穿成老爷爷后的怕死日记

Third-party education, social experience, principles, and cultivation are explained carefully and thoroughly. If junior high school students who are new to novels read this, it might be able to give them some direction. I hope there won't be a female protagonist in the later stages, and the protagonist will act low-key and not show off. Write more about educational and social experiences. Lots of updates. This is the first novel I've followed up on in so many years, so don't let it suck. Prepare for the second brush to review the past and learn the new

What should I say? After reading these 40 chapters in one go, I can't say enough about how good it is. I feel that if this book can last to the end, it will not be inferior to other books with a score of 9 or above. I feel that the writing style is not like what Old Tomato can have. The lack of ratings is just that too few people have read it. There is nothing to say about the characters of the two protagonists. The transformation of the young apprentice is subtle and not so sudden. The wisdom of the protagonist is also really intertwined. It is worth reading.

The content is pretty good, but I deducted one point because it uses AI. The idea is pretty good, and the writing relies on AI. [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

All in all, the shortcomings are not hidden, it is very good in 🍅, even if some places use AI, it is not that confusing; the advantage of this book is that the author has his own set of logical thinking, each character does not have an NPC feeling, the character interaction design is reasonable, the behavior is also very reasonable, the character has not collapsed, etc. It is a serious book; lacking The points are that the AI feels heavy, there are too many embellishments and descriptions, the rhythm is fast and a little slow at the same time, and the grasp of the main plot and branch plots is too close, etc.; There is a lot of room for improvement, and the theme is good. I hope the author believes in himself and does not take the wrong path of commercial routine writing. As long as you keep the overall story well written, it will be good.

Not bad, not bad. Unexpected novelty. It is not a clichéd plot of Long Aotian. There is no sticky love, and there is no harem of three thousand beauties. It is not a drama about encountering an official lady at every turn, selling oneself to bury her father, or a brothel girl being forced to sell herself. What I saw is the protagonist teaching a child who has to accept a situation to survive and work hard for his family. The subject matter seems to be the same at first glance, but the content determines success or failure. Although when I first read it, I was always a little uncomfortable with the inner drama of the protagonist (because the author is like me. The whole bracket indicates the inner thoughts of the protagonist_(:з∠)_), but after reading it, I got used to it. Many people think that the protagonist talks so much, which is a bit cowardly, but I think it is okay. The style of this article is not particularly depressing and slaps in the face. The protagonist originally said from the beginning that he was a modern person who time-traveled, and he was also a soul-body who had not spoken to anyone for five hundred years. Some things are still understandable (such as chatterbox). In my opinion, this article can be a meal-ready novel, but it's just a little lacking. I'm really looking forward to what the author's boy will grow up to be. I also hope that the protagonist's wish to lie down and think about salted fish will come true (because I want it too｡°(°¯᷄◠¯᷅°)°｡) It's so good-looking, so good-looking, I finally liked it for fifty chapters and it's gone [almost crying] The author's writing is beautiful and the pace is tight. It really shows the difficulties of the protagonist. I like this. And I also said before that this book is not the kind of copy that Long Aotian makes. So when I read it, there were always many people talking about why Su Ming didn't resist and why he was suppressed. But I didn't think about it. Su Ming didn't have any gold fingers. His biggest gold finger was the hard work of the protagonist and himself. He was willing to listen and learn, not numb or dependent. There may be a lot of flaws in careful analysis, but the flaws are not hidden. The protagonist himself has no background and his cultivation level is nothing more than practicing Qi. In my opinion, this book does not focus on fighting monsters and upgrading, but the protagonist's own growth is not easy. From an ordinary ordinary person to now stepping into the world of cultivating immortals. From a child with a runny nose who only cares about playing, step by step to the ups and downs in the officialdom. Being framed, being hunted, fighting for one breath and dying, but also dying with others. This is growth. Isn't it much better than a cool novel about killing people all the way? Hey, I originally wanted to ask if Su Ming would have CP in the future, but now that I think about it, it's okay to have one. After all, it's okay if the main character doesn't [facepalm] because I really can't bear to look at each other and blush, accidentally holding hands and kissing mouths, etc. Because the current rhythm is fine, and there is no excessive description of a certain person's appearance. All in all, it feels good to me. (As for objecting to CP, I read a novel before. The heroine didn't have a partner in the early stage, but a man suddenly appeared in the later stage. The man looked down on people in the early stage, and was always sarcastic towards people in the later stage. He also always described the heroine's opinion of the man. Pay attention to him and so on. It was disgusting. That article was truthful and many people gave bad reviews in the later stage [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying], so now I am particularly disgusted by the sudden appearance)

