that the emotional line will not cause serious personality collapse of the character. After all, this kind of cheating setting is equivalent to a 50-point increase in favorability during the meeting, and the difficulty of the strategy is greatly reduced. In addition, Qiong is also a character with a strong personality. This speed of emotional development is definitely not too hasty. On the contrary, as a harem novel, it is actually a little slower. (Tea needs to be shaken slowly, and the taste will fade if you are anxious. I also hope that readers who are eager to read the side plot can understand the author's difficulties ´ₒ⦁⩊⦁ₒ`) Let's talk about the plot line... To be honest, I think it's quite dragging (maybe it's because the author doesn't want to be backstabbed by the subsequent plot?). Except for the original plot, it's rare to see the protagonist stay on the space station at the beginning for so long, but the interesting thing is that after summing up, you will find that not a few days have passed at all. The story written by the author is generally biased toward daily writing, unfolding various small events that occur in daily life. In this way, the subsequent plot should be mainly based on this aspect. The protagonist's combat power also supports the protagonist to take a route similar to "semi-invincible writing". Perhaps when Pinocone and Ompharos do not need to debate at all, it is also feasible to run over them directly. But I personally don't want to see such a plot, because it is extraordinary when there are contradictions and conflicts. Of course, it still depends on what the author has considered in the outline. The subsequent plot is worth looking forward to. (The follow-up imperial chapter is also worth looking forward to ୧((•̀ꇴ•))૭⁺✧) Finally, there are some detailed settings, such as how to distribute fire spears, hats, quills, and support sticks between dual pioneers; for example, a common problem in harem novels is to forget the old love when you have a new love, and leave the characters in the previous strategy behind; for example, the true identity of the system that is difficult to explain in the later stages of the system novel, etc... These problems are big or small, but they will all become obstacles on the way to the completion of this novel. I hope the author's outline can fill them in one by one. (Isn't this a lot of nonsense (•́ω•̀ ٥)) Summary: A very enjoyable and serious novel (bold), the scale of the plot is thought-provoking (bold), although it is a harem novel, it does not rush into it, and it provides a buffer for emotional drama, full of pure love (good reviews). Although the writing style is a bit young, it is already an edible yellow persimmon in the tomato area (laughs). I hope the author will continue to work hard and face the sinking river (I can't stand it hahaha~) Come on! The big brother who writes the emperor's story! (≧ω≦)[Like]

Please choose your hero: 1 A pure white and leak-free net that mysteriously seals the past 2 The Dragonborn who was reincarnated and committed big troubles and suffered serious crimes 3 The laws of the world written by the destiny of the space traveler 4 The true and unknown guest who combines truth and falsehood to deceive the world 5 The mysterious protagonist with amnesia who can talk as soon as he wakes up 6 concept-level linked records for the unique train conductor

Thank you for your comments!

I read Chapter 63 and it was okay. The author is really serious, and he has a handwritten outline of the emotional line, which is just like a novice author's writing style. I don't like Liu Ying's plot. The plot, the diary content, etc. All feel awkward to write, but after all, it's a novice author, so it's okay if there's nothing poisonous about it. Five stars encourage the author.

I don't want to write a book review, so I'll give it a maximum of 4 points. The biggest problem with this book is that it's a little lacking. It's not a big problem. It's just that it's a bit confusing, but you don't have to throw it all away.

Your setting is to travel back and forth through the sky twice, and the black cat can see part of it. Then Xi Lian will have the status of a star god, and then he will be right forever. You can see the past and future with your memory, get Xi Lian with one click, and then start a one-click sweep. Isn't this more fun? . . . . .

The writing is good. In the past few years, I admired Lao Xing and Lao Lan. Unfortunately, Lao Xing is no longer available.

Okay, okay, keep working and update as soon as possible

I can give it five stars. It's not too bad, and the book doesn't have too many words. It doesn't seem to have any big problems at the moment. You can read it. Good luck to the author.

Tribute to the legendary handwriting king. Nowadays, it's not AI. The content is pretty good. I don't care whether I eat it or not. But if it's fast, I'm sure it's good. Anyway, it's just a few words.

Looks good, please update soon

These days there are still people who write outlines by hand, support this wave

The author is great. I give you five stars. Can you rescue Pinoconi's cavalry? Please, I will do anything. [Almost crying]

Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle

I can give you five stars just for the hand rub. It is no exaggeration to say that this is Tie Tongren's first AI-free book this year. Finally, cheers for the author [Like]

It looks good. I like it. I like it. Please order more.

Not enough, please update soon

Very nice to look at. Come on, author.

Awesome, handwritten manuscript

Very nice, I really like it now

A good book is not crooked, just follow it to the end [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart]

Not bad, not bad, really great

,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, (The author wants more commas)

Beautiful and well written

What else is there to say about the handwritten outline?

It turns out that the author is in the same class as me. No wonder his brain waves are on the same frequency as mine. I must support him.

Five stars to support the author. Keep up the good work, but you must pay attention to rest. Staying up late is easy to get encephalitis and neurological headaches. I just got it 4 days ago. If you feel uncomfortable, just take a rest. I am not in a hurry.

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