China Entertainment: Starting Off as a Director, Tiantian Is a Big Hit

It's pretty good, at least the creativity is okay, but there are a few big problems. The first is that what is said in the comment area is not cool enough. You can only practice this slowly. The second thing is that there are too many interactions with the actresses, so much that they take the spotlight. Your theme is a demon-turned-movie, so you should focus more on the aspects related to the movie. You can write about interactions with actresses, but this is just the seasoning for your theme. How can there be more seasoning than the main course? Like your first article about Captain China, it's too much to write a chapter about the movie and then immediately have two or three chapters about the interaction between the actresses.

The writing is good, but it's not exciting enough. It would be nice if everyone who is with the protagonist is devoted to the protagonist. I feel like they will betray the protagonist later, and the golden finger is just for good health, which is too little. For example, there is a reward for being able to control the Black Shadow Corps. The protagonist is criticized on the Internet, but in reality, he despises the protagonist. Appeared in the shadows next to them, whipped them hard with wooden sticks formed by the power of shadow, beating them until they screamed, and their hands and feet were turned into mud. No matter who they were, if they dared to threaten the protagonist, the protagonist could bear it in front of him, but behind his back, he would beat anyone who had anything to do with it. I can't imagine how great it would be. The person who was hostile to the protagonist was in a high position, a big capitalist, controlled nuclear weapons, could he resist the laws of physics? Then giving the protagonist the ability to curse can force them to suffer from the pain of pregnancy for ten months in one day, all kinds of gout, and the torture will make them cry for father and mother.

It's beautiful, but it's a pity that there are so few of them. I want to keep some, but I'm afraid that I'll die if I keep them [shy]

Watch the death rush of the brave, have fun, and shout a good life.

There aren't many movies made, but celebrities eat very hard. I would like to give you some recommendations. I hope there will be more movie content.

It's creative, I hope it doesn't suck

Keep writing, I'll be done after just a few chapters

Haha, it's pretty good. It looked good to me, but it still felt a little slow, so I took a step. It's too watery. It's too watery. I don't know if there will be a second movie out of chapter 150.

Well written. Very nice to look at.

Who said this is not a car going to kindergarten? [Stare] How can I put it, the movie is too general. . . It would be nice if it could be a little more detailed. After all, I still want to know about the plots of different adaptations.

Don't go into the dark room

Okay, there are drama ups and downs

Nothing to say, the author is awesome

Still very innovative. However, the textual description of physical fitness improvement must be shown in the article, otherwise it will be a bit out of touch with the previous article. Don't have too many women, the good ones are always the best with less.

Come on, it feels pretty good. I like the plot [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Reading the novel is just a pleasure. If you find it enjoyable, I will give it a five-star rating.

The plot is good, come on, the author keeps it up

I think it's good, but the movie is a bit slow, Superman hasn't been released yet It's getting more and more boring, and the writing is ambiguous whether I slept or not.

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

Good good good good

Being happy alone is not as good as being happy together

Gather strength to dance

Where are the red envelopes?

Men's topic

Not bad, quite interesting

Well written, keep up the good work [Like]

Very good, very beautiful

No pictures, no high scores [laughing]

Okay, okay, this is well written.

The author is quite talented, and the writing is great! Come on!