[Golden finger + Sharingan + Lightning Release evolution + White Fang swordsmanship + thrilling battles + making up for regrets]
After the Third Shinobi World War, twelve-year-old Kakashi lost Obito and Rin. The Sharingan transplanted into his left eye became a burden that devoured his chakra.
At the brink of death, an ancient scroll appeared in his mindscape. It had no System interface, only written prompts.
But why did it also come with all these weird buffs?
After fighting Gai, the scroll triggered “Heart-Seal Resonance,” doubling his chakra on the spot.
After using Chidori a hundred times, the scroll displayed “Chidori: Mastered,” opening the door to Lightning Release.
Over ten years in the ANBU, he grew from a “Chū” into someone more terrifying than the Copy Ninja.
During the Fourth Shinobi World War, he could even fight Madara Uchiha alone.
On the night of the Nine-Tails’ attack, he awakened the Mangekyo Sharingan for the first time and gained Kamui.
When Pain attacked, he faced the Deva Path alone and awakened Purple Lightning. Watch the Lightning Lord cure the Deva Path’s internet addiction.
During the Fourth War, Obito entrusted both his eyes to him, and his Complete Susanoo cleaved the heavens.
The White Fang’s short blade had lain forgotten, but he took it up once more. Through mastery, breaking, and transcendence, he would one day strike the same blow his father had once delivered.
Obito: “Kakashi, you have to become Hokage.”
Gai: “You promised me a hundred matches. Don’t you dare die!”
Itachi Uchiha: “Captain Kakashi, how come your Mangekyo Sharingan doesn’t make you go blind even though you’re not an Uchiha?”
Sasuke: “Kakashi-sensei, how can your Kirin use Kamui too?”
Naruto: “Kakashi-sensei, how do you have more chakra than the Nine-Tails??”
With the scroll’s help, Kakashi gradually became the strongest in the shinobi world.
The emotional lines of the characters are designed more delicately, not in terms of love or anything else, but in various details, which are more in line with Kakashi's character design when his teammates just died. And the settings such as increasing proficiency and increasing the ability of lightning escape are also okay. The writing is okay, but the overall thing is a bit bland. Of course, it is much better than most of Tomato's mindless Naruto stories. I don't know if it's my misunderstanding. In your recent chapters, one paragraph is too long, and you continue to write it even after the period ends. It's understandable if one paragraph is too short, but some details are all dragged together, and the content is small. It is obviously four or five thousand words, but the content is only two thousand words. I think you may have used it. AI polishing has increased the number of my words. I have also written novels and I know the horror of AI. Obviously I only wrote 500 words and asked AI to polish it. It can be as many as 1,000 words. Of course, I cannot guarantee that you must use AI, but I recommend using it less. If you use it too much, you will not be able to write. It is just a personal feeling. I hope the author can respond. 1. Fatal fault: not splitting paragraphs at all, just a big pile at the end 2. The sentence structure is straight and straightforward, with no ups and downs and no sharp edges in the writing style. 3. Loaded with details but no soul It's gravel again, it's the Flying Thunder God, it's chakra consumption, it's sweat soaking through the robe, The details are piled high, but the emotional tension and on-the-spot pressure are not felt. The plot elements are just mechanically listed one by one, which is a typical AI method of writing content. 4. Camera switching is stiff and unnatural From the tailed beast jade explosion → Kakashi → Minato consumes chakra → the barrier blocks the tailed beast jade → recharge → Minato pauses, Real people will use paragraphs, blank spaces, and short sentences to cut scenes; AI will just continue writing without making rhythm cuts. Summary: This paragraph is a standard AI pipeline-generated text, with long paragraphs without line breaks, flat flowing sentences, and piled details without a style of writing. It is not the way a real writer would write at all. (I used the bean bag to give the bean bag the part where Minato fights the Kyuubi, his comment.)
It's okay, but it feels like the tone has changed. It's not like the tone of the ninja world. It's too soft, like a layer of Hokage skin. It is best to write Naruto fanfics in the manga version. Come on! I wish you will write more smoothly
Great card room fic, makes my carnival chair spin 😄
It's very good. The characters are delicately carved, which fits my imagination of Kakashi very well. This book makes me feel that the original Kakashi should be almost like this.
I don't know why, but I always feel that Uchiha Itachi's age is a bit wrong. After the Third Ninja War, Uchiha Itachi was already 4 years old. Why did he become 3 years old?
Very good, the character setting is well established
Great work, author. I read this as an all card.
It fits my impression and imagination of Kakashi. It's been a long time since I've seen an article about Kakashi's own strength.
Don't stop updating, I really like Kakashi
Come on, you must persist