[Gold Finger + Sharingan + Thunder Evolution + White Fang Sword Technique + Passionate Fighting + Make Up for Regrets]
After the Third Ninja War, twelve-year-old Kakashi lost Obito and Lin, and the Sharingan transplanted in his left eye became a burden to swallow chakra.
When he was about to die, an ancient secret scroll appeared in the spiritual world. There was no system panel, only text prompts.
But why are there so many weird buffs?
After a fight with Kai, the secret scroll triggered "Heart Seal Resonance" and chakra doubled directly.
After using Chidori a hundred times, the secret scroll prompts "Chidori·Mastery", and the door to Thunder Escape is opened.
In the ten years of ANBU, he grew from "C" to a being more terrifying than a copy ninja.
In the Fourth Ninja War, he could also fight Uchiha Madara alone.
On the night of the Nine-Tails, he turned on the kaleidoscope for the first time and awakened his divine power.
When Payne comes, he fights Tiandao alone, Zidian awakens, and sees King Thunder and Lightning giving Tiandao a break from Internet addiction.
During the four battles, Obito entrusted his eyes to him, and the complete Susana slashed through the sky.
The White Fang dagger went from being covered in dust to being able to hold it tightly again, guarding and being selfless, and one day it would be possible to cut out the same sword that his father had used back then.
Obito: "Kakashi, you must become Hokage."
Kai: "We agreed to compete a hundred times, but you don't want to die!"
Uchiha Itachi: "Captain Kakashi, how come you, a foreigner, can't be blinded by your Mangekyo Sharingan?"
Sasuke: "Kakashi-sensei, how come your Kirin can still bring divine power?"
Naruto: "Kakashi-sensei, why is it that your chakra is more than the Kyuubi's chakra??"
With the help of the secret scroll, Kakashi slowly became the strongest in the ninja world.
Reader comments
The emotional lines of the characters are designed more delicately, not in terms of love or anything else, but in various details, which are more in line with Kakashi's character design when his teammates just died. And the settings such as increasing proficiency and increasing the ability of lightning escape are also okay. The writing is okay, but the overall thing is a bit bland. Of course, it is much better than most of Tomato's mindless Naruto stories.
I don't know if it's my misunderstanding. In your recent chapters, one paragraph is too long, and you continue to write it even after the period ends. It's understandable if one paragraph is too short, but some details are all dragged together, and the content is small. It is obviously four or five thousand words, but the content is only two thousand words. I think you may have used it. AI polishing has increased the number of my words. I have also written novels and I know the horror of AI. Obviously I only wrote 500 words and asked AI to polish it. It can be as many as 1,000 words. Of course, I cannot guarantee that you must use AI, but I recommend using it less. If you use it too much, you will not be able to write. It is just a personal feeling. I hope the author can respond.
1. Fatal fault: not splitting paragraphs at all, just a big pile at the end
2. The sentence structure is straight and straightforward, with no ups and downs and no sharp edges in the writing style.
3. Loaded with details but no soul
It's gravel again, it's the Flying Thunder God, it's chakra consumption, it's sweat soaking through the robe,
The details are piled high, but the emotional tension and on-the-spot pressure are not felt. The plot elements are just mechanically listed one by one, which is a typical AI method of writing content.
4. Camera switching is stiff and unnatural
From the tailed beast jade explosion → Kakashi → Minato consumes chakra → the barrier blocks the tailed beast jade → recharge → Minato pauses,
Real people will use paragraphs, blank spaces, and short sentences to cut scenes; AI will just continue writing without making rhythm cuts.
Summary:
This paragraph is a standard AI pipeline-generated text, with long paragraphs without line breaks, flat flowing sentences, and piled details without a style of writing. It is not the way a real writer would write at all. (I used the bean bag to give the bean bag the part where Minato fights the Kyuubi, his comment.)
It's okay, but it feels like the tone has changed. It's not like the tone of the ninja world. It's too soft, like a layer of Hokage skin. It is best to write Naruto fanfics in the manga version.
