Broken Iron: Wear as an Ewekin but as a Hunting Order

Boss, you are simply a genius. Boss [crying] [crying] I was a little worried when I saw the cover, but after clicking in, I read it all in one breath. Up to now, it feels like there are almost no character OOC situations and no poisonous points since the update. It feels like you are really watching a parallel world derived from the main game. It feels like everyone is moving towards a happy place since our brother Mo Yun appeared. It's great... The setting of Aweijin is really special but also super delicious. Boss, you are simply a genius. The main point of view is really refreshing. When I saw Mo Yun singing Half Dim Sum, I happened to be playing Half Dim Sum... And immediately started to make up the sounds in my head. He is sensible, responsible, indulges his companions, and is soft-hearted. He is a very reliable guest. And this little gold dust finally has a kin connected by blood and a guardian who can make him feel at ease... Actually, I prefer Mo Jin, ahh, happiness has come to the palm of sand gold. Who wouldn't be tempted by the idea of ​​developing popular software and games, but the other party doesn't want any money at all, just to give you more confidence in that man-eating company? In fact, Jingyuan is also very delicious, but being rejected when he asks for a kiss is really miserable, General. Xunxun and Fengfeng are also jealous hhh... It turns out that this post is Tsundere(?). How should I put it? In terms of altruism alone, I feel that Mo Yun has gone quite a long way on this road... He has such a charming personality, boss. I really, really like it [crying] [crying] Boss, you are my god. .

It's really good-looking. Although I don't know how to describe it, the protagonist is much better than other protagonists in time-travel novels. There is no inexplicable force value or strange emotional line. The whole thing is very complete. When you watch it, you won't feel that you don't understand it or you can't understand it. I really recommend it. I have too little vocabulary, so that's all I can do. To add, I personally think that the protagonist has the kind of temperament that makes people sultry without knowing it, so some emotional lines are relatively difficult to understand. You can imagine that the protagonist is a piece of um... Wood (? So this idea can be substituted. It should be able to slightly solve some strange places in reading, such as some emotional lines, but after all, they are two men, or pure love, so it depends on the author's own narrative techniques. This is just my personal opinion (online shield)

The author writes well and updates diligently. The protagonist's personality is similar to that of a gentle and powerful Holy Father. He will treat the character unconditionally, and the character chef is quite comfortable to watch. There are two points in the early stage where the writing is not very good. Reading requires a smooth brain (it is a little poisonous point) The author's writing style is indeed getting better and better, and the emotional line is not so stiff. It would be better if the first two places were changed [Blowing Kiss] One is that the protagonist is obviously an envoy, but his attitude towards the projection of the leader of Xianzhou is too low. He has gained so much power by signing in earlier, and he is not angry at all when he is caught and used as a target of vigilance. He is willing to work for them and says that he does not need to have real power, which makes him feel aggrieved. The other is that Jingyuan's character design was a bit broken in the early stage. There was no foreshadowing. He liked the protagonist directly and expected to be spanked by the protagonist after staying up late [covering his face]. Emm, it looked so embarrassing. He didn't look like a human being, but more like a machine that implemented the setting of falling in love with the protagonist.

It would be nice if there were more answers and the ambiguity was more focused. (Author, you can also ignore my words, that's fine.)

Be happy, be happy, the little girl watching should be leisurely in the rivers and lakes! However, the little girl is not good at words. It is really shameful that such a good-reading little girl cannot talk about her kindness! To show my appreciation, the little girl would like to give you a five-star review!

That's great, but the author is not allowed to stop updating. After all, the future of trains is the stars and the sea, and it is the meaning of pioneering - many beautiful men, each writing in blood, at least as far as Omphalos, the beautiful men ahead are waiting for you. Written in blood by one person, I want to read Xiao En, Xiao Bai and Xiao Xia😋😋😋

It's refreshing. It's in line with the characteristics of today's Internet. It's so refreshing. The pace is fast and the pace is steady. It's really the love letter of my dream.

Although he is a heartthrob, the writing is still very touching! Moreover, the teacher updates steadily, four times a day! It's just that the child has a big appetite, and there really isn't enough to eat [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

Ambiguous all Xiangshuang I Jie Jie Jie [Adoration] [Admiration] Author, please keep writing! I will always follow you! ! ! Momo's character design is really great, and the interactions between the characters also make me heart-broken. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart] You must work hard and update it!

It's good to read. One of the reasons I like this book the most is that the protagonist is really scary... And not afraid of pain or real bullets. Moreover, his own personality is also very poignant, and he has that powerful beauty... He is just so handsome.

Although it looks good, I personally feel that Mo Yun cares too much about others and neglects himself. For example, in order to continue to work hard for the Danheng bloodline, I feel that he is always hurting himself unconsciously. I beg him to be kind to himself.

It's so cool. I don't really read main stories at first, but the setting of the novel still attracted me. Just because of this title, I had to click in and watch it. It's really good. I wish I could read more.

It looks good, Mo Yun, you feel sorry for yourself too! I hope I can have more interactions with Uncle Cold Legs😙, how about a BaiE in the future😍

It's good to read, I love to read it, author, don't be tired, but don't take a rest either, the student party works so hard just for this spiritual food [crying] I'm here to review it, Haokang, Fatty Haokang, the main all-rounder is the eternal god, this kind is rare in the first place, and it is even rarer among the rare in Bengtie fan fiction. I can't find the second one until now. Although I still drink soup every day and watch a certain famous wooden order, Mo Yunyun is really good! Very safe and very gentle. Currently, Jing Yuan and Sha Jin have a lot of plots, including Ah Ren and Sunday, which don't have a lot of plots. I recommend them all hahahahahahahaha. The author must insist on updating them three times! It can't be any less. It would be better if it could be restored to the previous four updates, ahem. Anyway! Come on, it's very beautifully written and very nice, it makes my head spin!

Why do you care so much? Anyway, it just looks good [Adoration] The author is great, can you please update it soon? [Crying] This is the only book my child can read, the others have been blocked [Crying][Crying][Crying]

It's super good-looking, and the male protagonist is not that woody yet enlightenment

Hehehe (*^▽^*) It's the first time I've seen Bengtie's main article. Hahahaha. I like it so much. Come on, author [cool]

So pretty! ! Jing Yuanyuan, baby placer gold! ! !

It's beautiful. Author, you will be successful in whatever you do with your writing skills like this😭

So pretty! After watching Nuannuan, I came alive

Tomato's unique high quality is not popular, and the bodies of those who look at it feel warm [admiration][admiration]

I can't boast enough, he is simply a god! ! !

Highly recommended, but the author makes me malnourished.

It looks good. I am a rough person and not good at words. I can only say that it looks good.

Super nice. But it's over. So sad.

It's so good to read, hehehe, I haven't found such a satisfying novel for a long time [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

I was so excited that I couldn't speak clearly and started to make longer and difficult sentences! This book is so delicious! The genre is novel! You won't suffer any loss after watching it, and you won't be fooled by it!

It's not enough ~ Author, don't be tired, and of course don't be idle. My requirements are not high, how about updating 10,000 words every day [laughing]

It looks good~ but in the later stage, it always feels like a story about a sadist and a nanny. Overall, it's still worth a look.

It is recommended not to watch it with your brain in mind, otherwise it will feel OOC. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]