Two Heroines! !
I want to read a book like "The True Daughter Suffers from Serious Dependence on This Cannon Fodder". I've been wanting to watch a double heroine drama lately. I'm looking for a campus novel. It's sweet (a little bit sadistic is fine) and the plot is not embarrassing. The writing is better. It's best not to travel through time.•ᴗ•Best
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Hello author, I'm here to review the book. Well, I think this book is great in terms of writing and plot. It's really novel to use violin and dance to describe "certain" aspects. Hahahaha, it's an unimagined path. It's very clever. The interaction and pull between the two protagonists are just right. I really like this kind of reunion. The second half of the plot often made me cry while watching it. The sense of empathy is very strong. I feel distressed and sad, and I feel happy when I see them happy. The plot of the sub-CP is not too much, and it helps a lot in advancing the plot. It is sweet but not overwhelming, and it is very likable. The storyline can be said to be very smooth, and this alone surpasses most of Tomato's works. Then I saw that the author often said to himself at the end of the article that it was cute hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. Very precious! Therefore, authors must persevere. I have seen many excellent authors either discontinue or change platforms due to poor data, and some even closed their books last month. It is really a loss for my career TT. If you take your time, you will definitely become popular! Then there are some small suggestions in the article. What is more obvious is that there is little or no description of the transition between scenes, so sometimes it will be confusing for a while, and it will suddenly be the next scene or the next point in time. If there is a transition in the middle, the look and feel will be much better. In terms of characters, the characters in the early stage seem to be relatively thin, and it feels like they look like unfamiliar strangers. However, in the later stage, they gradually become fuller and become more friendly to read. Fu Xia's character background is throughout the whole text, so it would be perfect if Fu Xia could be written more fully. Finally, I hope the author will not take it to heart if there is any offense or inappropriateness (you can just scold me directly). This book is really well written and deserves a five-star rating. I hope the author will not give up writing, and your readers will not give up on your article [Blow kiss] By the way, there is one more thing I forgot to mention. The author's knowledge reserve is really rich. From the source of some plots, it feels like he has read many articles. I really like this feeling of literary crushing. I feel so comfortable reading it [shy]
Hey, author, I'm here to review the book. I personally like reading about the story of reunion after breaking the mirror, and I'm even talking about it! Fortunately, I can tell it so I won't be so anxious in front of the screen [laughing] It's the first time I've seen one that uses violin and dance! So fresh and beautiful article! I feel like I have such a strong sense of involvement that I burst into tears. My heart aches when I see the clips between Xiao Xia and Mr. Tang. I can't help but feel sad for them. I can't hold back my happiness when I see their happiness. Hehe, the deputy CP is also very good. This kind of friendship is really good. I envy the author and please keep writing! I will support you when you open a new book! It's great, it deserves five stars⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
It's really not easy for the cruel He Lily and the others along the way. This novel is really good. The writing is average at the beginning, but I feel like it gets better and better at the end!
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The author writes very well, I like it very much
Why has no one read such a beautiful novel? When will the author plan to write about Ren Youning and Yang Lehan [shy]