I, a Mortal, Became an Immortal by Picking up Trash

A very well written book. But there are still big flaws. It is obvious that the protagonist's spiritual consciousness is very powerful. People of the same realm can form a crushing effect. And he never used it.

It's been a long time since I've read more than a million words in a few days. I really like this type of novel. Although the routines are the same, in general I just like this one. The author's writing suits my taste very well. He seems to be a veteran from other platforms. He has graduated from junior high school and graduated from college. What he likes to read most is Mortals, Mortals at the beginning, Become an Immortal through Hundred Refiners, and Immortal Rebellion. I have read these immortal novels many times. I can see the shadow of my old friend in many places in this book. It is really good. The rating should not be like this. Low, although there are some minor flaws, it does not affect the overall plot, and the number of people watching is too small. It may be because Tomato has too many system documents and too many cheating articles, which leads to more and more people not liking this kind of step-by-step repair despite the help of plug-ins. Xian Man's novel, I've seen Jin Dan catch up with the army in a few days. Generally, I like to read this type of immortal cultivation novels that end directly, because it's very satisfying to read it in one breath. I'm ready to read it. I hope that next time I click on this book, I will read the story of the god who transformed into a god and left this world!

There are many similar stories about mortals cultivating immortality, but this book is written more exquisitely and is easy to understand. The logic is clear and the descriptions are in place. It is impressive and of high quality. I don't know what the big plot framework is like later. It is worth recommending. It's like the sense of seeing a wonderful fairy tale TV series. The author's description is very good. The characters are full of personality and the details are expressed very well. It is easy for readers to get into the description. The plot is cleverly conceived and has a unique style.

It's pretty good, and the male protagonist also has the essence of Gou Dao! ! ! I hope the author will update more and keep up the good work!

Should I say it or not? It is well written, creative, makes people feel comfortable, can read smoothly, and has strong logic. It depends on the middle and the back. The front is well written. I give it 5 stars and hope to keep up the good work! More updates! Come on⛽

I'm almost finished watching it, I think it's super good. The writing, plot, setting and application of the golden finger are all very careful. I feel that the score is much lower than it actually is. It is well worth watching!

The writing is quite good, and the writing power is relatively strong. It is much better than the brainless Tomato novel. It is a pity that it is not a complete novel and cannot be read in one sitting.

It's a great novel about cultivating immortals. The main character has a good outlook on life. The plot is full of ups and downs. It's not brainless. It's very comfortable to read.

It's a very good book. Because the protagonist's transition from Xiao Bai to growth in the early stages is too long, many people will think it's too silly. After all, I've read a lot of time travel books. Human growth comes at a price, and starting from nothing is the most difficult thing to write about. Come on, author, I want to read the story in your heart.

A very good book with wonderful chapters and delicate writing style. It is worth recommending!

A good book, a young man turns his grief into a star of strength, and has a strong heart to cultivate immortality, top it,,,,.

Tomato's own biography of a mortal cultivating immortality. Overall, the shortcomings are not hidden, and the flavor is very pure and traditional. [Laughs][like]

It's a very good novel. It tells the story of an ordinary child who slowly grows up with the help of an artifact. It's very good and I really like it.

The book is quite good, but occasionally I am overwhelmed by the writing. One moment I am calm, and the next moment I am so stupid.

It's pretty good to watch. It was really good in the early stages. But around the 460th chapter, I felt like it wasn't working anymore. After Yuelian appeared, it started to feel weird. And when I got the antiquities, I didn't use the bowl much. Just like the map of Tianchu, I got a fragment that could be restored, but it didn't... But overall it's still good to watch.

It's quite rigorous and the pace is good.

It's much better than mindless novels. The author's notes are skillful, and the plot settings, character emotions, and detailed descriptions have all been carefully polished. I personally think it is more interesting than ordinary people, and it is not comparable to the current routine novels. It is definitely a five-star review [like] [like] [like]

Generally speaking, there is no problem, it is relatively smooth. There are a few minor problems but it is much better than others. Five stars for encouragement.

It's pretty good. The protagonist has flesh and blood and has grown up. However, many of the villains are more classic. Although there are some that are not classic, they are generally good. You can watch it. Come on, author. I look forward to meeting Senior Sister Liu again.

It's a pretty good book. I haven't read such a good novel in a long time. The storyline is very coherent and attractive, and the narrative is not boring. It's very good.

Not bad, very good, the logic is not confusing

A very good novel. The author writes well. Keep up the good work.

Stay patient, develop slowly, lay a solid foundation, and the more careful you are, the better it will look!

The plot is interesting and true, and the logic is reasonable and smooth.

It's good-looking, good-looking, logical, and doesn't have all kinds of inexplicable descriptions.

It looks good, the protagonist has a good outlook on life and is flesh and blood.

A super, super nice book

It's a very good novel about cultivating immortals. I just read a few chapters and I haven't started cultivating yet. It's very good. Keep reading. Come on.

Clear structure, true and objective, multi-dimensional description, so well written, thumbs up, thumbs up, thumbs up, thumbs up, thumbs up, thumbs up, thumbs up, thumbs up👍

The writing is very vivid, the structure is rigorous and lively, the words and expressions are interesting and reasonable, it is like a real person acting in a TV series in front of you, it is pleasant to listen to.