There are no cliche slap-in-the-face, Long Aotian plots. There are also no strange descriptions of women. It can be seen from the author's writing that the two protagonists regard each other as family members who are both teachers and friends. It can be seen that the male protagonist's love for Lin Zao has gone beyond simple teaching and regarded him as a family member. During the time when he disappeared, although he said that he had some feelings for himself. Confusion about the future, but more worries about the master, and Lin no longer simply regards the protagonist as a shelter. It can be seen from the article that he not only teaches the protagonist how to behave, but also gives everything he has to survive. Doesn't this completely treat the protagonist as his own child? This is so well written that I will learn knowledge from this article without even realizing it. It feels very warm again. I hope there won't be those clichéd supporting female leads or vulgar plots in the future. Come on

I finally found something worth seeing in the shit [crying]. Although it's not amazing, the writing is pretty good. First, the characters are also very fleshed out, and the transformation process of the supporting characters is also handled very smoothly. Second, there are no surprises. The protagonist (although the Ringwraith himself is the protagonist, but Su Ming is the focus of the author's writing) is not the kind of weakling who only relies on his master, but also has his own insights and perseverance. Third, the pace is not too fast. Generally speaking, you can get started in about twenty chapters. This book is different. The setting is complete and logical. The process of touching the threshold of cultivating an immortal as a mortal is very detailed. The transition period is not boring and it is very interesting. The distribution of plot ups and downs and turning points is also very good. I want to see Brother Xu [crying]

I think the subject matter is really novel, and I have read a lot of old-father stories, most of which are Dihualiu or the protagonists. I have never seen this kind of story about cultivating immortals by deceiving disciples and starting from the imperial examination. It is quite interesting. I believe that as long as the author can improve the rating, it will be up soon. Although I don't care much about whether AI is used in the article, as long as the plot is good, the word description contains many inexplicable metaphors such as "battering ram" and "energy storage pool". It is obviously a novel about cultivating immortals.

Yes, I like it very much. This is much better than those with the name of being a bitch and pretending to be the Dragon King. Although the pace is slow and the plot is a bit contradictory, it is still a good work, but there are many places that need to be improved.

It's good-looking. Full marks for the author's politics💯. It's super good-looking and interlocking. After reading each small storyline, I have no idea about the number of words. Each character is distinct. Worth collecting ps: There are so many inner dramas, the author could do with less of this later.

There is an experience of combining virtuality and reality, and it is no longer the kind of imagination that slaps the forehead. Although there is a slight separation between cultivating immortals and imperial examinations (let's put it this way for now), it is still good for the senses. Generally speaking, there are not many articles that can be read. It is worth reading.

I caught up with the latest chapter at 1:30 a. M. On 11.2. I read it in one sitting. It is very interesting. It is scientifically rigorous and educational. The writing style is excellent. The author is from the starting point and the quality is guaranteed. The subject matter is quite interesting, the story, and the characters are all in place. Of course, these are all necessary for a good novel, and it also has educational significance. It can teach you about the world of adults, teach you about the law of the jungle, and that only the one who survives to the end is the winner, etc. It's very good. If I could encounter this kind of book when I was ignorant, the future might be better. The smell of AI at the back is too strong, It's incomparable to the beginning. No desire to watch anymore

It's good to watch, the writing and plot are all online, but I found it was too early and I had to catch up [crying] Master Lin said super cutely, Su Ming is so doting, hey, I'm looking forward to their journey of cultivating immortals~ Just looking at the rating, I'm very afraid that this article will die! ! ! Big cheers for the author! By the way, I'm reminding you of the update. I heard that it used to be updated with two chapters a day [Sending a heartfelt message]

It's a good book and has a lot of brains. Everyone in the book has their own thoughts and ideas, and the protagonist and the male protagonist grow up step by step, never being ignorant, and step by step growing into a cautious, sensible person who knows how to advance and retreat. From complaining at the beginning, I became persistent step by step. This book is a rare good book by Tomato. I recommend you all to read it. I hope the author can make more money.

There's a story to tell, it's very interesting to read, and as long as the author can keep up with it, it will definitely be a masterpiece. This book is calming, unlike most tomato novels that are impetuous and have no content. Although this book is relatively slow in progress, it is better in terms of solid content. As a bookworm who has been reading novels for almost twenty years, my evaluation is that this book is quite good food. There's not much to say, I hope the author can stick to it until the end [Learned]

It's a great work. My rating here is about 9.3. The subject matter is relatively novel. The story is as solid as the "Gou Dao" pursued by the protagonist's master and apprentice. It doesn't have the shortcomings of conventional fairy tales that can easily become hollow after ten sessions. Only Working in his position to do something, day after day, year after year, working as solidly and steadily as a tree taking root, also moistening things like water, dormant and low-key, and the development of the world is the helplessness that the plan cannot keep up with the changes, the current situation is strange, and the world is unpredictable. The mutual support between master and apprentice, the darkness, calculation and glory in human nature, and some small principles in society and work are all laid out by the author through this novel. Once you read it, you will not be able to stop. It is so exciting, and the author will update it soon!

