Dragon Clan************

The writing is quite good, there are knives, but I feel that the author is not very good at describing women. Nono and others are a bit OOC, but the descriptions of others are quite good. After a few chapters, the male protagonist's character has been established. The teleportation across thousands of miles is so handsome. Although the female protagonist's role is a bit unspectacular, I give it a five-star encouragement. Forget it, I can still continue reading.

The writing is very good, I love reading it, I hope the author will update it more, it must be a single female protagonist!

It's okay, it's a relatively high-quality dragon novel. The main character gives me a feeling like Tesla in Valkyrie [Thinking]

I don't know if you can still see the comments, but here is a unified reply: Because of the problem with the original text, it was deemed plagiarism and removed from the shelves, and the author had no choice. Now I can only revise the entire text, re-imagine it, and write a new one to finish the story!

So far so good, but is the heroine's role a little too little? In addition, I don't know how the author wants to arrange Lu Mingfei. I personally hope that the protagonist will directly train Lu Mingfei to increase his strength [Thoughts]

Why was such a beautiful book comparable to Dragon Clan blocked? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It is the most realistic of the Dragon Clan fanfics I have read and does not have so much OOC. The overall writing style is also closer to the original work, but it is more popular, so it is a pity that there is no major change. Overall impression: six stars, it is really comfortable to watch.

It's okay, the start is amazing, but I like Nono

The writing is very special, it is really good, the writing style is good, and the most important thing is that I can feel that the author wrote it with heart.

It's very good to watch, and the plot is well grasped. It would be nice if the updates were faster, but it's not enough to watch.

It looks good, I love reading it, the author is great, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on. Broken, the book has been taken off the shelves

Not bad, you can wait and see

Excellent, mark it

Rare high quality [like] The front part is very good, but the handling of the emotional line in the back really made my brain go crazy. With this flaw removed, the overall quality is pretty good.

So far so good

Young ones are also very cute I'm kind of looking forward to the protagonist's love affair with Ling Tiantian.

Why was it removed? [Laughing awkwardly]

There must be a single heroine

When I think of someone eating young grass, I can't help but hum, hahaha [full] [full]

I originally clicked on this book with the idea of ​​reading it as a fanfic, but I really enjoyed reading it.

Ah, the writing is very nice, I hope the supplement will be sent

The setting is very novel, and I hope to see the ending. There are some poisonous points but it is acceptable. I am still looking forward to the follow-up ദ്ദി˶•̀֊<)✧

Good looking, excellent Dragon Clan fanfic, but it's a pity it's too short

It's been a long time since I've seen such an addictive spin-off, it's very interesting

It's beautiful and well-written. It's rare to see good writing on Tomato. I hope more people will read it and don't send it away.

It's very interesting to write. The behavior is enough to express the character, and the plot arrangement is not boring. There are also eye-catching details and ideas in many places. I hope the author sticks to his own ideas. As a second creation, his reasonable artistic processing is of course the highlight. It is written with great care, and many details were discovered only after reading it for the second time. There is no problem with the logic of everyone's actions throughout the whole process. Multiple stories develop alternately, and the transitions in between are quite smooth. There's just one thing that's not very good. There are supplementary explanations for each scene's plot. It might be too advanced for a web novel. There will definitely be people who are too lazy to think about the subtle points. If you don't see these explanations, it will be easy to lose track of the overall development. Maybe it would be good to sort out the dialogues of some characters.

It feels like one-third of the strength of the green-faced beast Yang Zhi, very strong.

Very good, very good, okay, okay

Very good fanfic

Very high quality dragon literature