Come on! I wish you will write more smoothly
Great card room fic, makes my carnival chair spin [laughs]
It's very good. The characters are delicately carved, which fits my imagination of Kakashi very well. This book makes me feel that the original Kakashi should be almost like this.
I don't know why, but I always feel that Uchiha Itachi's age is a bit wrong. After the Third Ninja War, Uchiha Itachi was already 4 years old. Why did he become 3 years old?
Great work, author. I read this as an all card.
It fits my impression and imagination of Kakashi. It's been a long time since I've seen an article about Kakashi's own strength.
Very good, the character setting is well established
Come on, you must persist
Good grass, worth seeing
Don't stop updating, I really like Kakashi
Don't be too messed up, it's pretty cool
@I don't want to be a tool man. Why doesn't the author update? [What]
It's really beautiful <(ºOº)>
Come and see, all of you! ! ! ! ! ! !
Teacher, don't give up (´ཫ`)
The writing is very good, without any fancy words, and uses simple line drawings to outline the delicate psychology. I hope the author can maintain this quality
The emotional lines of the characters are designed more delicately, not in terms of love or anything else, but in various details, which are more in line with Kakashi's character design when his teammates just died. And the settings such as increasing proficiency and increasing the ability of lightning escape are also okay. The writing is okay, but the overall thing is a bit bland. Of course, it is much better than most of Tomato's mindless Naruto stories. I don't know if it's my misunderstanding. In your recent chapters, one paragraph is too long, and you continue to write it even after the period ends. It's understandable if one paragraph is too short, but some details are all dragged together, and the content is small. It is obviously four or five thousand words, but the content is only two thousand words. I think you may have used it. AI polishing has increased the number of my words. I have also written novels and I know the horror of AI. Obviously I only wrote 500 words and asked AI to polish it. It can be as many as 1,000 words. Of course, I cannot guarantee that you must use AI, but I recommend using it less. If you use it too much, you will not be able to write. It is just a personal feeling. I hope the author can respond. 1. Fatal fault: not splitting paragraphs at all, just a big pile at the end 2. The sentence structure is straight and straightforward, with no ups and downs and no sharp edges in the writing style. 3. Loaded with details but no soul It's gravel again, it's the Flying Thunder God, it's chakra consumption, it's sweat soaking through the robe, The details are piled high, but the emotional tension and on-the-spot pressure are not felt. The plot elements are just mechanically listed one by one, which is a typical AI method of writing content. 4. Camera switching is stiff and unnatural From the tailed beast jade explosion → Kakashi → Minato consumes chakra → the barrier blocks the tailed beast jade → recharge → Minato pauses, Real people will use paragraphs, blank spaces, and short sentences to cut scenes; AI will just continue writing without making rhythm cuts. Summary: This paragraph is a standard AI pipeline-generated text, with long paragraphs without line breaks, flat flowing sentences, and piled details without a style of writing. It is not the way a real writer would write at all. (I used the bean bag to give the bean bag the part where Minato fights the Kyuubi, his comment.)
It's okay, but it feels like the tone has changed. It's not like the tone of the ninja world. It's too soft, like a layer of Hokage skin. It is best to write Naruto fanfics in the manga version. Come on! I wish you will write more smoothly
Great card room fic, makes my carnival chair spin [laughs]
It's very good. The characters are delicately carved, which fits my imagination of Kakashi very well. This book makes me feel that the original Kakashi should be almost like this.
I don't know why, but I always feel that Uchiha Itachi's age is a bit wrong. After the Third Ninja War, Uchiha Itachi was already 4 years old. Why did he become 3 years old?
Great work, author. I read this as an all card.
It fits my impression and imagination of Kakashi. It's been a long time since I've seen an article about Kakashi's own strength.
Very good, the character setting is well established
Come on, you must persist
Good grass, worth seeing
Don't stop updating, I really like Kakashi
Don't be too messed up, it's pretty cool
@I don't want to be a tool man. Why doesn't the author update? [What]
It's really beautiful <(ºOº)> Come and see, all of you! ! ! ! ! ! ! Teacher, don't give up (´ཫ`)
The writing is very good, without any fancy words, and uses simple line drawings to outline the delicate psychology. I hope the author can maintain this quality