It's a good book, not toxic overall, and the plot is very enjoyable to read, but I still felt obvious shortcomings while reading. First of all, after reading the review, it seems that the author used AI to polish it? In fact, this would not be a big problem if the writing was normal, but there are repeated explanations many times in the article, and it feels like the upper and lower sections are separated. The repetition of the words explained by the protagonist will be re-explained by other characters is particularly obvious, and it feels very fragmented. If the author really uses AI to polish it, he still hopes to review and approve the repeated plots in the article. The repetition of the originally slow-paced article is a bit annoying to read. Secondly, the plot of the protagonist and his apprentice changing dungeons is too cliche and somewhat incomprehensible. In the early stage, he jumped off a cliff to change to a new map. After arriving at the new map, the early map has not been seen or described at all. Later, when the map crossed over and I saw the bug underground for the first time, I guessed that the protagonist would definitely come before he left. However, some of the characters with images were basically not explained because the map ended with death. The well-described characters were not described in the article because the map was changed. It felt a bit unreasonable. However, overall I still highly recommend this book. The author is really good at describing human relationships and shaping characters. It is worth reading.

It's very plain and has a lot of truth, but the author's words will not make you feel impatient or disgusted. Instead, it will make you read it with interest and understand the truth. If you are used to reading cool articles, you will feel fresh and refined when you read this again. It's too complicated to praise too much. I just want to say: this book is really good and highly recommended! !

In my humble opinion, this book is actually a masterpiece that combines the best features of mortals' cultivation of immortality. It can be said to be a rare fairy grass in the secular world. When I watch the fight and build the foundation, and when I first enter the immortal gate, I feel filled with emotions. Most of the traditional fantasy cultivation of immortality today focuses on innate knowledge, erudition, and intelligence. Although it is very satisfying, but not everyone is like this, and it lacks a sense of substitution; however, This book is written step by step, and the characters are all round and full, which perfectly conforms to the power and survival of ordinary people in practice. Therefore, after reading nearly a hundred chapters, I assert that this book will become another great work after the biography of ordinary people cultivating immortals. I hope the author will not pay attention to the words that the pace is too slow and the feeling is not enough. Li Yin slowly unfolds this magnificent scene according to his own thoughts.

Nice! ! ! Gou Dao's growth story is about rushing without hesitation, seizing opportunities, but not blindly. The two protagonists belong to a community of interests, and they learn from each other. One is the time traveler grandfather. As a teacher, the other protagonist can be sensible and know how to advance and retreat, so that the young man's thinking can be freed from the shackles, but he also respects the young man's opinions. When the young man puts forward different opinions, he will improve himself. When the young man grows up, he will also improve himself. As he grew up, especially in the later period when he entered the world of cultivation and came into contact with a world he didn't know, he joined forces with another protagonist. He said it was Gou Dao, but it was very enjoyable to watch. The rhythm of the plot was great, and not only the plot, but other characters and social backgrounds were also full of flesh and blood, very real, with friendship, family affection, and the love of teachers. The more you watch it, the more interesting it becomes! ! ! After reading more than 300 chapters, I still feel a little bit unfinished. I don't have the feeling of boredom that you get when you read a long novel at 200 or 300 chapters! ! ! I didn't feel this at all, it's very exciting! ! !

Unlike other Gou Dao books, which are just timid, this one is about stability, and every step is very steady, which is quite good.

I'm tired of reading fast food in Shuangwen. For a change, this slow-burning article is okay. The rating is indeed a bit low. Looking at the comments section, there are a lot of bad reviews mostly because the author used AI to expand writing and the plot is too slow to be enjoyable. Not bad for immersive reading. By the way, there is something wrong with Tomato's scoring system. A bunch of books with a high score of 9.0 Or above are really ugly to read, and there are also a bunch of trolls who go everywhere to brag about the book and criticize the people who gave the book bad reviews. There are occasionally good products with low scores, but there are often defective products with high scores. Coupled with a bunch of navy troops, it confuses the public. As for the quality of the book, you still have to read it yourself. As a result, it is still very annoying to taste stones frequently.

