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If you like Akaishi, you can come 😏 Here you will see ① the cold and arrogant beautiful cartoonist judge, ② the rough cartoonist judge who doesn't use professional words to comment on other people's painting style and instead calls people bitches, ③ the sweet host Bingbing unique to live broadcasts, ④ the cold and arrogant beautiful cartoonist contestant, ⑤ take a look They are the passer-by contestants who were arranged by the author to be slapped in the face, ⑥ the mysterious and dark contestant whose whole body is covered (she is probably also a society-phobic beauty, and the identity will be revealed later to give a cute face slap), ⑦ the fandom comic fan who only evaluates the contestants themselves and not the comics [smile] What I'm talking about is just the tip of the iceberg. You have to dig out more rocks by yourself [laughter]

The only truly useful chapters are 15 to 19, and the rest are all meaningless words. If I write at this speed, I probably won't be able to catch up with the latest chapters of One Punch Man in my lifetime.

It's quite strange. I saw One Punch Man coming and added it to the bookshelf. What I feel more uncomfortable is that the plot was changed a little. I saved the little girl at the beginning but I didn't think it was good to add it. Then the vaccine man asked who it was, and Saitama-sensei said it was a hero driven by interest. Then the vaccine man transformed and felt more immersive. What does it feel like as a father? I changed Saitama-sensei's character. I hope it can match the anime. I hope the author can speed up the update, because it shouldn't be difficult to write if there is anime or manga as a basis (I personally think)

Since I was writing One Punch Man, I ended up changing the plot of One Punch Man. The judges and audience complained about the lack of depth and thought in the drawings. However, in the beginning of the original work, whether it is Crab Monster, Muscle Giant or Underground King, Saitama's inner state of mind is too strong. These are the core ideas that distinguish One Punch Man from other hero comics. It would be better for you to delete all these details, and then keep describing the exciting battle. The judges used this as an excuse to complain that the plot has no depth. In that case, let me tell you the truth, the punch you changed is not as good as Murata.

The progress of the plot is touching. It's all nonsense from a passerby's background. It's a magical adaptation of the original work, and there's no sense of immersion at all.

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I have been watching the 63rd picture until I finished writing the plot of Supermarket Sales Boxing. Let me talk about the shortcomings first. Some of Saitama's dialogues during the battle have been changed. To be honest, it's a bit annoying. Every time I see it, I basically have to reread it in my head. Saitama has changed from an ordinary person with powerful power to a new graduate with powerful power and has lost his emotions. It's a bit downgraded. Another embarrassing point is that there are too many pretentious and slap-in-the-face plots in reality. It feels like only two or three of the ten chapters are written about One-Punch Man. Anyone who comes to see Saitama to watch it can basically give up. The advantage is basically that the writing is pretty good. If the author wants to rely on Saitama-sensei to attract people, I suggest not to change the lines anymore, which is really uncomfortable.

Too legendary? Genos was already legendary when he first appeared, so I didn't even think about it and blamed me for not being able to control it.

In my opinion, the one-punch plot modified by the author is not even as good as Murata's

The devil changed Saitama, just the second Murata