Destiny**

The setting of the story is reasonable but it also shows whether the ruthlessness of the Tian family is important to Lu Yan's mood, or what position family love occupies in your heart. I also want to ask the author how to portray such family love. This is the five stars I am looking forward to.

What I am most curious about is what the Jade Heart Sword looks like. Author, can you tell me a little bit about it? Is that sword based on the heart or the Tao? The author's writing skills are good. Can this sword be renamed? I think it would be best to call it Tianwen.

Based on the author's portrayal of the two sisters of the Bai family at the beginning of the story, I suggest that the author should add some sinister elements in the later stages, so as to really write the two of them as witches. Such a feeling .

After reading the previous book review, I was very touched. Whether it is good or bad, you have to ask your own heart. If your heart is kind or good, it is good. If your heart is not good, then it is evil. There is no real distinction between good and bad.

Red flowers should be paired with green leaves. The author's portrayal of Mo Lin reminded me of this. An ambitious or ambitious person like Dianxi does have a different kind of charm. He reminds me of the Moon Worshiping Master from The Legend of Sword and Fairy. .

I saw Bai Zhi's cry during the section where Blood Talisman leads the way. It touched me very much. We had just met, but such a cry could touch my heartstrings. I really didn't expect it, but it was quite interesting that he could work so hard.

The story is very realistic. He is obviously a child of destiny who has just traveled through time. At first, I thought that my destiny is up to me, but now it is basically that you have to live to have everything. Your survival is well described.

The story is still worth reading. The author combines time travel, suspense, a little bit of intrigue, and supernatural elements very well. Such supernatural elements make me feel emotional and fresh, and the author's portrayal of emotions is something I agree with. Come on

It's quite good. I can see that the author wrote it carefully and the writing style is smooth. I look forward to the follow-up.

1. High-concept world view setting 2. The emotional core is exquisitely designed 3. Strong plot hooks and dense 4. Combination of social values and philosophical speculation 5. Obvious market differentiation advantages

The setting is novel, the conflicts are well depicted, and the rhythm is well controlled.

This plot twist is so exciting, why don't you win a literary award?

Not bad, but not good enough

A very exciting suspenseful supernatural novel with exquisite concept and setting

The expressions and psychology of the characters are very delicately portrayed, with a strong sense of immersion, and the descriptions are so smooth that I really want to get in and take a look.

The plot is exciting and the atmosphere is super strong. It has the feeling that the protagonist is angry and corpses are everywhere. It has many elements and is really well written.

Court killings, supernatural beings, pursuits, love, the mission of extreme survival, changing one's fate against fate is also revenge, and the emotional line is very good.

It has a strong sense of immersion and the writing is amazing (/≧▽≦/)

The writing is good, the plot, and the characters are also set off by the writing. Many times, I am actually attracted by the plot created by this kind of writing [Like] [Like]

Time travel novel, nice to read [Like][Like][Like] Just like a bright star, it exudes unique charm. It is a very good book.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I think I need to stay up late tonight and read all the updated ones [please read carefully].

It looks quite exciting so far, and the fighting scenes are quite exciting.

The author has great writing style, great imagination, and the plot is very smooth.

A very coherent plot. The most important thing is that it is full of details. It is very good. I must give you five stars.

The plot is smooth and coherent, and very interesting to watch.

I finished reading it in one go. I was really scared, but even if I didn't read it, I would be scratching my head. It's also really amazing. [Like][Like][Like]

The atmosphere is really created quite well, and some of the plots really made me feel a little numb, hahaha, it hurts but also makes me happy, that's probably what I'm saying.

Not bad, five-star recommendation😎

This kind of supernatural novel is rare. It has the feeling of a fairy tale and a suspenseful supernatural novel. The story scenes are okay. .

Now that we've finished reading, let's discuss whether Angelica dahurica is good or bad? I have always wanted to discuss this issue with others. Bai Zhi's kindness and bravery reminded me that she is a good person, but many people think she is a witch. But what is your understanding, author?