Good to read🤩The Mortal Chapter has depth, undercurrents among various characters and protagonists, warmth and companionship, and a novel plot. Watching Xiao Su reborn and growing up step by step under the leadership of Lao Lin, readers can also understand various social knowledge through the plot. It can be said to be a work with substantial content and connotation. At the beginning of the chapter on cultivating immortality, Xiao Su was able to face all kinds of characters on his own without Lao Lin. He was also charming and neither arrogant nor impetuous while adhering to the moral principles. Wait for the follow-up! [Eat melon] But I personally feel that there is a little regret. Xiao Su's childhood passed too quickly. Ever since she got the ring, she has lost the joy and freedom of a young person. She has been suppressing performances and exercising. Gradually, she discovered that there is a slight estrangement and falsehood between her and her relatives and friends, which is actually a kind of regret. Such people will become more and more cold-blooded and lonely in the future. Along the way, everything is based on their own deliberate calculations. Suddenly looking back, only an empty heart and a lonely self are left.

A superb novel, the protagonist is extremely peaceful and can even teach people some truths.

It's beautiful, the writing is good, and the characters are well described.

The insight is profound, and now it is a new book collection. The book is very interesting to read. I have read too much of the same fast pace. This book is a good choice. The low rating is given by those who are looking for excitement in the book and the disorder of reality. I can learn a lot from the book, and it is not like the boring upgrade of the plot of the early novels such as "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality". The plot is rigorous, the context is closely connected, the theme is not biased, and the characters are well created. It allows me to see a real ancient novel, worthy of the title of writer (quick update, don't force me to send you a blade online)

Slow-paced but true, realistic, link by link, I have read 180 chapters so far. The main plot of this book seems to be the cultivation of immortality, but in fact it is the cultivation of human life. It integrates the thinking mode of modern people to understand the cultivation of immortality. It is a rare good book, but it is less than 9.4 Points. I feel that the quality of this book is buried. Maybe this book is not a refreshing article in the traditional sense? In terms of writing and description, you can feel that it will be better as it goes on to chapter 180. The main character in the book is a modern person who teaches the rules of establishing a world as the male protagonist's guide. The male protagonist also has his own further insights in the teaching. It adds a bit of breakthrough and innovation to the protagonist Gou Yiyi's persistence. I look forward to more updates. The protagonist's path of cultivation is very long, and it is not enough to see this [full] Personally, I think it is not necessarily a good thing to hide your edge when you have a foothold. Everyone will want to step on you. It is also reflected in more than 300 chapters in the book. When you are with your peers, do not offend the river, be neither humble nor arrogant, be calm and calm. When you are humble but not too humble, you can live a more peaceful life. If you always use coincidence and accidentally be too modest, you will definitely face greater troubles. The protagonist hides too much and does not take advantage of his identity [Thoughts]

It feels pretty good and belongs to the pioneer level. Those with this kind of plot are of low quality, and those with quality are not written in this category. The author has written this category well. Predicting a wave, it will definitely be above 9.5 Points in the future. The shortcomings are also obvious. The worldview is obviously fragmented. Even if it comes back together, it still lacks interest. The author's pace is very steady, suitable for people who are slow and pursue perfection. Overall, this is a very good nurturing novel. I suggest the author not to stray into the female channel. I have seen several of them enter the female channel.

After all, I am a new author, so my writing was average at the beginning, but after the first few chapters, I started to get better. The little characters started to practice from scratch, and they were basically intrigues, but there was also a lot of tenderness between relatives, friends, and mentors. It was very good. I personally like this kind of growth story. Although However, for me, it is not yet a good story. Every step of the master and apprentice walks on thin ice. I am a little worried for them. I hope the author can give them less ups and downs. Even though I know that they have the aura of the protagonist to get so far, if it were an ordinary person, they would have laid down long ago, but it is still quite real. Master and disciple are the biggest golden fingers to each other. Please hold each other's hands tightly on the road ahead and keep moving forward.

Cultivation to Immortality without a heroine or CP, the pace is very slow. As of the current chapter (300 chapters), half of the content is the story of the protagonist before he cultivates to immortality. This is not the kind of slap-in-the-face cool story. The master and apprentice of the protagonist are very practical step by step, actively use their advantages to build connections, and use different concepts to strengthen themselves under the worldview of cultivating immortals. The logic is self-consistent, the concepts are naturally integrated, the protagonist is very down-to-earth and has a basic respect for all characters (this is rare), and it feels like the author has really constructed a relatively real world in the story. Because the pace is relatively slow, it requires a little patience from the reader. As long as you continue reading, you will definitely be attracted.